Well I'm starting a new piece of fan fiction. Enjoy.
Comatose
By Ghost Writer's Assistant
Disclaimer: I don't own Danny Phantom.
Prologue
It was just an average day at Casper High. Students filled the hallways. The bell rings signaling the start of class. Students run to there appropriate class rooms. Three teens are left in the hall as it clears. They are Samantha Manson, Tucker Foley and Danny Fenton.
"Where is it?" Sam asked as she looked around. There was nothing there but the air around her.
"I don't know?" Tucker explained as he followed Sam's gaze. He then looked over at his other friend, Danny.
Danny was looking for a place hide, so that he can change into his alter ego. 'Perfect' He said to himself as he went into a janitors closet. "Going Ghost!" He shouted, not loud enough for anyone, but the trio, to hear. Two blue rings appeared around his waist. One traveled up and the other traveled down. When they disappeared Danny Fenton was no more, Danny Phantom stood in his place.
He flew out of the closet and searched for the ghost that tripped his ghost sense. "Where is it?" Danny spoke out loud.
"Danny behind you!" Sam shouted as she saw the ghost materialized behind Danny.
Danny spun around and saw a ghost he never seen before. It was a ghost in a flowing dark blue cloak, he had blue skin and glowing deep red eyes.
A scream interrupted the eerie silence that followed the ghosts appearance. A late student was the source to the scream. The student ran to lever on the wall and pulled. The Fenton Ghost Alarm was know activated.
Students flowed out of the classrooms and ran for the exits. "Harry Potter and the Scorers Stone! Single file!" Mr. Lancer shouted over the panicking students.
The whole school was know empty. Only the trio and the new ghost remained.
"Who are you?" Danny asked as he took a battle stance. He was going to try and talk first, fight later.
Danny didn't get an answer.
The front doors of the school where knocked down by Danny's father Jack. "GHOST!" The fat man in an orange jumpsuit yelled. He was accompanied by his wife, Maddie, and there daughter Jazz shortly followed. Jazz wanted to make sure her parents didn't hurt her little brother.
"Mom, Dad, slow down!" Jazz shouted as she struggled to keep up with her parents.
Everyone turned and stared at the three approaching them.
"Say good-bye ghost kid!" A feminine voice shouted. It was none other than Valerie Grey. She on her hover sled and was armed with her ecto-gun she got curtsey of Vlad Masters, a.k.a. Vlad Plasmius.
"Oh I'm so scared." Danny whispered sarcastically.
Valerie aimed her ecto-gun at Danny, but before she could fire the mystery ghost shot a blast at her, he then did the same to everyone else. Only Danny remained unbound by ect0-plasmic restraints.
"Hey!" Danny yelled. "Leave them alone!" Danny fired an ecto-ray at the ghost, which was easily deflected.
Everyone who was bound watched the ghost fight.
The mystery ghost fired up a special kind of blast. Red appeared in both his hands. "Time to eliminate my only threat." The ghost said in a deep voice. He fired at Danny.
"Ahhhhh!" Danny screamed in agony as he was engulfed in the red ecto-plasmic blast.
"Danny!" Sam, Tucker and Jazz yelled.
Danny began to feel light headed. He felt woozy and had a major headache. He feel to the ground with a hard 'THUD'. He transformed back to Danny Fenton before he even hit he ground. He was now unconscious.
Jack, Maddie and Valerie gasped at the sight.
The mystery ghost put an evil smirk on. He then laughed evilly and faded away in an dark blue cloud of smoke. Laughing as he disappeared.
The restraints that had bounded the others disappeared. Sam was the first to run to Danny's side.
"Danny?" Sam shook Danny. Tears formed in her eyes.
Everyone else soon crowded around the fallen halfa.
"He's not breathing!" Sam shouted as she searched for a heat beat. She found a faint one, but it was fading fast. "We got to get him to a hospital!"
Jazz took out her cell phone and dialed 911.
"It's been two hours!" Sam protested to a nurse. "Why haven't you told us anything!"
