Disclaimer: I do not own draconians or the DragonLance-books.
Claimer: I own Grimize the Baaz and Tissal Riversong.
Perjantai 15.4.2005, aine:
(Chapter 7)
Spare the rod and spoil the child (Joka vitsaa säästää se lastaan vihaa)
"Grimize, why are you so worried if your finger is going to be all right?"
"The physician released me from my duties until I can fight again. And I can't fight for days. Usually I would do something else to be useful, like help in the kitchen, but with this finger I can't even peel potatoes. Most worried I'm about Torment's reaction."
"But the physician wrote a medical-vacation permission to you…"
"Torment might think I did this to my finger on purpose. Do you know what he did to my last permission? He tore it and then he gave me a medical-vacation by beating me up. He's one of those sadistic guys who like to keep discipline by beating up people."
(101 words)
My Teacher's Comment: No mistakes pointed out.
Review Responses:
Margolo Blu - Chole Asterion was a good name, why did you change it? Oh well, that's not my concern.
BHS - Thanks, I didn't notice that earlier. I will. Keep reviewing.
Queen Ghidorah - He is.
Flamedramon - Don't worry, I'm writing the fifth chapter of Godzilla's bride. These have been school work, and until I finish Godzilla's bride, I'm not writing anything else.
Author Note: Ooh, bad Torment, I'm not liking you very much right now. Anyway, I havewritten chapter 8 and I found a name forthe Bozak commander.No suggestions were posted, butI found agood name by myself, you know. Or I think it's a good name. It just came to me like a lightning bolt from a clear, blue sky. So, everybody please review, andyou'll get to see thename.
