Well everyone thanks for the reviews. Just to let you know, for those of
you who had problems understanding my earlier chap I just went over them
today and saw what you people meant. Sorry didn't realize it was that
confusing. SO what I plan on doing is go back to each chap for each story I
wrote and fix so it hopefully it would be better to understand. Anyway on
with this chapter hopefully you like it.
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Darien: Wow, Serena, I am really impress. You sure got over your shyness quickly. A little to the top please. That feels so good. So Serena, you know you got to admit you actually like doing this.
Anonymous: You have got to be kidding me!
Darien: (turn around as he said) Serena what happen to your voi.....
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Drew: There is no way in the world I am going to be touching you no matter how much anyone threatens me.
Darien: Drew! What are you doing here and where is Serena and how in the world did you ended up here in her place?
Drew: Calm down Darien! I can explain. This isn't what it looks like. It was all the girl ideas. They made me do it. I....I tried to refuse but trust me these girls can be very persuasive.
Darien: What did Mina claim, you wouldn't be getting any if you didn't corporate with them.
Drew: I wish it were something as simple as that. I telling you Dare, you don't have a clue of what I just when through. I could only tell you this Dare; I will never be the same man again.
Darien: Yeah well it is going to become a lot worst when I get my hand on you. I mean come on we are supposed to be bros. We were supposed to look out for each other and have each other back. Some friend you are.
Drew: I am sorry man but you don't understand. I don't think I will ever look at a girl the same way again without getting the creeps. It was torture. Do you know how long it is going to take me to get rid of the nightmares that are sure to follow? Darien: Oh please, let just go.
Drew: Well Darien, I can tell you one thing for sure. They can surely get feisty and that in a good way.
Darien: You'll never change Drew.
Drew: You wouldn't want me to beside I am just curious to what exactly did you think was going to happen here between you and Serena.
Darien: That is something we will never find out now.
Drew: So I am guessing things aren't going that well between you two.
Darien: I don't get here Drew. She is not like other girls. If I had brought some other girl here, they would have practically been eating out of my hand now.
Drew: You don't suppose this has to do with camp.
Darien: That is crazy Drew. Serena isn't someone to hold a grudge.
Drew: It was kind of funny what happens to you guys though.
Darien: I told you never to speak of that incident again.
Drew: Find I won't. So tell me what on tomorrow agenda. What foolish idea did you come up with this time to with your maiden heart?
Darien: First of all my ideas are not foolish. Second, I have no clue as into what else to do, Drew. I am running out of ideas.
Drew: It's ok to accept defeat, Dare, there only a small sacrifice that you'll will have to make and that is a sacrifice I am willing to let you make.
Darien: Of course you are since you will be the one benefiting from it.
Drew Do you honestly think I would succumb to that level? You're my best buddy and I am just trying to do what a buddy is suppose to do when one is feeling down.
Darien: Cut the crap Drew. Trust me this is far from over. Serena will be madly in love with me and Mina will be mine. You will see.
Drew: Sure man whatever.
Darien: I am serious. Drew: I didn't say you weren't.
Darien: Just trust me Drew, Serena has a big thing coming toward here tomorrow whether she likes it or not.
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Serena: Girls, I don't know how I would ever be able to thank you enough for what you did.
Lita: It was the least we could. I mean you were the damsel in distress and us girls got to stick together.
Mina: You know Serena, I been thinking....
Raye: Well that is a first.
Mina: I am serious. At first you were considered to be a nobody when it comes to guys, no offensive, but now it seems that every guy wants your attention. If I were in your position, I would have been in paradise. Why don't you give the guys a chance? I mean Darien in the first place is HOT and that Diamond character he not all that bad looking either if you get what I mean.
Serena: Don't even mention that guy's name. He gives me the creeps.
Raye: Darien?
Serena: NO Diamond. I mean how is it possible to just pop out of nowhere all the sudden. Not to mention when he around me I become so cold and his eyes don't let me get started on that.
Mina: Ok so Diamond is defiantly out of the picture.
Lita: I don't know Serena, I kind of find him cute looking.
Serena: I didn't say he wasn't. There is just something about him.
Mina: Well than what about Darien?
Serena: There can never be anything between me and Darien.
Mina: Serena, you are just going to have to get over that and move on.
Serena: I wish I could Mina, but you were there. You saw what happen, so you should be able to understand why there never could be nothing between us.
Raye: I hate to be the third wheel here so when is you guys are planning on letting us in this secret of yours?
Mina: Well I would tell you but then I would have to face Serena and trust me you never want to make her mad. It's a scary sight.
Serena: I heard that.
Lita: Well whatever happens between you guys, I agree with Mina, just move on and give Darien a chance. I mean whatever he did couldn't have been that bad.
Serena: You will never know now would you?
Mina: I agree with them Serena. You should give Darien another chance. Who know he might turn out to be your Knight and shining armor?
Serena: Darien my knight and shining armor? You have got to be kidding me.
Mina: Well you would never know now would you unless you give him a chance.
