Bluesilver: Okays... So I'm continuing... Arigato to the four who reviewed! I shouldn't really counted you Sylvia... You are my friend... ano... oh well... So I know some people say you shouldn't write review replys on here... But I don't know if thats tru or not... I don't care I'll do it any way...


Yukifunfan1234: -waves widely- Hallos! I know it's you... Ano... Sumimasen for confuzzling you... I didn't mean to... ano... heres your update! And sankyou for reviewing!
Zed of Vesper: -shrugs- Yeah... Your right, it does depend on what follows the first chappie... -grins- As someone I know said 'If grammer and spelling where people, I would be killing them!'... ok... so I don't exactly kill them, but my spelling is pretty faint worthy...ano... I would like someone to beta read... I contacted you but no responce... Are you in the land of the Zed of Vesper? Arigato for reviewing!
Ice Dragon: Hellos! Sankyou very nice for reviewing! -cocks head to the side- ano... Was it funny?... I wouldn't remember... you'd think the authoress of her own storie would remember what the heck she wrote herself, huh? -whispers- I'm a forgetful person by nature! -waves- Here's your update!
Fireworks: Hiyas! Thaks so much of reviewing! I'll try and keep it up, but everbody has to be patient! Was the first chappie that good? I thought I was a little on the boring side... Thankie again! P.s. I love your name! Fireworks rock!

Random funny quotes of the day:

I brake for scholars, priests, and no apparent reason.

MOVE! I'm trying to speed!

Keep smiling. It makes people wonder what your up to.

Forgive your enemies. It messes with their heads!


"Talking"
'Thoughts'
(Just little notes from me. Also used for translations and little notes.)
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She seemed to be floating, her mind was fuzzy and disorented. Soft voices zoomed over her senses, and she could faintly feel something covering her body. She groaned and trying to rub her forhead as a headache slamed into recognition. To her suprise though, her hand seemed to be pushed back down. Her lids felt like zor'ac(a), and seemed to be unwilling to open.but light was shining through her eye lids, so the thought of her vision returning comforted her slightly. She wondered where she was, and hoped that the strangers hadn't brought her back to where ever the where from.

The voices became more coharent and she could make out the voice of the boy Naruto, and to her relief his voice was quieter than the last time. "I think you where right Naruto. Oh, I hope I didn't use enough to make her sleep for any longer. I want to know why she attacked us." It was a girls voice, that would have made her wince had her eyeslids been able to move. It was high and whiney, reminding her of the di'pats(b) in the village when they had found boys in the village to flirt with. As her senses became sharper she could tell there were more than just the two in the room. There were two others in the room, both farther away but their eyes trained to her body, she could feel them practicly burning a hole into her.

"Yeah me too, Sakura-chan. And belive me, she's gunna get it for hurting you." Naruto said, she could detect different emotions in his voice, althought the dominet one was anger. So he seemed to like this girl, she wondered how strong the boy was exactly. 'So this is the girls voice. It seems to fit her.' She tried to shift as the feelings came to her back muscles, and she could feel her arms again. "Oh, Naruto. It was just a prick. No thing for you to get mad at the girl for." Her thoughts jumbled to a stop. The girl was not mad at her for hurting her? "B-But Sakura-chan! That weird knife thingy sliced right across the shoulder!" She would have winced if her eyes would have opened. One, because the Naruto boys voice was loud again, two because she felt bad about hurting what seemed to be a medic.

Medics on Avoran were sacred peoples, for they knew the arts of healing. And the healing arts were important to the Cha'hora for her army. Hurting one of themwould be a serious crime to pay for, and she hoped it would not be the same for where ever she was now. The thinkness of sleep dissapeared from her eyes and she opened them now, but instantly shut them as her headache became worse from lights that had shown brightly down on her. She groaned and heard the sound of thudding feet and something shuckshucking to her right. "Naruto!" Sakura's voice was another high pitched whine.

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Third person
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Naruto grabbed Sakura around the waist as soon as the girl laying on the table showed a sign of conscieneness. Sasuke and Sai, who had been gaurding the door, jumped into action and grabbed the straps that held the girl down and tightened them. As soon as they pulled them down the girl's eyes flashed open and she grunted in pain. She looked at them and then her eyes widened, she looked back and forth bettween the two. Her head suddeny fell back into the pillow she had been laying it on preaviously.

Naruto's eyebrow popped up. He let go of Sakuras waist and walked tentivly over to the girl, leaning over her head. Sai abruptly pulled him back by the back of his shirt with a mocking smile. "Well. It seems your penis is the same size as your brain."(I'm sorry if I offend you Sylvia, I just saw the op. and it seemed so... Sai.) Naruto scowled at him and was about to open his mouth for a rebuke when Sakura stocked over to him and smacked him in the head. "Ooooowwwwww, what was that for Sakura-chan?" He whined. Sakura was scowling at Naruto, "How in the world can you be so stupid? She may have faked that faint!" She rolled her eyes and pulled her hands up to her chest in a defensive position, and pushed some chakra to them in case the girl was faking.

