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ABHI(requesting tone): daya... (daya stopped) plzz aaj nahi..
but was cut by daya as
DAYA(straight tone): koshish karuga...
and without waiting for the reply he just moved out of the house with fast steps...
ABHI after giving an angry look to others just moved to his room and banged the door hardly which made shreya and tarika to shiver with scare...
MID NIGHT AT THE TERRACE
a man was standing near the ralling and was looking at the dark sky... a voice disturbed his silent talk with the stars...
VOICE: daya!
DAYA(dreaming tone): hmm... (without turning) tum soye nai ABHI?
ABHI: nai vo neend nai...(smelled something and said) daya tum ne aj phir...
DAYA(cut him): haan... pee li maine... thodi...
ABHI(angry/moved towards him): daya kyu yrr... mene mana kiya tha na tumhe? phir kyu..
DAYA(lost tone): mene bhi toh kaha tha na abhi... ki mai koshish karuga.. (dreamily) waada thodi na kiya tha... (sadly)waadein krna toh chhod diya yrr maine... kyuki vo waadein baad mei mai hi tod deta hu.. (laugh in pain, coming in present)... nahi hua mujhse control... aj bhi... nai hua...
ABHI(getting his pain's reason): daya! tu khush nai h kya? aj ye award?
DAYA(smiled in pain): mai khush hu abhi... bohot khush hu...
ABHI(not convinced): tumhari zubaan, chehre se mel nai kha rhi h yrr...
DAYA(explaining tone): mai sach bol rha hu yr... mai wakai khush hu... yeh sochke khush hu ki agar vo aj yaha hoti toh kitni khush hoti? haina..
then silence took its way b/w them... after sometime abhi broke the silence as
ABHI: nai bhul paye na tum use?
DAYA: kese bhul jau yr?... kese (looked into his eyes) vo sb kuch toh nahi... lekin bohot kuch thi mere liye... bachpan k dost the hum teeno... aur aj ye title... ye bhi toh usi ki demand thi na.. vo mujhe is title k sath dekhna chahti thi... yr... yeh title toh mere paas h lekin vo pata ni kahan...
ABHI(angry but composed): agar itna pyaar krte the.. toh vo sb kyu kiya... haan? (angry)aur ye shadi krke tum jante ho na, ki tumne 3 zindagiyaa brbad ki h... aur khudko ye dard dekr kya mila tumhe haan? kyu kiya tumne ye sb... kyu?
DAYA(calm): kuch baatein samay k sath bhul hi jani chahiye abhijeet... tum bhul jao vo sb... vese bhi 8 saal ho gaye h...
ABHI(loud tone): nahi bhul skta main daya... tujhe ese tadapte huye nai dekh skta main... aur aj toh mai janke hi rhuga ki esi kya majburi thi tumhari... jisse itna pyaar krte the tum use yun ek din mei thukra diya... aur ye shadi ka bhoot kyu sawar ho gaya tumpe? jaanke rahuga mai aaj... (held daya's shoulder and turned him towards himself)(now angry and curious) batao muje... daya batao... (jerk him badly) bolo...
Daya(still calm): nahi boluga main abhi... nahi boluga.. kyuki mai TUMHE (stressed tumhe) hurt nahi krna chahta... nahi dena chahta tumhe guilt... (tired) kyu koshish kr rhe ho tum? thak jaoge yr.. jese mai thak gaya.. aur phir bhi nahi jaan paoge tum sach, kyuki mai hi nahi batana chahta tumhe... aur mere alawa sirf ek hi insaan bacha h jo iss bare mei jaanta hai... sirf ek..
before he could complete abhijit in anger just banged his wrist on the railing and shouted
Abhi(angry): thik h! nai batana h toh mat batao... lekin yaad rkhna daya.. bohot ho gaya tumhara ye natak... aur rhi baat sach ki toh vo mai khud hi pta laga lunga... pta laga lunga mai...
abhijeet after completing his statement immediately rushed out with fast steps and he even the house, got into his car and "flew" it as fast as he could... here daya just looked at the sky and one pair of tear again slipped down to his cheeks, he was feeling guilty somewhere coz he had hurt his buddy... his bhai... but some part of his selfish conscience was telling him that
Daya(thought): kyu nai smjhna chahta h vo? kyu? nahi iss baar vo galat h.. lekin main bhi kya karu? main bhi majboor hu kisi k haatho... bohot majboor...