Raye: I hate to admitted it but Mina is right. You should give him a chance.
Serena: You girls wouldn't be saying that if you knew what he did to me.
Lita: Well it couldn't have been that bad if Mina thinks you should give him a chance.
Serena: Before I give him a chance I want revenge first.
Raye: You're kidding right.
Serena: It nothing as drastic as that. IF he really want me he is going to have to prove himself.
Raye: How exactly?
Serena: Well I am an old fashion girls so if he want be he going to have to woo me first.
Lita: That is it. That is what you consider revenge.
Serena: OF course not. There is more to it but that should do for now. The only thing I have to worry about is putting this plan in action. Anyone here have Diamond number?
Mina: I have it but what do you need his number for.
Serena: Well it is part of my plan. How can you expect a boy to woo you if your not playing hard to get.
Mina: Ooooh, I get it now.
Lita: Serena just make sure you don't go to far in this. You don't want everything to back firer on you know. Do you?
Serena: Don't worry, Lita. I know what I am getting myself in too. Now I need to make an important call be back soon.
Lita: I just hope she know what she is getting to.
Mina: Don't worry Serena tough, she can take care of herself. Well I better go check on Serena. I want to be the first to find out how her plan is going.
Raye: Ok, Mina. Don't worry me and Lita would catch up with you girls in just a minute.
Mina: NO problem with me.
Raye and Lita: Bye!
Raye: Finally we are alone.
Lita: Huh! Why?
Raye: I don't know about you Lita, but I plan on getting to the bottom of that secret Serena has. It has to be good if she doesn't want to tell us.
Lita: I know what you mean. I wonder what it is.
Raye: SO are you with me?
Lita: With you in what?
Raye: In finding out the secret duh. I telling you Lita, sometimes you can be just as clueless as Mina.
Lita: I recent that.
Raye: Anyway, are you in?
Lita: You know I am. I been dying to find out exactly what when on between the two of them at camp.
Raye: All I know is that it must have been something big and we are exactly the two people needed to solve a case as big as this. By the end of the week all shall be unveiled.
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End of chap 8.
Within the next chapter coming up Raye and Lita are going to be surprise with what they come up with and what is going to happen to Darien. Would Serena plan work and what exactly is it that Darien has plan for Serena, Well not even I know the answer to that, jk. Ok just to let you know this chapter came out nothing like I planned it. Well even though it a little strange hopefully you liked the chapter somewhat, even if it was just a little bit:) I would try to make everything come together within the next few chapters. Let me know what you think. Hate it or like it let me know. Also once again I am up to any suggestion if you want me to add or change something in the story, let me know. Well that it for now.
............................................................................ ............................................................................ .... ( from previous chapter)
Darien: Wow, Serena, I am really impress. You sure got over your shyness quickly. A little to the top please. That feels so good. So Serena, you know you got to admit you actually like doing this.
Anonymous: You have got to be kidding me!
Darien: (turn around as he said) Serena what happen to your voi.....
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Drew: There is no way in the world I am going to be touching you no matter how much anyone threatens me.
Darien: Drew! What are you doing here and where is Serena and how in the world did you ended up here in her place?
Drew: Calm down Darien! I can explain. This isn't what it looks like. It was all the girl ideas. They made me do it. I....I tried to refuse but trust me these girls can be very persuasive.
Darien: What did Mina claim, you wouldn't be getting any if you didn't corporate with them.
Drew: I wish it were something as simple as that. I telling you Dare, you don't have a clue of what I just when through. I could only tell you this Dare; I will never be the same man again.
Darien: Yeah well it is going to become a lot worst when I get my hand on you. I mean come on we are supposed to be bros. We were supposed to look out for each other and have each other back. Some friend you are.
Drew: I am sorry man but you don't understand. I don't think I will ever look at a girl the same way again without getting the creeps. It was torture. Do you know how long it is going to take me to get rid of the nightmares that are sure to follow? Darien: Oh please, let just go.
Drew: Well Darien, I can tell you one thing for sure. They can surely get feisty and that in a good way.
Darien: You'll never change Drew.
Drew: You wouldn't want me to beside I am just curious to what exactly did you think was going to happen here between you and Serena.
Darien: That is something we will never find out now.
Drew: So I am guessing things aren't going that well between you two.
Darien: I don't get here Drew. She is not like other girls. If I had brought some other girl here, they would have practically been eating out of my hand now.
Drew: You don't suppose this has to do with camp.
Darien: That is crazy Drew. Serena isn't someone to hold a grudge.
Drew: It was kind of funny what happens to you guys though.
Darien: I told you never to speak of that incident again.
Drew: Find I won't. So tell me what on tomorrow agenda. What foolish idea did you come up with this time to with your maiden heart?
Darien: First of all my ideas are not foolish. Second, I have no clue as into what else to do, Drew. I am running out of ideas.
Drew: It's ok to accept defeat, Dare, there only a small sacrifice that you'll will have to make and that is a sacrifice I am willing to let you make.
Darien: Of course you are since you will be the one benefiting from it.
