DISCLAIMER: I OWN CHIDORI AND I THINK SHE'S AN EVIL BITCH FROM HELL... HINT
SHE'S RELATED TO SOMEONE WHO I THINK IS IN HELL... CLUE WORD: MIXED BREED
FREAK!
WARNING: SOME VIOLENCE AND CUSSING AND YEAH YOU GET THE PICTURE.
Thank you: SHADOW REAPER: You have NO idea how happy that made me. I feel so honored to be the first person that you reviewed for. I mean I never really thought my writing was that good, but thanx 2 u I've gained some more confidence.
Fat Zombie: I hope you enjoy my story. AnimeSoapFantasy: I'm glad that you like my fic, and hope that you continue to read. Raziel: Thanks for your kind words, I really appreciate hearing your comments. Rikku-Chan: I JUST HAVE TO SAY THAT I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS! YOU SOUND SO CHIPPER AND SWEET JUST LIKE RIKKU. Heh I'm actually like that too! Thanks, I too think that Chidori is evil, don't worry... she won't last long... BOGGART: You are another reviewer that I must say I love very much. God I'm really thinking a/b having Paine tie up her kid outside like Dennis the Menace, just instead of a dog a Chocobo! MEOW: Thanks a lot, I'll try that. I'm trying to get the PERFECT ENDING... It's so hard and I'm lazy... I saw it in Japanese, but I have to see it in English. Haha, but the Bevelle thing was the main thing I'm having difficulty on. Thanx, and enjoy this chapter.
ON WITH THE SHOW!
Gippal left soon after Rikku did, with the biggest smile pasted on his face. He seemed to look like he got laid. (LOL almost did). He walked through the sand towards the site of Home. He'd decided that he wanted to talk to Cid about possibly getting his blessing to marry Rikku. When he got there he saw a girl with long ebony hair, in tight boy shorts and a tube top. She smiled sweetly at him and walked towards him.
"Hey there good looking." Chidori practically purred out.
"Chidori go away!" Gippal said.
"Fine I will, but I must tell you something before I leave." She said as he began to walk towards Cid's office.
"Thought you might wanna know that you won't see your little Al Bhed Princess anytime soon." She said with a smirk on her face. She then threw down a grenade and disappeared before Gippal could lunge at her.
He couldn't believe the bitch. He'd done something to Rikku. Running fast, he climbed the stairs to Cid's office.
"Cid Rikku's been kidnapped!" Gippal shouted, arms braced against the doorframe.
"What do you mean?!" He bellowed out.
"Remember awhile ago when I told you about Chidori?" he asked.
"Yeah your stalker." Cid said.
"She's back and took Rikku!" he said.
Cid turned to the intercom and bellowed into it. "Everyone look out for a girl with blue eyes, and long ebony hair. She's taken my little girl! Do whatever you can to get her!" he screamed.
"I'm going to go look for her." Gippal said.
After he left Home, he went in search for Rikku. He thought about that hole in the Thunder Plains. He thought that she once told him to meet him once there. Why not try.
Down in a damp dark cave, Chidori glared at the helpless Rikku chained to the wall next to some unconscious form.
"What do you want from me Chidori?" Rikku spat out.
"I've already told you, I want Gippal, and I want you to die for taking him from me." She said before kicking the young girl.
"Well I'm sorry to break the news to you, but Gippal absolutely loathes your guts." Rikku said.
"Silence!" Chidori screeched out before punching her in the gut.
"If you want to live, you'll behave." She said before leaving.
What was she going to do? She was stuck to a wall without her garment grid. She felt so alone.
"Are you alright miss Rikku?" a familiar voice came from beside her.
Turning her head, Rikku saw that the person who was passed out was now awake. He had green eyes just like hers and very yellow blond hair down to his shoulders. He was incredibly tan and wore a yellow jacket open, showing off his chest.
"Rin is that really you?" Rikku said.
"Yes it is." He said.
"Why are you here?" she asked, totally confused about this situation.
"I really don't know." He said. He opened his mouth to say more when Chidori came in.
"Well I see that you're awake now. We can get on with the experiment." She said as she held up two syringes of some mystery drug that glowed pink and purple. (~ if you've ever watched Ai Yori Aoshi then you'll know that I'm making Tina's mystery booze the mystery drug... hehehehe!~) Chidori stepped up to Rikku and brought with her two sets of eye wear with clear red visors. Connected to them were wires leading to a huge computer system.