On the other side abhijeet reached a place, from where the complete mumbai was visible to him... yes he was at Queen's necklace (marine drive)... the cold breeze were trying to melt his anger.. a bit...
Abhi(to himself): kyu? yaar.. kyu badal gaya daya tu?.. kyu apne iss (pointed to himself) bhai ko bhul gaya tu.. (teary) aj jo tune kaha usse mujhe ye pta chal gaya h ki vo wajah... mujhse judi hui h... aur is baar mai janke hi rhuga... (determined) agar mai hi vo wajah hu, jiske vajah se tujhe itne saare dard mile toh thik h jb tk mujhe sach nai pta chalta, tb tk tera bhai tujhse baat nahi krega... tujhse dur rahega... kyuki ab ye hi aakri tahrika h sach janne ka...
NEXT DAY
All were present in bureau working on their PCs but there was a blow of awkward silence.. a case was reported but was solved soon and all were about to leave... shreya had left with tarika... yes she never go with daya, as he was always late a bit and came with abhijeet... then breaking the silence
Daya(to abhi): abhijeet! (abhi didn't look, just hmmed) vo... mera kaam ho gaya h... tumhara ho gaya ho toh mai gadi nikalu? tum pohocho niche...
abhi without looking and without speaking anything just nodded... all were shocked with his such act as, always he used to resist and excuse to leave.. but today he just nodded... daya just shrugged his shoulders and left after giving a bit angry+dissapointed look to his buddy, who was much busy to ignore his frnd and staring the file resting in his hands... after daya left, he silently closed the file picked his belongings and left.. leaving everyone in suspicious and shocking expression...
IN QUALIS
daya tried to say something
Daya(guilty tone): abhi!... vo kal raat k liye sorry! vo.. mai.. sachme.. kal khudko... rok..
Abhi(looking out): mujhe.. is bare mei koi baat nahi krni...
Daya(questioning): kya hua kya h tumhe? haan? subh se dekh raha hu main.. sahi se baat tk nahi kr rhe ho tum.. (a little anger) kya chahte ho tum.. haan?
Abhi(cold tone): mai jo chahta hun.. vo tum bohot achche se jante ho...
Daya(straight tone): jo tum sunna chahte ho.. vo kabhi sun nahi paoge mere munh(mouth) se...
Abhi(anger composed tone): jb yehi jawab dena tha ... toh pucha hi kyu?
Daya(calming down himself and convincing tone): dekho abhijeet... un baaton ko boht saal ho gaye h.. mai tumhe yehi boluga ki tum vo sb bhul jao...
Abhi(laugh a little): tum bhul gaye daya? (daya turned his face to other side) jo tum khud nahi kr paye ho.. uski nasiyat mujhe na do, toh hi acha h...
Daya(hurt tone): kyu janna chahte ho tum... haan? (a bit loud) itne saalo mei toh tumne kabhi itni zid nahi ki... ab kyu kr rhe ho ye sb...
Abhi(anger): haan.. nahi pucha maine kabhi kyuki tumne muje kasam di thi... lekin ab mujhse aur nahi hoga, kyuki ab mai ye jaan gaya hun... ki jo kuch bhi hua tha uska karan MAI HU!.. (daya look at him with shock) kya soch rhe ho? mujhe kese pta? (daya nodded in no) are chhodo yr! kl tumhari baato se itna toh mai smjh hi gya tha...
Daya(stammering/but explaining): dekho.. a.. abhijeet.. je.. jesa tum soch rhe ho wesa... k.. kuch nahi h...
but abhi just turned his face to the other side and said
Abhi(hurt): tum nahi bhi bolte na, toh bhi mai smjh jata.. khair chhodo, ghar aa gya h..
Daya stopped the car and abhijeet without a word just moved out of the car, daya looked at him in hurt and guilt... tarika opened the door both of them entered with a serious face...
Tarika(serving them water): ap log fresh ho jaiye.. hum khana lga dete h.. (she said looking at shreya, who just entered from the kitchen with a tray)
Abhi(a bit rude and straight): nahi, tarika! vo muje bhook nahi h.. mai khana nahi khauga.. (he said this and drank water in one go)
tarika just looked at daya in confusion... and daya requested
Daya(requeting): abhijeet! khana toh kha lo! pls
abhijeet without looking at him just thought it to be good opportunity and shouted
Abhi(peak of his voice/angry): maine ek baar bola na! muje nahi khana!
"CRUNC!"
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