Guest
Q: Who is the "The bright white-haired woman" exactly!?
A: She's a girl, not a woman (edited). And I am unwilling to give out her identity.
Guest
Q: Wouldn't he already be disqualified for using an illegal item!?
A: While that may be true, the Rating Games have been known to be imperfect with some matches, both in the past and present. One example was when Diodora used Ophis' snake during his match with Seekvaira.
For this chapter, Naruto will go by Hiro Yoko. Also, the reason why I picked this name is because Hiro can mean either abundant, generous, tolerant, and/or prosperous. Yoko has several meanings ending with child, one of them meaning sunny, child. So for Naruto, Hiro Yoko means "prosperous sunny child"
Maki's Promise List
1. Go camping (Done)
2. Try out a bikini (Done)
3. Go to an amusement park (Done)
4. Go to space
5. Go sing karaoke
6. Meet Kaito's family
7. Order the Royal Sovereign Burger at Burger Queen (Done)
8. Go to a beach
9. Learn how to dance (In progress)
10. Visit a zoo
11. Hike in the mountains
12. Scuba diving
13. Seeing the Milky Way in a clear night sky (Done)
14. Wing-suit flying
15. Spelunking
16. Watch 2001: A Space Odyssey
Need 4 more for the list. Do this for Maki!
Still need suggestions for missions Naruto did for Sirzechs that involve assassination, elimination, preventing something big from happening, bodyguard duty, rescuing an important target, and more. This all happens during the six weeks before Oolacile and the end of Chapter 11 before post-credits. These missions will also show up after Issei crashed the wedding so suggestions, please.
I'll also take suggestions for contracts Naruto has to do. Ones I have in mind are:
1. Bartender
2. Tutor
3. Hunting buddy
4. Teacher's assistant
5. Ajuka's assistant
6. A mascot for a birthday party
7. Pianist
Last thing: I made a poll for Naruto of the 458th Universe, NOT FIREBRAND. This is VERY important. Mainly it's whether Naruto gets it on with a few before settling down for one (main) girl or the same thing without the getting it on part. As teens/men, we tend to either fool around with other girls like a bachelor or stay single and finally find that one special person.
For Naruto of the 458th Universe, he will have girls interested in him so it's very important I get these votes, mainly so he does not look like that fuck Makoto from School Days. We all know about fuck Makoto and what happened to him so yeah.
Overall, it's about whether he plays the bachelor and gets it on before deciding to stop and be responsible or a reserved person who saves himself for that one special person. This is very important and every vote counts. You'll find the poll on my profile page.
OP2: ViViD DESiRE by Eri Kitamura
Friday (5/6)
Agares Mansion
"They...lost?" said Seekvaira.
"Yes..." Ange tells them how Rias gave up the match so Issei could live, the Pawn receiving a harsh beating from the Phenex King himself before the Gremory King stepped in. While Naruto's match was going on, Ange had sent her butterfly familiar to record Rias' Rating Game. Everything went well for Rias' Peerage until Yubelluna used the Phoenix Tears. When Naruto saw how Ravel Phenex bragged about the strength of the Phenex Peerage and how they were destined to win every Rating Game, he clenched his teeth in anger.
"How awful..." said Kotomi.
"Are we really going to this guy's engagement party?" Naruto asked his King.
"I'm afraid so...Don't let this get you down Naruto. I'm sure...I'm sure Rias' Peerage will pull through." This didn't help Naruto feel better, who wanted to go over to Riser and challenge him and his peerage.
"Just put up with it, Naruto," said Maki. "It sucks to not be able to act for someone else's sake, but we can't make it our business, no matter how bad it is. That is a Gremory business, not ours." After clenching his fists for a good 5 seconds, Naruto calms down.
"Very well..." Resting a hand on his shoulder, Scáthach assures him that everything will be fine and to try and relax. After all, he won his match against Hazama.
Riser and Rias' Engagement Party
Entering the large hall, Naruto is surprised to see so many Devils gathered for this event. Naruto had donned a black mask shaped like a fox and black hair in order to hide his identity. Looking around, he saw Koneko, Yuuto, and Akeno hanging together as Seekvaira and the other peerage members entered as well.
"There's a lot of high-class devils here..."
"The one engaged to Riser IS the little sister of Sirzechs after all," Seekvaira adds. "I'll go and chat with a few people. Why don't you mingle with some of the guests here "Hiro?"
"I'll try..." Seekvaira gives Naruto a smile before she and the others go around and mingle. With a sigh, Naruto goes over to the punch bowl. Making his way there, he sees Konoko, who was wearing a pink dress that came with a sash that was held together by a pink-red rose. Picking up the ladle, Naruto pours himself a drink.
"Huge party huh?"