"Dear as soon as I know anything I will tell you." The nurse stated in a clam, soothing voice.
Sam retreated to her spot next to Danny's family. His parents hadn't said a word since they came to the hospital. They where in a state of shock. They had hunted there own son.
"Mr. and Mrs. Fenton?" A man in a white coat asked as he approached the group, which consisted of Danny's family, Tucker and Sam. Valerie had disappeared after the ambulance had taken Danny away.
"Yes?" Maddie spoke up.
"I'm sorry to have to tell you this, but Danny seems to have slipped into a coma. We don't know how long he will last, modern medicine has only come so far. I'm sorry." The doctor said.
"Can we see him?" Maddie asked.
"Of course, but for now only a few at time."
Jack and Maddie rose. They followed the doctor to Danny's room.
To be concluded…
Chapter one…Jack and Maddie.
Disclaimer: I still don't own Danny Phantom.
Chapter 1 Jack and Maddie
Jack and Maddie followed the doctor down the long, white hall. The doctor stopped at the Intensive Care Unit. He led them to room 4. As they entered the room they saw there son. He was hooked up to a ventilator and had several needles perturbing from his skin.
"Jack?" Maddie looked to husband.
"It's alright Maddie, come on." Jack led Maddie to Danny's bed.
"Is he really half ghost?" Maddie questioned. Jazz told her parents about Danny on there way to hospital.
"It's all my fault Maddie. If I hadn't built that stupid portal, non of this would have happened." Jack was clearly blaming himself.
"Jack, it's not your fault. It's no one's fault." Maddie tried to get through to her husband, but it was no use. Jack blamed himself.
"Oh Danny, why didn't you just tell us? We could have helped you, but I can see why you would keep it a secret." Maddie said as she looked at the ghost hunting gear around her belt. "You where afraid. You didn't know how we would react."
"Danny…you are our son, we love you no matter what." Jack added.
Maddie took her son's hand. "I love you Danny." She whispered softly. She kissed him on the cheek. "I'm sorry….for everything. Can you ever forgive me?" She looked at his face as she searched for some sign of forgiveness or at least that he was waking up. All Maddie saw or heard was the simultaneous beeping of Danny's heart beat.
'I hunted my own son.' Jack milled over in his head. He had been thinking about that since he saw Danny transform back at the school. 'Why did you keep it a secret? I may hate ghosts with a passion, but this is so different. You're my son, I could never hurt you.' Jack was thinking a lot.
He was snapped out of his thoughts as he heard his wife quietly crying over there son's body. Jack sat on the opposite side of her and took Danny's other hand.
"We're here for you Danny. Please wake up." Maddie pleaded.
They sat in silence as they started at there son.
"Maddie? Who was that ghost that attacked Danny?" Jack broke the silence.
"I don't know Jack, I've never seen it before, and I don't think Danny has either." Maddie remembered how Danny acted around that ghost.
"We have to find it and destroy it!" Jack stated between clenched teeth.
"Not now Jack, our son needs us." Maddie glanced back at Danny. He looked like he was sleeping. But not a peaceful sleep. He looked like he was having a nightmare. Maddie gently stroked his hair.
"Right." Jack said seriously. "Danny, I'm so proud of you. Jazz told us that you are the good guy and the thing with the mayor was a set up. I'm very proud to be the father of Amity Park's own ghost boy." A single tear rolled down Jacks face.
"Wow Jack that was so…so…beautiful." This was one reason Maddie loved Jack. He always seemed to say the right things in the right places. This was one quality that Vlad Master lacked big time.
The Fenton's thoughts were interrupted by a small gasp. They turned around and saw Sam standing in the doorway.
Jack and Maddie looked at each other and then at Danny.
"I love Danny." Maddie whispered as she gave Danny one last kiss on the forehead.
"What she said." If Danny was awake he would have laughed at his father.
Jack and Maddie than turned to Sam.
"Take as much time as you need sweetie." Maddie gave Sam a small huge as they left Danny's hospital room.
To be concluded…