Love Hina: Tsui ni

Satoru Narusegawa

Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina, all rights are reserved to Ken Akamatsu and I'm just a fan of the show, but I do own the character that I made Shinobu's love, but you'll have to wait to see what character I added to the cast.

Shinobu and Naru left the Hinata to go grocery shopping to replace all the food that Su had eaten. It had been a normal routine for Naru and during the summer, it seemed to be all that she did. Shinobu tagged along because she enjoyed being able to talk to Naru alone without all the noises of the other residents.
"Naru, school starts soon, and I need some advice," Shinobu said tilting her head down in embarrassment.
"Advice about what?" Naru asked grabbing a bag of chips off the top of the shelf, Shinobu looked up at Naru.
"I like someone who was in my class last year, how should act around him?" Shinobu asked, "I get nervous around him."
"Start with simple conversation," Naru replied, "get to know him and tell him about yourself." Naru dropped the bag into the cart, "when you think its time invite him for lunch or dinner, I'll help you win him over."
"Thank you," Shinobu said with a large amount of gratitude, "you've helped me a lot."

A black car pulled up to the Hinata Apartments, a young boy with midnight blue, shoulder length hair stepped out. He grabbed two bags and walked to the doors, he knocked twice with no answer. He turned the door handle, to his surprise it was left unlocked. He slowly opened the door, but it creaked just loud enough to attract Motoko's attention.
Motoko and Su turned to see him at the doorway and Motoko drew her sword. She stood up ready to fight the intruder as he got close and Su was just edging for a fight. Su got all her toys out of storage, including the toy tanks she used on Keitaro when he first arrived. The boy stood his ground and grabbed his black bag, which was next to the red one.
He pulled from his bag a six and a half foot bo staff, he grinned to Motoko. "It has been awhile since I fought such odds 2 to1, odds in opponents favor," he said with yet another grin. He pulled the staff, which was held with his left hand to his center. He stood calmly waiting for Motoko to begin the fight he tightly clenched the staff. He took a calm, cool breath before he pointed one of the tapered tips at Motoko.
Motoko ran towards the blue haired boy with the tip of her sword pointed at him. He impaled the staff into her stomach and watched the blood trail flow from her lips. Motoko fell to her knees slowly spitting up blood and weakened by the pain. He turned his head to see Su waiting for him; he looked to the floor to see little drops of blood trailed to Motoko lying motionless. The tip of his parted hair was drenched with blood, he pushed his hair out of the way with his hand to see an inch long cut across the top of his neck.
He saw the toy tanks in Su's direction; he walked slowly towards the tanks. He raised his staff with one end pointing down and the other up; he shoved the end into the nearest tank open tank. The sound of the exploding tank seemed to calm him, after about 10 minutes every tank was in ruins. He walked closer to her still clenching his darkened staff, still wanting a fight, with one blow to the back Su's head he had knocked her out cold.
"Who are you?" Motoko asked lying on the floor behind him grasping her sword and leaving a trail of blood behind her.
"Well, we'll find out soon won't we," he said, holding his staff at his right side leaving his mid section wide open for an attack.
"Why are you doing this?" Motoko asked trying to stand up to fight, she fell to her knees in failure. She gathered all of her strength and eventually stood up, he watched her movement carefully.
If I remember this correct you attacked me," he said "and I defended myself, and so you are the one at fault." Motoko ran forward with sword in hand and protecting her now tender mid section. He dropped down and swept with his staff, while she was on the ground he kicked the sword from her hands. He stepped behind awaiting her to sit up, she sat up and he knew he'd have to react fast.
He drew his arm back and threw all the power he had into this one final blow. When the staff made contact with the back of Motoko's head, Shinobu and Naru had just walked through the doorway. "MOTOKO!!" Shinobu screamed as she saw Motoko fall to the ground. He walked to Naru calmly, he knew that he was victorious and it was a great feeling to have defeated an enemy.
"How could do this?" Naru asked disappointed at him. "She was my friend, and now beat her half to death. Why?"
"SU!!" Shinobu screamed running to Su unconscious body on the floor, she stepped over the pieces on the floor.
"Another!" Naru said, "Why??"
"I was sent her by Mom, She's sick of dealing with me," he said, "I rang the doorbell, knocked on the door and no answer."
"So you came in," Naru said.
Then they attacked me," he said, "so I fought back." Motoko woke up and grabbed her sword; she stood to her feet and turned to Naru.
"Naru he is the enemy!!" Motoko said waiting to continue the fight, " we have to defeat him."
"Motoko, this is my younger brother," Naru said, "when he came he was looking for me."
"So this was all pointless!" Motoko said ticked off.
"Well yeah it was," Naru said, "Shinobu, come in here."
What do you want, Naru sempai?" Shinobu asked, she was eager to continue helping out Su until she woke up.
"This is." Naru said before she was interrupted.
"I already know who he is," Shinobu said, "he was in my class, I just didn't know that he was your brother."
"Hello, anyone here," a voice came from the doorway.
"I better talk to Keitaro before he sees this," Naru said running off to the entrance to meet up with Keitaro.
"Motoko, truce, no more fighting?" he asked not expecting anything.
"Sure," Motoko said still a little weak, "truce for now."
"You're Shinobu, right" he said.
"Yes," she said very nervous, so nervous that she began to blush bright red.

Author note: I'm sorry if this is sorta sloppy, this is my first post and I need to upgrade my computer soon. So if it takes awile for me to post you'll know why.