-1Ok so chapter 1 sucked I know, but hopefully this will help.
R&R
Zolo pushed Luffy down onto the bed and took off Luffy's shirt. Zolo ran his fingers across the rubber boy's body, before undoing the zipper. He pulled them down just far enough where he could see the beginning of Luffy's black pubes. Zolo bent down to nibble on Luffy's nipple when he opened his eyes. "Maaan, it always ends there." Zolo said getting out of bed. He had started to drool over Luffy after the day they had stopped at Usopp's island and they had taken the group bath thing, and he had seen Luffy undress. Zolo stretched and got up; he pulled on some boxers and pulled on his ants before going to get something to eat.
"Hey Zolo!" Luffy said bouncing out of nowhere and got just a few inches away from Zolo. Zolo felt a slight bulge forming so he pushed Luffy away and sat down. Luffy sat next to him and started eating some pancakes. Zolo slowly ate some pancakes as he watched Luffy. Luffy was only wearing his briefs and his shirt while sitting there. Zolo felt the bulge get bigger as he stared at Luffy's underwear. "Hey Zolo, what 'cha looking at?" Luffy said looking around.
"Ermm. Nothing!" Zolo said getting up and turning away from Luffy. He walked back to his room and went to take a cold shower. He turned the water on in one of the stalls. It hit him like a dagger. He shivered but felt much better. He was in the middle of scrubbing when the shower next to him turned on. He looked over half hoping to see Luffy. Instead Sanji stood there showering. "Damn." Zolo said under his breath.
Later though Luffy wanted him to go to the city with him to pick up some groceries. Zolo agreed and followed the rubber boy out the door. After a few hours they were heading back to the ship, when Luffy took a detour down an ally. He turned to look at Zolo. "Umm. Zolo thanks for coming with me." Luffy said reaching out and planting a kiss on Solo's lips. "Well see ya back at the ship." Luffy said bounding off to the ship as if nothing happened. Zolo touched his lips with a finger and smirked before heading back.
Hopefully this ones a little better.
