Hi, this is the first chapter of a poetry fanfic, I didn't write them specifically for teentitans, but I think a few of them work anyway. I am hoping to write a book of poetry, so constructive reviews or just plain nice reviews would be great :-D
Hope you like the first poem and I hope it doesn't suck.
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When the night air found her
Her slow and mournful tone
She's the one left standing here
Survivor, all alone
She opens her eyes gently
So not a tear's released
She can only pray that please
Her friends are left in peace
She takes her breath of frozen air
The child that fell afoul
Raised her head unto the skies
And from her lips a howl
A human in the wreckage
One thing she'd lest forget
A human standing, feared and frail
She'd finally paid her debt
It didn't take her long at all
To finally see the truth
The person standing sick and frail
Was her, the troubled youth
Her eyes plunged into pools of black
As fear fed on her heart
She left her body far behind
Her heart and soul did part
She'd smelt the flames and petrol
She'd sensed the death bomb strike
She'd felt a dead heart beat with hers
She'd seen her die with fright
The child saw death approaching
A sight of which had been
Predetermined by the man
Who'd created this scene
She heard a shriek from Earth within
Knew what it signified
Had the Earth had done this itself?
It's private suicide?
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Thanks for reading, tell me in a review if you want me to continue or not.
ARavensPoet