"Don't worry my dear, this won't hurt to much." Chidori said before injecting the drug into Rikku's arm. She then put the contraption on her head and pressed a button on the side of it. The visor began to glow, and Rikku just went lax as the machine did some weird thing to her.
"What have you done to her?" Rin shouted at the evil whore.
"I'm hypnotizing her to forget Gippal and to fall in love with you." She said simply before she injected Rin with the same mysterious substance. She shoved the helmet on his head and heard him speak once more. "I swear you won't get away with this you evil whore!" before going into the state Rikku was in.
In Bevelle a Cid was informing the others of Rikku's kidnap.
"I want to go out and search for her." Yuna said as she wiped the tears from her face.
"Me too Cid." Paine said.
"I don't think so." Lulu said with a frown on her face.
"What's wrong Lulu?" Yuna asked.
"You two aren't in any condition to go out an battle! You don't want to risk your child's life do you?" Lulu said.
"I guess you're right." Paine said in a defeated voice.
"Don't worry, we've already got Gippal looking for her." Tidus said.
"Well we need more to go search for her." Cid said.
"I've told Buddy, Shinra, Brother, and Nhadala to go scan for her in the Celsius." Cid told them. "But we need more." He said before he covered his baldhead with his hands.
"I'll go and help." Jhect said.
"So will I. Rikku is like another daughter." Braska said.
"I'll go too." Auron said.
"Great, you three can go together, but we'll still need more. I don't think Gippal is safe off on his own." Cid said.
Tidus turned his head to look at Baralai. They made eye contact and nodded. "Baralai and I will go out and search for Gippal." Tidus said.
"Hey I wanna help too ya know!" Wakka said, feeling left out. (~Poor tubby wubby!~)
"Fine then you three go try and find Gippal. No matter what, I want that girl captured." Cid said.
The men went off with their weapons in hand. Cid had told Tidus' group that they might wanna go look for Gippal in the Thunder Plains. He then told Braska and the others to go to mount Gagazet and inform Kimarhi of the trouble, and that he needs to keep an eye out. They set off ready for anything.
Gippal reached the giant hole in the Thunder Plains. Taking a deep breath he took the plunge into the dark pit. When he landed, he began to take the path down. He saw a red light glowing in the distance and decided to go look there. He quietly crept down the to it and peered in. He saw Chidori at the computer typing some strange code in. He then spotted Rin and Rikku chained to the wall with some strange helmet on.
"Chidori what the hell do you think you're doing to them?" he said as he barged in.
"Oh nothing, just playing the part of cupid." She said with innocent eyes.
"What do you mean?" he asked.
"Well ask them yourself, they're waking up now." She said as she watched him walk over to the two. While he did that, she took out a large syringe and filled it to the top with her mind-altering drug.
"Rikku! Rin! Are you guys okay?" Gippal asked frantically.
"We're just fine!" Rikku said as she looked lovingly at Rin.
"Yes we're just fine, Chidori was just showing us a new game." He said.
"Oh yes Gippal I must ask you to do me a favor." She said.
"Anything." He said.
"Please tell my father not to worry about me. Tell him that the next time I talk to him that Rin and I will be wed." she said as she turned to gaze at Rin, that man that she was in "love" with. (~I KNOW I KNOW U HATE CHIDORI SO DO I, BUT I NEED SOMETHING TO MAKE THE STORY MORE SUSPENSEFUL!~)
Turning swiftly, Gippal planned to march right up to the bitch and beat the crap out of her, but was greeted by her face to face, with a needle in the gut. Nausea hit him fast, and made him woozy. He heard her cackle and say, "You'll always be mine forever Gippal." Before he passed out completely.
A/N: I'm leaving it there, and I will tell you this, CHIDORI WILL BE DEFEATED! I'm tired now, and I know I'm a fast up-dater. I love to write, and it makes me happy when people enjoy it. I'll post ch. 9 up maybe on Tuesday. It depends b/c Monday's seem to be hectic around school so I might be packed w/ homework, so it might be a 2 day process to write ch. 9. Enjoy and I know I'm gonna hear a lot about your hate for Chidori, and I agree, but this story needed a villain. C'mon or it'd end up wrapping up at ch. 16 or something, so it's good cuz then I can make it long long long!. Hope you like, LYL! ~ Teri Berri Baumer ~ (berri isn't my real middle name. LOL)
Thank you: SHADOW REAPER: You have NO idea how happy that made me. I feel so honored to be the first person that you reviewed for. I mean I never really thought my writing was that good, but thanx 2 u I've gained some more confidence.
