I wrote this for a contest about a year ago. It actually made it to the top eight!


Down from Heaven came God's only Son,

Born as a child to save everyone.

Jesus grew up, like us, as a kid,

Yet not a single bad sin he did.

When He was older he started preaching,

Many troubled people he was reaching.

12 chosen men traveled with God's Son,

Even though sometimes it wasn't fun.

He took the sick and made them well,

Jesus helped up those who fell.

Yet, many people hated Jesus,

Just because of true things he teaches.

Jesus was cruelly whipped and bruised,

When it seemed He had nothing to lose

God's Son was crucified,

An ugly death he died.

He was perfect but died in my place,

A crown of sharp thorns upon his face.

God's Son was buried in a tomb,

What they didn't know was that soon

Our Lord would come to life again,

To save everybody from sin.

He made this perfect sacrifice

So we could live in paradise.

To be able to go up into heaven,

You have to accept the gift He has given.

You have to pray directly to Him,

Ask Him to forgive all of your sin.

I hope some sweet day to see you there,

While with our Lord Jesus in the air.


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