"It is, isn't it?" said Koneko. "Though if things happened differently, this party wouldn't have happened." Naruto agreed with her as he sipped his drink.
"To be honest, Riser, his sister, and Queen, they were pretty much bullies." Koneko takes a sip from her glass before telling Naruto, "If I could, I would cook them into fried chicken."
"I'd pay to see that...Despite the odds, you did well for your first Rating Game. Don't forget that..." Koneko thanks Naruto, who smiles at her. Before the Agares Rook could ask Koneko for a dance, Maki, wearing a red sade gown, walks up to him and asked him to dance with her. "Me? Why?"
"Just come on..." Maki grabs Naruto's hand and drags him to the dance floor. To Naruto's surprise, Maki didn't step on his toes for the first 10 seconds. Usually, it'd take about 5 seconds. Now she was not making any mistakes.
"Several guys asked me to dance with them and I turned them down since I wanted to show you my progress," Maki informed her fellow peerage member.
"Is that so? Well, I must say, you're doing very well with not stepping on my feet, Harumaki. Guess that means you no longer need to practice dancing, huh?"
"Yes, and I can finally cross that off my list." Maki turns red when Naruto tells her she looked nice in the red dress she was wearing. "Irisviel picked it for me," she told him as she looked away from the blond. Feeling someone tap his shoulder, Naruto turns to see Seekvaira asking for a dance. Looking back at Maki, he saw her give him the okay since she only wanted the one dance before leaving the floor. Now dancing with Seekvaira, he asked her where Riser was.
"Probably waiting to see Rias in the dress he had his maids prepare for her," Seekvaira assumes.
"I guess he wants to make an appearance alongside her..." Seekvaira wraps her arms around Naruto's neck as she told him to wrap his arms around her waist and slow dance with her. "How are you holding up?"
"Pretty good so far..."
"Glad to hear it...I'm glad you didn't die in your match..."
"I'm glad I didn't as well."
"Promise me you won't do something like that again."
"I will try not to." Seekvaira smiles as they finished their dance and decide to take a small break. As Naruto was about to sit down, he overheard Ravel talking about her brother, Riser.
"My incredibly talented brother won himself a bride by demolishing the Gremorys. Of course, I had no doubt he was going to win from the beginning, but he had to keep it close so it wasn't a complete bore." Hearing this, Naruto got angry as he decides to give Ravel a piece of his mind. Before he could, he's stopped by Scáthach, who was wearing a formal purple dress.
"Master?"
"Hiro, look at Rias' peerage." Turning to his left, he saw Akeno, Koneko, and Yuuto in high spirits. Hearing Akeno tell Sona how it wasn't close from being over for them and Rias surprised Naruto, who was left wondering what exactly was putting them in high spirits.
"We'll get another shot at them, I'm sure. Only next time, we'll be ready for their tricks."
"Yeah, screw those d-bags..."
"You see? They're not willing to cave in to defeat. They still have hope that they can help their King, even if things seem bad for Rias now. If you were to interfere, it won't help them grow or show their King they're strong enough to support and help her. That is why we don't interfere with other peerage's troubles, so they can grow themselves." Understanding, Naruto backs off before thanking Scáthach.
"It's what I do...If you are able...How do I look?" Turning red, Naruto told his Master she was sexy and that if he was old enough, he'd want to date her if. "Really..."
"Really..." said Naruto as he turned away, red in the face. Leaning her mouth towards the Rook's left ear, she whispered to him, "If you ever have the courage to, in the future, and if you ask nicely...I may let you have your way with me," before she kissed his cheek, both surprising and startling Naruto as he turned to her, feeling the cheek she kissed him on.
"Have fun, Hiro." Scáthach gives Naruto a playful smile before walking away.
"Holy FUCK you have to tap that! She just gave you an invitation."
"Yeah...totally," said Naruto, still processing what just happened. After he said that, he immediately turns to his right to see Riser arrive with Rias as the Phenex King announced their engagement. Following this, Naruto and the other guests turned to see Issei barge in, his left arm revealing his Boosted Gear.
"Huh, I was wondering where he was," said Infernus as Naruto smiled at Issei's arrival.
"Makes me wonder if he was waiting behind that door to make a grand appearance."
"Who do you think you are, boy!?" yelled an angry Riser.
"I am Issei Hyoudou, and I'm here to bring Rias Gremory back where she belongs. No one is going to take anything from her that she doesn't want to give!" yelled the Gremory Pawn, making Rias blush in the process.
"How dare you!" yelled Riser.
"Seriously, is this guy mental?" asked Ravel, with Naruto telling her Issei wasn't mental, but simply had balls, annoying her. While he couldn't interfere, he could at least talk some good about Issei. As Riser ordered the guards to seize Issei, Akeno, Koneko, and Yuuto jump in to help their fellow peerage member.
