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Note- I've already pretty much written the rest of the story.

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--Hospital---

Lorelei ran through the hospital doors. Running down the hallway that seemed like it would never end. Then, finally reached the front desk.

"I'm...Lorelai Gilmore...you...called me my daughter...Rory Gilmore is here" Lorelai told the women, just barely catching her breath.

The woman looks down at the clip board. Scrolling down the list. Until she came to Rory's name." Yes the doctors are inspecting you I'll call to tell them you'll here"

"Why where is she? Is she alright" Lorelei was pretty sure everything wasn't.

"I don't know the doctors will have to tell you that please take a seat" The nurse nodding to the seats in the back of Lorelai.

"But.." Lorelai decided not fight.


The light came closer and brighter then it had before long. Luke appeared next to Lorelei. "What's wrong?" Luke questioned Lorelei. "Rory" Lorelei responded. Rory tried as second time to speak but nothing came out. Lorelei touched her hand." Rory Hun please answer"

Finally the doctor came over. Lorelai quickly got up.

You're Lorelai Gilmore?" He asked.

"Yes how's my daughter ?"

"Come with me" He lead Lorelai into an empty waiting room and gestured for her to take a seat.

"This isn't easy to say but your daughter was in a car accident and she not doing to well"

"Meaning..." Lorelai looked serious.

"She's in a coma"

"Omgosh, I can't believe this is happen." Shaking her head back and fourth" No, No, No"

We're doing everything we can for her"

"Can. I... See her Please" Lorelai could barely talk.

"Yes"


The voices echoed. Lorelei and Luke take Rory's hand and then disappeared. Rory wanted to yell, shout for her mother to come back. She couldn't control herself, she was helpless. A flash a yellow light moved around someone appeared again.

Lorelai walked in the room by a sight that made her almost fall down. The room was spinning has she came further in. Rory was there lying on the bed with a breathing tube down in her throat. Machines hooked up to her. Her eyes complete shut, no expression on her face. Just Blank and pale. She didn't deserve this. Lorelei went over and grabbed her hand.

"I'll leave you alone. Then we'll have to talk later" The doctor left.

"Rory (crying) Rory? This isn't happening? Rory? Dammit Rory! How the hell did this happen? No!" Lorelei Collapsed next to Rory in the bed tying not to touch anything. "I knew I shouldn't have left you with him. I knew it, this wasn't supposed to happen"

More in next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. Leave comments

(Note fixed I just downloaded Microsoft word.)