Drew Do you honestly think I would succumb to that level? You're my best buddy and I am just trying to do what a buddy is suppose to do when one is feeling down.
Darien: Cut the crap Drew. Trust me this is far from over. Serena will be madly in love with me and Mina will be mine. You will see.
Drew: Sure man whatever.
Darien: I am serious. Drew: I didn't say you weren't.
Darien: Just trust me Drew, Serena has a big thing coming toward here tomorrow whether she likes it or not.
............................................................................ ............................................................................ .... (at Mina House with the girls)
Serena: Girls, I don't know how I would ever be able to thank you enough for what you did.
Lita: It was the least we could. I mean you were the damsel in distress and us girls got to stick together.
Mina: You know Serena, I been thinking....
Raye: Well that is a first.
Mina: I am serious. At first you were considered to be a nobody when it comes to guys, no offensive, but now it seems that every guy wants your attention. If I were in your position, I would have been in paradise. Why don't you give the guys a chance? I mean Darien in the first place is HOT and that Diamond character he not all that bad looking either if you get what I mean.
Serena: Don't even mention that guy's name. He gives me the creeps.
Raye: Darien?
Serena: NO Diamond. I mean how is it possible to just pop out of nowhere all the sudden. Not to mention when he around me I become so cold and his eyes don't let me get started on that.
Mina: Ok so Diamond is defiantly out of the picture.
Lita: I don't know Serena, I kind of find him cute looking.
Serena: I didn't say he wasn't. There is just something about him.
Mina: Well than what about Darien?
Serena: There can never be anything between me and Darien.
Mina: Serena, you are just going to have to get over that and move on.
Serena: I wish I could Mina, but you were there. You saw what happen, so you should be able to understand why there never could be nothing between us.
Raye: I hate to be the third wheel here so when is you guys are planning on letting us in this secret of yours?
Mina: Well I would tell you but then I would have to face Serena and trust me you never want to make her mad. It's a scary sight.
Serena: I heard that.
Lita: Well whatever happens between you guys, I agree with Mina, just move on and give Darien a chance. I mean whatever he did couldn't have been that bad.
Serena: You will never know now would you?
Mina: I agree with them Serena. You should give Darien another chance. Who know he might turn out to be your Knight and shining armor?
Serena: Darien my knight and shining armor? You have got to be kidding me.
Mina: Well you would never know now would you unless you give him a chance.
Raye: I hate to admitted it but Mina is right. You should give him a chance.
Serena: You girls wouldn't be saying that if you knew what he did to me.
Lita: Well it couldn't have been that bad if Mina thinks you should give him a chance.
Serena: Before I give him a chance I want revenge first.
Raye: You're kidding right.
Serena: It nothing as drastic as that. IF he really want me he is going to have to prove himself.
Raye: How exactly?
Serena: Well I am an old fashion girls so if he want be he going to have to woo me first.
Lita: That is it. That is what you consider revenge.
Serena: OF course not. There is more to it but that should do for now. The only thing I have to worry about is putting this plan in action. Anyone here have Diamond number?
Mina: I have it but what do you need his number for.
Serena: Well it is part of my plan. How can you expect a boy to woo you if your not playing hard to get.
Mina: Ooooh, I get it now.
Lita: Serena just make sure you don't go to far in this. You don't want everything to back firer on you know. Do you?
Serena: Don't worry, Lita. I know what I am getting myself in too. Now I need to make an important call be back soon.
Lita: I just hope she know what she is getting to.
Mina: Don't worry Serena tough, she can take care of herself. Well I better go check on Serena. I want to be the first to find out how her plan is going.
Raye: Ok, Mina. Don't worry me and Lita would catch up with you girls in just a minute.
Mina: NO problem with me.
Raye and Lita: Bye!
Raye: Finally we are alone.
Lita: Huh! Why?
Raye: I don't know about you Lita, but I plan on getting to the bottom of that secret Serena has. It has to be good if she doesn't want to tell us.
Lita: I know what you mean. I wonder what it is.
Raye: SO are you with me?
Lita: With you in what?
Raye: In finding out the secret duh. I telling you Lita, sometimes you can be just as clueless as Mina.
Lita: I recent that.
Raye: Anyway, are you in?
Lita: You know I am. I been dying to find out exactly what when on between the two of them at camp.
Raye: All I know is that it must have been something big and we are exactly the two people needed to solve a case as big as this. By the end of the week all shall be unveiled.
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End of chap 8.
Within the next chapter coming up Raye and Lita are going to be surprise with what they come up with and what is going to happen to Darien. Would Serena plan work and what exactly is it that Darien has plan for Serena, Well not even I know the answer to that, jk. Ok just to let you know this chapter came out nothing like I planned it. Well even though it a little strange hopefully you liked the chapter somewhat, even if it was just a little bit:) I would try to make everything come together within the next few chapters. Let me know what you think. Hate it or like it let me know. Also once again I am up to any suggestion if you want me to add or change something in the story, let me know. Well that it for now.