"It seems that I don't need to worry about them at all. They can handle this." Naruto thought to himself before deciding to have another glass of punch.
"Lord Riser, what is the meaning of this!?"
"It's just a little entertainment I prepared." To everyone's surprise, Sirzechs shows himself, with Grayfia at his side. Sirzechs tells Riser how underwhelmed he felt from watching his performance and how he (Riser) was nearly beaten, despite the Gremory Peerage's inexperience, before suggesting he fights Issei in a 1-on-1 match to settle things once and for all.
With the 1-on-1 match being approved of by both Issei and Riser, the two were sent to a colosseum that was surrounded by several chess pieces made out of stone. Once the battle started, Issei revealed his new power, which will help him fight Riser, Balance Breaker: Scale Mail. Taking to the skies, Issei fires a Dragon Shot at Riser, who quickly avoids it as the attack destroyed one of the stone chess pieces. Issei appears from behind the Phenex King and prepares to throw a punch, only to missed and crash into one of the stone chess pieces.
"I've never seen speed and power like this! Who do you think you are, Hyoudou!?"
"Please, I can do better."
"Infernus, shut up and watch the match." Infernus simply sighed as he and his host watched the fight, Naruto pouring in his third glass of punch.
Taking to the skies again, Issei and Riser's fists clash before the power behind them, pushed them back, with the Pawn crashing into the ground below. Getting up once again, Issei flies towards Riser and managed to punch him in the face, the Phenex King punching him back as well. Though the attack looked ineffective, Riser felt a burning sensation on his right cheek.
Looking closely, Naruto noticed Issei was holding a cross necklace belonging to Asia. The Agares Rook concludes that Issei sacrificed his left arm in order to hold it and receive the power needed to stand up to Riser. Before he could go for another attack, Issei's Balance Breaker expires, the armor fading away as Issei lost his footing and fell on his stomach.
"Ooooh so close..."
"Infernus!"
"Fine, I'll be quiet. Wow, that chick has a nice ass," said Infernus, directing the comment towards Xuelan.
Riser holds Issei up by his shirt as he told the Pawn the fight was over. However, Issei, not willing to give up, takes out a bottle of holy water and, after boosting its effectiveness, burns a part of Riser's face with it, preventing him from regenerating. While his body was immortal, Riser's psyche wasn't invulnerable. Focusing his aura at a single point, it being his left hand, Issei finished the fight by punching the Phenex King square in the chest. Riser falls to his knees, coughing blood as he did so. Before Issei goes for another punch, Ravel flies in and tells Issei to not hurt her brother. Seeing as how Riser was unable to continue fighting, Issei was declared the winner by Sirzechs.
"And the battle is won..." Naruto smiles to himself as Seekvaira came at him from behind and wrapped her left arm around him, smiling and constantly poking at his right cheek with her right pointing finger.
"See? You had nothing to worry about." Naruto nervously smiled as she said that.
"Now that Rias' marriage to Riser has been settled by her Pawn, we can properly celebrate your victory. How would you like to celebrate it?"
"Hmmm...Can you get your father on the phone?"
[Music Start]
[STUDYxSTUDY by StylipS]
Agares Mansion
Courtyard
Everyone (Naruto, Seekvaira, Mr. Agares, Seekvaira's Peerage, Illya, Akame, Chelsea, Kotomi, Fujino, Shino, Shizune, and Chitose) smiled to themselves as they tried Akame's wagyu beef sandwiches. Mr. Agares comments on the sauce Akame made from scratch, telling the girl her cooking must be magic if the sauce helps compliment the meat and the bread.
"So good!" said Illya. Irisviel smiled as she agreed with her daughter.
"Thanks for doing this for us, Akame," said Pekoyama. Akame blushed at the compliment, telling her she was willing to help her brother with whatever he needed. Pekoyama pats Akame on the head, making the girl turn cherry red.
"If you don't mind me asking, Naruto, what are we celebrating?" asked Shino. Smiling, he told her Seekvaira won "a very important game". "Must've been very intense."
"Yeah...it was." As Shino goes over to talk to over to Illya, Naruto received a call from Jiraiya. "Hello?"
"Hey Naruto, how have you been?" Naruto says he was doing well, telling him Shizune, Akame, and Chelsea were doing okay, he made a lot of friends, and he won in a fight. "Wish I could've seen that... I'm in Florida right now, having breakfast. I just called to check up and...I miss you, Akame, and Chelsea."
"Miss you too you perverted fart." Jiraiya chuckled to himself, telling Naruto to have a good night before hanging up.
Namikaze Residence
After several weeks of hard work, Naruto and Shizune completely finish fixing the Black 1972 Ford Torino. As Shizune puts the tools away, she turned to see Naruto fast asleep. Smiling to herself, she helps Naruto get into bed before closing his bedroom door shut.