Fat Zombie: I hope you enjoy my story. AnimeSoapFantasy: I'm glad that you like my fic, and hope that you continue to read. Raziel: Thanks for your kind words, I really appreciate hearing your comments. Rikku-Chan: I JUST HAVE TO SAY THAT I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS! YOU SOUND SO CHIPPER AND SWEET JUST LIKE RIKKU. Heh I'm actually like that too! Thanks, I too think that Chidori is evil, don't worry... she won't last long... BOGGART: You are another reviewer that I must say I love very much. God I'm really thinking a/b having Paine tie up her kid outside like Dennis the Menace, just instead of a dog a Chocobo! MEOW: Thanks a lot, I'll try that. I'm trying to get the PERFECT ENDING... It's so hard and I'm lazy... I saw it in Japanese, but I have to see it in English. Haha, but the Bevelle thing was the main thing I'm having difficulty on. Thanx, and enjoy this chapter.
ON WITH THE SHOW!
Gippal left soon after Rikku did, with the biggest smile pasted on his face. He seemed to look like he got laid. (LOL almost did). He walked through the sand towards the site of Home. He'd decided that he wanted to talk to Cid about possibly getting his blessing to marry Rikku. When he got there he saw a girl with long ebony hair, in tight boy shorts and a tube top. She smiled sweetly at him and walked towards him.
"Hey there good looking." Chidori practically purred out.
"Chidori go away!" Gippal said.
"Fine I will, but I must tell you something before I leave." She said as he began to walk towards Cid's office.
"Thought you might wanna know that you won't see your little Al Bhed Princess anytime soon." She said with a smirk on her face. She then threw down a grenade and disappeared before Gippal could lunge at her.
He couldn't believe the bitch. He'd done something to Rikku. Running fast, he climbed the stairs to Cid's office.
"Cid Rikku's been kidnapped!" Gippal shouted, arms braced against the doorframe.
"What do you mean?!" He bellowed out.
"Remember awhile ago when I told you about Chidori?" he asked.
"Yeah your stalker." Cid said.
"She's back and took Rikku!" he said.
Cid turned to the intercom and bellowed into it. "Everyone look out for a girl with blue eyes, and long ebony hair. She's taken my little girl! Do whatever you can to get her!" he screamed.
"I'm going to go look for her." Gippal said.
After he left Home, he went in search for Rikku. He thought about that hole in the Thunder Plains. He thought that she once told him to meet him once there. Why not try.
Down in a damp dark cave, Chidori glared at the helpless Rikku chained to the wall next to some unconscious form.
"What do you want from me Chidori?" Rikku spat out.
"I've already told you, I want Gippal, and I want you to die for taking him from me." She said before kicking the young girl.
"Well I'm sorry to break the news to you, but Gippal absolutely loathes your guts." Rikku said.
"Silence!" Chidori screeched out before punching her in the gut.
"If you want to live, you'll behave." She said before leaving.
What was she going to do? She was stuck to a wall without her garment grid. She felt so alone.
"Are you alright miss Rikku?" a familiar voice came from beside her.
Turning her head, Rikku saw that the person who was passed out was now awake. He had green eyes just like hers and very yellow blond hair down to his shoulders. He was incredibly tan and wore a yellow jacket open, showing off his chest.
"Rin is that really you?" Rikku said.
"Yes it is." He said.
"Why are you here?" she asked, totally confused about this situation.
"I really don't know." He said. He opened his mouth to say more when Chidori came in.
"Well I see that you're awake now. We can get on with the experiment." She said as she held up two syringes of some mystery drug that glowed pink and purple. (~ if you've ever watched Ai Yori Aoshi then you'll know that I'm making Tina's mystery booze the mystery drug... hehehehe!~) Chidori stepped up to Rikku and brought with her two sets of eye wear with clear red visors. Connected to them were wires leading to a huge computer system.
