Disclaimer: I do not own draconians or the DragonLance-books.
Claimer: I own Grimize the Baaz and Tissal Riversong.
Perjantai 1.4.2005, aine:
(Chapter 5)
Make hay while the sun shines (Tao kun rauta on kuumaa)
Three months after Grimize and Tissal had met, they both lived in the draconian camp. Grimize and the other draconian warriors battled with the Solamnic knights regularly, and Tissal being a kender didn't make things easier with her quick fingers and inborn ability to "find" things.
For the first two weeks Tissal slept in the forest, after which, when the draconians started searching for the lost things from Tissal's pouches regularly, she moved into the camp.
Tissal was looking for Grimize. She found him sitting on a rock in the forest, taking care of his guard duty.
He looked like he needed a friendly gesture. Tissal went and gave him a bottle of ale from one of her pouches.
"You divine creature, you're the best friend that I've ever had."
(102 words)
My Teacher's Comment: Excellent work, Johanna! And the story continues... perhaps you are going to publish it later...?
I wonder if my teacher has completelyunderstood the meaning of the word fanfiction...?
Review Responses:
Chole Asterion - I'm glad to see you liked this story. I also love draconians. And I love other reptiles too. If I could meet a draconian/draconians, I'd put it/them in my pocket, so that I could carry it/them everywhere with me and show it/them tomy friends. I like draconians especially because I think they are a lot like the Finnish people. But thatis only my opinion. I like kenders too, because they are so curious, just like me. I'm just glad that I have more self-control than an average kender has. Because I like both kenders and draconians, it was only natural for me to write a kender and a draconian to become friends. I think they in a way balance each other. And I promise to you, when the summer vacation begins, I'm going to write a more sensible story about Grimize and Tissal.
Author Note: I have already uploaded chapters 6 and 7. So, review everybody, and you'll get more.
