It was brought to my attention that my paragraphs are a little squished together. And I just figured out the problem. ' Since the beginning of the WDLR I have been using WordPad because my MSword would freeze every time I opened the program. (Plus WordPad doesn't have a spell check -- ' ) But my dad put Windows XP in the computer this week so I have MSword working again. So I opened my last chapter to see where I left off & the paragraphs were really tight together, meaning: I'd make it look double-spaced in WordPad, but didn't read it double-spaced. So that problem is now going to be fixed, along with a lot of the spelling problems. So thank (you know who you are) for pointing that out to me. & if any of you other reviewers want to send me your opinions & if I'm having problems in WDLR (like the spacing problem) then I'd love to hear from you guys (and girls )
Oh I'm on winter break right now so I'm going to be getting at least 2 chapters up a week if I'm not busy. (I can't stay in the basement on the computer all day long cause my grandparents will complain & tell my parents. But I wish I could)
Doomo arigato gozaimasu- Thank you very much.
Ne?- when used at the end of a sentence it means no? or right? (example: beautiful day, ne? beautiful day, no? (or right?) )
Hai- Yes
Chapter 19
Once Kurome had calmed down Kurama let go of her and stood up.
"I hope she gets better." He thought. Then he left, returning to his room to finish packing.
A little time later
Kurama slung the duffle bag over his shoulder. He exited his room, and went into Kurome's room again.
He walked over to her bed, she seemed so peaceful and innocent laying there.
"I'll come to visit after school." He whispered to her before turning and leaving again.
He left again, and went to the living room. Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Yukina were sitting and talking about random things.
"What are you leaving already?" Yusuke asked Kurama.
"Yes, I need to get home to mother before it gets to late, because I have school tomorrow. Should you be getting back as well?" Kurama replied.
Yusuke sweat dropped and kept his mouth shut. Kuwabara and Yukina said their goodbyes.
"Oh, Yukina, would you mind if I stopped by after school to visit…" he began to ask.
"Certainly, and I'll keep an eye on Kurome while you're gone." She replied.
"Doomo arigato gozaimasu." He thanked before leaving.
Yea, I'm having a writer's block so: The next day, in the afternoon
Kurama walked up the steps to Genkai's temple. Yukina was outside sweeping.
"Oh, good afternoon Kurama." She greeted.
"Good after noon Yukina, how are you today?" Kurama asked.
"I'm good, and you?" the koorime replied.
"Likewise, it's a beautiful day, ne?"
"Hai, I thought the weather was perfect to sweep outside today."
"Oh and Kurome seems to be doing fine today. She woke up around lunch time, but didn't have an appetite." Yukina added.
"Thank you, I shall check on her now." Kurama replied.
Then he went inside and headed to Kurome's room. She was very pale, more than she normally was. Kurama placed his hand on her forehead.
'She doesn't have a fever, I guess those herbs from yesterday did the job.' Kurama thought to himself.
…Another block, so some time later.
Kurama left Kurome's room and found Yukina in the living room.
"Would you like some tea?" she offered.
"Yes, thank you." Kurama replied as he sat down at the table. Yukina poured him a cup, and handed it to him. He gave another 'thanks' and took a sip.
"This is very good, what is in it?" Kurama asked.
"I put a lemon in it. I was talking with Kurome earlier and we got to the topic of favorite tea flavors, and she said that this was her favorite, so I decided to try it." Yukina explained.
After awhile Kurama left, and returned home.
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Yea, I'm having too many writers' blocks, so I'm going to stop for today. I'll update again in a day or two, depends on what I have to do during the days or if my mom is gone to work, cause I can't really use the computer if she's sleeping because it'll wake her up since it's so close to her room. Lemon flavored tea does sound good. So ja ne!