[Music End]
Saturday (5/7)
Getting up, Naruto found out he overslept and had 30 minutes to get to Saturday class. Lucky for him, Shizune had offered to drive him to the academy, using the car they finished last night. To her surprise, Naruto allows her to drive him.
"This car is nice, huh Naruto?" asked Shizune as she drove the blond to the academy.
"Yeah...Thanks for offering to drive me."
"You're welcome...son." Naruto had a look of surprise when she called him her son. Naruto couldn't help but smile to himself as he looked out of the window. "So when will you call me Mom?"
"Still not there yet," said Naruto, with Shizune smiling to herself as she focused driving. Stopping at the front of the academy, Shizune tells Naruto to have a good day, as he gets out of the car, before telling the blond she loved him.
"Yeah, I know." Shizune waves goodbye to the blond before driving away.
Night
Tokyo, Japan
"Those steaks were great," said Naruto as he and Joichi made their way to the train station. "I should take Shino there next time."
"You definitely should...Hey Naruto?"
"Hm?" Looking around, Joichi finds an alley for him and his friend to enter, telling the blond to follow him. "Umm, okay." After making sure no one was around, Naruto asked his friend what he needed.
"Well...you see...last night things got really weird for me...This morning was even weirder, especially when I brushed my teeth and took a shower."
"Have you told your parents about this? I'm sure that, whatever it is, they can help-" Joichi tells him he hasn't told them since it's not something they can understand.
"I don't know how to tell you this but...I think it's better if I show you."
"Show me what?" asked around, Joichi finds an empty can and hands it to Naruto before walking a good distance away from him. "I need you to throw that can at me. As hard as you can."
"What? Why?" Joichi tells Naruto to just do it since it'll explain everything. While unsure, Naruto decides to listen to Joichi and throws the can at him. To the Agares Rook's surprise, an ethereal red hand appears in front of Joichi and knocks it away with a punch. "Joichi, you-"
"I know, bizarre huh?" After thinking about it a bit, Naruto transforms into Firebrand in front of his friend, shocking him.
"Not that bizarre, JoJo..."
TO BE CONTINUED?
Post Credits
Sunday (6/5)
Several weeks later
Akashiya Residence
Moka, Kokoa, and Archer, each carrying three bags of groceries, walk into their home before taking off their shoes.
"I can't wait to prepare dinner for tonight," said a happy Moka.
"Moka, what do you plan to make with all this?" asked a curious Archer.
"It's a special brisket recipe that I've been preparing for a very long while. My father's mother used to make it for him. I can't wait to see him try it once it's-" Before she can finish, Moka, Kokoa, and Archer are startled by the unexpected appearance of a mysterious robed male. The three drop their bags and get ready to fight. To their surprise, the person in front of them was a wounded Keito Kotomine, who had used a teleportation spell to get to Japan.
"This isn't my sister's...Dammit, I must have messed up the spell when Seryu shot me..." Coughing blood, Keito drops to the floor. Struggling to get up, he said, "They're going after the sword fragments...They're...I have to warn them now before...before..." After losing a lot of blood, Keito's eyelids slowly begin to get heavy.
"Kokoa, get the medical supplies in the cabinet, and some rope from the garage."
"But-"
"Just do it," Moka demands. Kokoa, not saying a word, runs off to get the medical supplies and the rope. "You're going to be fine, okay?"
"Have to...save "her."
"Her? You mean your sister?" asked Moka.
"No, it's...it's..." Keito couldn't muster enough strength to keep himself awake as his eyes close halfway.
"Hey, stay with me. Tell me who's in trouble!" Following this, Keito lost consciousness. Turning to Archer, she and her Servant wondered what was going on. The only thing they knew was that an unknown danger was approaching.
Yeah, the final chapter of this part was short. I mean, all that was left to do was have Issei save Rias. I would've had Naruto go help them, but I opted not to since, if he did, Issei wouldn't have his moment to shine. Plus, Naruto can't always fight other people's battles. It was a Gremory peerage problem and he only needed to watch and bear witness to their resolve.
Joichi now has a Stand. Now he's a part of this bizarre world. With Naruto revealing he was Firebrand, Joichi has become another person, outside of Seekvaira's Peerage, who knows that Naruto's a Devil.
Keito, what happened to you? It seems that things are becoming more complicated. How he ended up like that will be revealed in the next chapter, though after Deleted/Extended Extras Part 4. Things are going down, and a confrontation is imminent.
Seriously, should I have Moka and Naruto find out about each other's true natures? Eventually, I want to do an arc involving Moka, but I'm afraid of her becoming irrelevant, and I don't like making other characters irrelevant.