She leaned over the girl carefuly, with her arms over her chest just in case, and checked her brain waves. She raised an eyebrow in confusion. "She's out like a light!" She said disbelivingly. Naruto sniggered, "Wow, looks like your not as handsom as you thought Sai-teme!" Sakura rolled her eyes and walked over to the small counter and grabbed the clip board that sat there. She wrote a couple things and yawned widely. "Ah! Sorry," She apologised "I must not have slept to well last night." Sai cracked the grin he had been known to have developed after he had been in Konoha after a while. It was more mocking than happy but it still showed amusment.

"Really, Forehead? Hm. I thought you were more ugly than usual." Sakura rolled her eyes, she had gotten used to Sai's prods and jabs, she set the clipboard back down and walked to the door. She turned back to them before exiting. "I'm going home. See you guys tomarrow, and don't stay too long. Sasuke, I'm expeting you at the training fields at 10, Naruto," She said Narutos name strongly so the blond boy would pay attention, she started again as soon as his eyes were looking into her own, "I want you to set that alarm clock of yours. No late night at Ichimaru's alright?" Naruto gave a nervous laugh and nodded. Sakura grined finally after breaking the connection and left. Sai grabbed her elbow though, just as she was two thirds of the way out. "What? No 'I expect you' for me?" He asked.

Sakura sighed, "Shut up." She said and brushed his hand off her elbow. She slammed the door behind her in Sai's face. "Touchy touchy." He muttered. Naruto glared at Sai now. Sai looked at him with his ever preasent blank face. Naruto growled, "Don't give me that face! Why are you coming onto Sakura-chan now Sai-teme?" He demanded. Sai shrugged, "It's fun to see you and pretty boy over there steam." Saskue rolled his eyes, watching Naruto do just as Sai had said he would. The blond splurted various bomb words(c) directed to the Sasuke look-a-like(d). He took his position back at the door and watched Naruto half-amusidly as he still sputtered and now shook his fist at Sai.

"Calm down Dobe. If you've forgotten we are the designated gaurds of this girl. So do what you where assigned to do, gaurd." Naruto stopped, and turned to Sasuke with a slightly annoyed look.(e) "But-" "Gaurding." Naruto pouted and reluctently walked to the door dropping down to the floor and crossing his arms and legs. "Aw. Look at that. An animal sitting at it's masters feet." Sai goaded Naruto, and by the way the blond boy was simmering it seemed to be working. Sasuke sighed and closed his eyes, blocking Sai's vulgar mouth from his mind and began meditating.

Naruto glared at Sai one last time and closed his eyes. Sai grinned triumphantly to himself, and took the rolling chair next to the girls bed where Sakura had been sitting before she left.

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8 hours later
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The girl yawned and tryed to turn on the bed she was sleeping on only to find she was still straped down. 'It... It was not a dream? But it is impossible to have two of the same(f)!' She looked around to see the room was empty. No loud mouthed blond, no squeeky voiced girl, no look a like black haired boys. She wriggled on the bed, trying to disconcern if she still had any means of protection. She sighed when she felt no farmiliar tip of a kit'sar or il'nor(g). "So your awake... Again." The girl's breath hitched in her throught. She hadn't sensed anyone, her head turned in the ways the bed allowed it to and she still couldn't find the source of the voice.

"Tsunade was right. Kotetsu-san, you may drop the genjutsu." There was a shuffling to her left, and another voice said "Kai.". The image of the chair with strange rounded rocks connected to the ends wavered. Before her eyes that part of the strange square room twisted and changed. The man she remembered smacking with her head was sitting on the end of her bed, and another boy stood behind the strange rock-chair. His right hand was held in front of his chest, his pointer and middle fingers raised and the rest of his hand fisted. A glowing power was radiating from his body, and seemed to seep from his very skin.

The boy, whom she assumed was Kotetsu as there were no other people in the room, nodded to the silver haired man and left. He stared at he with a practicly umblinking eye, she wondered why he hid the other, his legs were crossed and a book sat in his lap. "Me'raho he?" She rasped. She swallowed after, trying to moisten her throught, it hurt to talk with a dry throught. Kakashi sighed and said "I'm sorry. I can't understand you." She cocked her head to the side, Avoranian was a universal language on Ketrad. How could someone not know it? 'Of course. I am where they are from.' She thought. They didn't know Avoran, or at least she was sure they weren't aware of the Avoranian village.

"Do you know what I am saying?" He asked. She nodded, and kept her eyes trained to him in a slightly courious look. He sighed, obvously not beliving her. "I knew this was going to be another brain dead one. Just like the other two." He sighed. 'Brain dead!' She thought furiously, her body instinctivly reactied to the well known insult. Kakashi jumped off the bed just as where he had been sitting was ripped and slightly shredded. His eye crinkled in amusment, this girl was much like the two people they had caught wandering in the streets six months ago. She seethed and glowered at Kakashi nastily, her teeth barred. He found it interesting how her canines were sharp and longer than a normal human's, although he didn't know if she was really human or not yet.