"Don't worry my dear, this won't hurt to much." Chidori said before injecting the drug into Rikku's arm. She then put the contraption on her head and pressed a button on the side of it. The visor began to glow, and Rikku just went lax as the machine did some weird thing to her.
"What have you done to her?" Rin shouted at the evil whore.
"I'm hypnotizing her to forget Gippal and to fall in love with you." She said simply before she injected Rin with the same mysterious substance. She shoved the helmet on his head and heard him speak once more. "I swear you won't get away with this you evil whore!" before going into the state Rikku was in.
In Bevelle a Cid was informing the others of Rikku's kidnap.
"I want to go out and search for her." Yuna said as she wiped the tears from her face.
"Me too Cid." Paine said.
"I don't think so." Lulu said with a frown on her face.
"What's wrong Lulu?" Yuna asked.
"You two aren't in any condition to go out an battle! You don't want to risk your child's life do you?" Lulu said.
"I guess you're right." Paine said in a defeated voice.
"Don't worry, we've already got Gippal looking for her." Tidus said.
"Well we need more to go search for her." Cid said.
"I've told Buddy, Shinra, Brother, and Nhadala to go scan for her in the Celsius." Cid told them. "But we need more." He said before he covered his baldhead with his hands.
"I'll go and help." Jhect said.
"So will I. Rikku is like another daughter." Braska said.
"I'll go too." Auron said.
"Great, you three can go together, but we'll still need more. I don't think Gippal is safe off on his own." Cid said.
Tidus turned his head to look at Baralai. They made eye contact and nodded. "Baralai and I will go out and search for Gippal." Tidus said.
"Hey I wanna help too ya know!" Wakka said, feeling left out. (~Poor tubby wubby!~)
"Fine then you three go try and find Gippal. No matter what, I want that girl captured." Cid said.
The men went off with their weapons in hand. Cid had told Tidus' group that they might wanna go look for Gippal in the Thunder Plains. He then told Braska and the others to go to mount Gagazet and inform Kimarhi of the trouble, and that he needs to keep an eye out. They set off ready for anything.
Gippal reached the giant hole in the Thunder Plains. Taking a deep breath he took the plunge into the dark pit. When he landed, he began to take the path down. He saw a red light glowing in the distance and decided to go look there. He quietly crept down the to it and peered in. He saw Chidori at the computer typing some strange code in. He then spotted Rin and Rikku chained to the wall with some strange helmet on.
"Chidori what the hell do you think you're doing to them?" he said as he barged in.
"Oh nothing, just playing the part of cupid." She said with innocent eyes.
"What do you mean?" he asked.
"Well ask them yourself, they're waking up now." She said as she watched him walk over to the two. While he did that, she took out a large syringe and filled it to the top with her mind-altering drug.
"Rikku! Rin! Are you guys okay?" Gippal asked frantically.
"We're just fine!" Rikku said as she looked lovingly at Rin.
"Yes we're just fine, Chidori was just showing us a new game." He said.
"Oh yes Gippal I must ask you to do me a favor." She said.
"Anything." He said.
"Please tell my father not to worry about me. Tell him that the next time I talk to him that Rin and I will be wed." she said as she turned to gaze at Rin, that man that she was in "love" with. (~I KNOW I KNOW U HATE CHIDORI SO DO I, BUT I NEED SOMETHING TO MAKE THE STORY MORE SUSPENSEFUL!~)
Turning swiftly, Gippal planned to march right up to the bitch and beat the crap out of her, but was greeted by her face to face, with a needle in the gut. Nausea hit him fast, and made him woozy. He heard her cackle and say, "You'll always be mine forever Gippal." Before he passed out completely.
A/N: I'm leaving it there, and I will tell you this, CHIDORI WILL BE DEFEATED! I'm tired now, and I know I'm a fast up-dater. I love to write, and it makes me happy when people enjoy it. I'll post ch. 9 up maybe on Tuesday. It depends b/c Monday's seem to be hectic around school so I might be packed w/ homework, so it might be a 2 day process to write ch. 9. Enjoy and I know I'm gonna hear a lot about your hate for Chidori, and I agree, but this story needed a villain. C'mon or it'd end up wrapping up at ch. 16 or something, so it's good cuz then I can make it long long long!. Hope you like, LYL! ~ Teri Berri Baumer ~ (berri isn't my real middle name. LOL)
