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The ring II
I walk towards Abby.I turn around every 5 seconds looking for him, he is Nowhere to be seen...I'm kind of scared now
"Abby? Have you seen Ray?"
"He's gone"
"Gone? Where?" I ask, I can't hide my fear anymore
"Home I guess...he said he was sick"
I run towards the door leaving everything I had to do behind.
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Ray's apartment.
"Ray!" I walk inside the dark living room. I got no answer to my yelling
"RAY!" I start crying...I can't stop the tears from falling, there's so much
Inside...I sit down on the couch, my head on my hands. crying.
I hear footsteps coming from towards me; I raise my head to find Ray standing
in front of me. I hug him immediately like I haven't seen him in years.
"I knew it" he whispers to my ear "I knew it was an engagement ring...I couldn't help it so I bought it for you, I thought that way you would realize I..."
"He never gave me one" I say interrupting his speech
"What?"
"Michael never gave me an engagement ring when he proposed" I look at the ring in my finger "and you...you did it...you gave me this even thought we were not together" I cry once more "I don't want to let it go"
"Then keep it...it's for you Neela" he wipe away my tears
"I can't...I can't do this to Michael."
He sighs "can you do this to me, then? Can you break my heart like this?" this is the first time I see real sadness in his eyes.
"Ray..." I can't finish what I'm gonna say because his lips are in mine. He kiss me with sweetness, tenderness. Something I never felt before, not even with Michael...
"I love you" he says as he breaks the kiss "I love you, Neela and I want to be with you so bad"
I cry even more "I love you too, Ray"
"Marry me." he says suddenly. I look at his eyes...he is not playing games.
"Ray..."
"we got the ring, the only thing missing here is the proposal...I'm asking you now." he bended on his knees "Neela. Would you marry me?"
I hesitate for a second, the smiles "yes...yes I'll marry you" he hugs me.
I was happy, really happy and I knew I was doing the right thing...I never felt so good in my life.
THE END!
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