"I was just testing. Calm down." He said. The girl gave him a harder glare but it left soon, replaced by one of slight wonder as she looked around the room. She spoke again, but this time it wasn't the strage language that she had been speaking before. Now it was Japanese, sloppy and stuttered, but a language he could understand in the least. "W-whe-ere ah-m aye?" It was rather to enunciated, and Kakashi tryed not to chuckle at how young it sounded. "You are in the Hidden Leaf Village of Konoha. If I may, how do you know Japanese? You do not sound like you use it very much." She sighed.

"A-aye d-do no-ot. E-eht is-s pa-ahrt o-ohf m-meyh l-lah-lagh," She stuttered over the word, trying to get over her heavy accent "Language?" Kakashi supplied. She nodded. "Ma-ayh w-wh-ords ahre ph-phar-t oh-fh yhors." She drew in a deep breath (I do not. It is part of my language. My words(used in substatute of language) are part of yours.) Kakashis eye sparkled in couriousity now. Her language was part of Japanese? But it didn't seem even remotely close. "So you can speak Japanese, even though you have never been here before?" She nodded. "Ih-n the Cha'hora's arh-mee w-whee had t-hoo n-oah how t-hoo chon-feeuse o-ow-ur eh-nemees."(In the Cha'hora's army we had to know how to confuse our enemies) Kakashi nodded. "I suppose this Cha'hora is an important person?"

She looked at him slightly horrified and confused, but the look was gone within an instant. "Sa'na. She eh-s the-" She paused for a couple seconds and then resumed. "ah-s yh-oo mhi-t ch-all ohne, ahy cheif-thess."(Sa'na. She is the as you might call one, a chieftess.) Kakashi assumed 'Sa'na' ment yes from where this girl was from. He nodded and then asked, "What is your name? We never got a chance to ask." The girl thought for a moment "Eh-t doos nh-ot rha-eely mh-ove eeh-n t-hoo yh-oor wh-oordz. Bh-ut ohne mh-it kh-all mhe Razan." (it does not really move(translate)into your words. But one might call me Razan.) Kakashi nodded again, "I'm Kakashi. The four who were in here before were-" "Sa-ku-ra, Nah-roo-to, ah-nd Sah-s-khay. Bh-ut aye dh-oo nh-ot no-ah his loo-kh ay laykh's nah-m." (Sakura, Naruto, and Sasuke. But I do not know his look-a-like's name.)

"How did you know their names already?" Kakashi asked "Wh-ehn wee fh-urst ehn-couh-ntered each oh-ther. Yh-ou s-haid their nh-ames."(When we firts encountered each other you said their names.) "Ah."


Blue: Ano... I accedentally erased that last half!
Sumimasen people! Oh jeez how in the world did I do that! -runs around insanley trying to find 2nd chapter draft- Gah! I'm so so so so so so so so so so sooooooooo SORRY! I'll post this for now and post the rest of it in a couple days! Oh I'm so stupid! Somebody should tell he people it's stupid for login's to time out! jeez jeez jeez...

Sorry if Razan seems a little mary-suey-ish. She's not upposed to. I just like the idea of a language made up of other languages, it's kinda the Atlantis: The movie thing. BUT! I'd didn't make her speak perfect japanese. Yeah, I settled on them being in Japan. It kinda made it easier... anywayz, I'll put a profile of Razan under here and the little letter notes.


Profile for: Razan

Hair: Dark blue. Left side is to her shoulder, and the right side of her hair is in many small braids to her waist.Weight: About 120-135 maybe. Remember! Muscle weighs MORE than fat. ALWAYS remember that.
Eyes: Dark blue-brown
Build: Lean, semi-muscle, broad shoulders.
Hieght: 5'6-7
Weapons: A large swerveing-shaped sword. Kit'sar's, which are small knifes that are dagger-like, and Il'nor's, which are small straw-like and about the lenth of a pencil and made of metal.
Other: Has three small rusty-blue dots above her right eyebrow. Left ear is pierced three times, right ear four. Wears silver colored chain around neck, and a singal bangle on each ankle, about 1 inch wide looks like black hematite. A cloud gray colored light weight circlet with a stone in the middle that looks like red hematite crystal.(I love hematite jewlery...)

a:Zor'ac: a strong metal on Ketrad. It's found in rich veins around the Avoranian village. Mostly used to make weapons.
b:di'pats: whores (gee, I'm blunt!)
c:Bomb words: Slang for cuss words. I like that slang word...
d:In the manga Sai looks a lot like Sasuke. With short hair a vulgar mouth and a sexy stomach...hehe...XD
e:-shrugs- I just kinda picture Saskue and Naruto getting alone better after the Orochimaru incedent. Normally Naruto would prolly go off on Sasuke or something...
f:hehe... She thinks Sai and Sasuke are twins... In th village they don't have twins very much, so it's kinda considered a mirical...
g:Look at the weapons on Razan's profile, duh.

Again I'll try and finish the rest of this hapter and post it in a couple days, as another chappie though. It'll probably be a short one though, maybe 1000 words or 1200 at the max. And again I'm so so so sorry! I should have checked to see how many days I had been logged in before... Or written this on a word pad doc. before I saved everything. Er... TRYED to save everything... SUMIMASEN!