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Chapter 4: Ugh! I Hate Ramen!

Kosuke's POV

The day was exciting today. We entered our old home village, talk to Squad 7 for some directions, talk to the Hokage, and met new challengers. Yup. The day is ahead for it to come.

My sisters and I were walking towards a stupid ramen shop. I hate ramen noodles. They're nasty. "Why are we going to eat ramen noodles tonight? I hate ramen noodles, you know that!" I replied angry at my twin sister, Izumi as she rolled her at me.

"Yeah I know that, you fool!" Izumi poked the top of my head hard. "Ow! That hurts!" I yell covering my head with my arms.

"You two never change, do you?" Riku asked smiling.

"Not really. You know how we are when we're together, Riku." I put my arms down. We arrived at the stupid food court Riku and Izumi love a lot and sat down. "There," Izumi smiled. "Now we both can eat ramen together, Riku!" "Yeah, I haven't had Ramen in a long time." Riku said calmly.

"Great! I feel happy for both of you! Now what exactly am I suppose to eat!" I grab chopsticks that were in front of me that the man working here gave me. "CHINSE CHOPSTICKS!" I yelled hungrier then both of them put together. "Yeah! That's a great idea, Kosuke! While you're at it," Izumi grabbed a cup soy sauce. "You can dip them in Soy sauce!" She teased me about it as I squeezed my hand cracking the chopsticks with a crack sound.

"I'm so outta here!" I jumped off my seat and walked around to see if there was another food court that doesn't sell Ramen noodles.

I finally found a shop that doesn't sell Ramen noodles! It was a sea food court! I love sea food! I was drooling over the food as they sat it on the counter, then I started eating the delicious food ever! I was so enjoying the food I had…that I forgot I was broke.

The next thing I knew, the stupid cook made me wash ever 150 dishes he had.

"Make sure that ever dish is spotless by the time I get back? Understand?" He closed the door behind him and left. I stuck my tongue out at him.

"I so hate this right now." I started washing the dishes one by one with a sponge, a rage, and sink full of water with soap bubbles.

"Sigh, I'll be stuck here forever if I don't hurry up." I put down the dish were I would put the clean ones and the dirty one. "Great, just…149 dishes to go." My eyes started tears for the cruelty of today.

2 and a half hour later….

"I'M DONE! Finally!" My hand was raised up in the air still holding the old wet rage.

"Great. Now you can go home and do whatever, its closing time." The cook pointed outside the door where I was finally free. "Next boy, when you come here to eat…make sure you have money with you!" He exclaimed.

"I will!" I snared at him running towards the door and finally leaving the place. "Great. Now, all I have to do id find my sisters and hit the sack at home." I said slowly talking to myself.

I walked almost everywhere just to find my sisters 10 minutes ago and now I can't find them. "Gees, if only there was a sign on where to find them." It wasn't actually a sign of my sisters but someone was in trouble.

"Hey! Get back here! We're not finished with you, girl!" A man and two others ran chasing after a girl at my age.

She had short raven like hair with thick strands of hair by the side of her head. Her eyes…they were unique, they were…white. I've never seen anyone with white eyes before. Unless...she might be.

She ran passed me as I looked over to see her turn around facing me. "Stop her!" A man pointed at me.

I stud there in the middle waiting for them to catch up with her…but I didn't let them.

"Get out of out of way, boy!" The leader shouted.

"Make me." I replied ready coldly standing there glaring as they stopped in their own tracks waiting for me to attack them.

"Alright," The leader smirked as he and his men grabbed the Kunai from their pockets and were in ready position. "Then we'll make you move then. Whether you like it or not." "Let's see what you're made of old man." I smirked back at him. He really doesn't know what he's up against. He's in for a big surprise. A really big surprise.

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