Autho Note: This is the last proverb-essay, which I wrote in the school and I returned it so late that my teacher didn't have time to comment it. From now on I don't have any word limits for these stories (yippee). Even though I no longer need to have a proverb as the title, I want you Readers to suggest a proverb for the next chapter's title! Now keep reading and you'll see what name I gave to the Bozak commander.
Disclaimer: I do not own draconians or the DragonLance-books.
Claimer: I own Grimize the Baaz and Tissal Riversong.
English:
Perjantai 29.4.2005, aine:
(Chapter 8)
Prevention is better than cure (Parempi katsoa kuin katua)
Grimize was standing in the forest just outside of the camp, worrying about what Torment might do to him when Tissal came running to him: "Hey Grim! You don't need to worry about Torment anymore. I spoke to the Bozak commander, what was his name again? And he called all the commanding officers, including Torment, for a meeting and claimed you under his personal command until the physician allows you to fight. Torment can't touch you. The commander said that I can help you."
"Wow, thanks. The commander's name is Bolt. HOW did you get him to do that and WHY?"
"When negotiating with a tough draconian like Bolt, it's best to be polite and to have booze as a bribe. And it's faster to KEEP you out of the sickbay than to GET you out of there."
(109 words)
My Teacher's Comment: No comment. :) Hahhaa!
Review Responses:
BHS - I checked your fic and reviewed it. Keep writing and keep reviewing my fic.
Queen Ghidorah - Yes, he's aptly named (though I had to check the word 'apt' from an on-line dictionary (its linkcan now be found in my Author profile!)before I understood what you were talking about). If you read the first chapter carefully, you'll be able to see the connection between Torment's name and personality also in there.
Author Note: I wonder if Tissal is just being friendly or is there something more in this. Readers, who says that Tissal and Grimize are dealing with more than just friendship in here? Not that your opinion on that matter would make any difference... REVIEW!