A/N: Well here is yet another chapter— you guys should seriously be thanking me for this— of Fantastic Four: A New Addition. As sad as it may be to hear, this story is almost over. -waits for crowd to 'aww!' but hears only crickets and some guy coughing- UH! How rude! Lol j/k. Anyways, I figured with it almost being over I would get this story done and over with so that it is off my list. Sound good? Good. Thanks to all who reviewed and yeah I know there wasn't a whole lot of action last chapter considering, but I'm not the greatest action imaginer. I was stunned that nobody guessed who Ice, Jake and Rhia's boss was— especially after the little electricity bit and 'an oddly familiar voice' part at the end. But hey, if nobody guessed it, maybe it wasn't that predictable— or maybe my readers just weren't awake. Anyways, here's another chapter of Fantastic Four: A New Addition. Read, review— enjoy.

Disclaimer: Once again Fantastic Four does not belong to me.

Fantastic Four: A New Addition

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Chapter Eleven- Fantastic Four: A New Addition

"Rhia!" Ice cried out. She immediately stopped controlling the weather and ran over to where her friend lie. Jake smirked at the fate that Rhia had met; something Ice noticed and was disgusted with. She turned to Doom. (A/N: PLEASE tell me that is his name? It's been so long since I saw the movie that I forgot, that's why I didn't update sooner—)

"You... you killed her." Ice said softly. She shook Rhia, attempting to wake her up, but there was no luck. Doom smiled.

"She got in the way— not my problem. Ah, so I see that Ben is still as large and hideous as ever? I would have thought that you would want your dear fiancé Debbie back, but no— I suppose not. Not when you have Alicia, someone who can't see you; how lucky for her." Doom replied. He raised his hands into the air but stopped— he noticed the engagement ring on Sue's finger.

"Still engaged? Haven't you realized yet that Reed— Mr Fantastic— is full of empty promises? Sue, I thought you were smarter... I guess I was wrong." he said. He raised his hands into the air, and lightning began to come from the sky into his body. It pulsed through him, making him more and more powerful. He finally noticed the water that was only around the Fantastic Four, and shot electricity at it. They all moved just in time, and moved out of the water.

"You can dodge, but for how long I wonder?" Doom asked. He still seemed to be more words then action, and because of it they were able to surprise him with Reed wrapping around him so he couldn't move. This didn't faze Doom however; he simply allowed the electricity to appear just outside of his body and stunned Reed, who now lay on the ground unconscious. Sue ran over to him, but Doom knocked her backwards. She flew into a tree, and moaned.

"Still weak as ever, I don't see why my assistance was even required." Doom replied. He saw that two out of four of the Fantastic Four were at the moment out of the way, and moved on to Johnny who was finally standing without wobbling.

"Johnny... it seems that you are only a bother to everyone around you. Rhia, who didn't even know you, died because she tried to save you. And now look at them," Doom replied louder, pointing at Reed and Sue. "They're in pain... and yet they'll still be the ones who have to save you." Doom replied. He was shocked when he was thrown into a tree himself.

"No they aren't." Ben replied firmly. "I'm the one stuck with that responsibility. You know, I never did like you, and I never could understand why Susie did. Now it doesn't matter," he said. "I have an excuse to pound you into nothing if I wanted," he grabbed Doom and attempted to throw him again, but Doom shot volts of electricity at Ben too, fazing him. Doom walked over to Johnny again, who was the only one still standing. Jake had been knocked out by electricity accidentally shot at him, and Ice was still at Rhia's side, refusing to accept that she was gone forever. Johnny snapped his fingers and a small flame came out. Doom laughed.

"Is that supposed to stop me, Johnny? A little flame like that?" Doom asked. Johnny shook his head.

"No," he replied. "But this will!" he shouted as he became engulfed in flame. He ran at Doom, trying to hit him with the flame. He attempted several times to hit Doom with fire, but failed horribly each time. Finally, Doom shot electricity that knocked him back.

"Look at you now... the Fantastic Four aren't so fantastic anymore are they?" Doom laughed. He decided that while the others were knocked out, he would go for Johnny first, who was still awake and would be able to feel every bit of pain that Doom had in store for him. Electricity wasn't the only thing running through his veins— so was cruelty... something that had never been there as strongly before. He collected enough electricity to send what might as well have been a lightning bolt at Johnny, when it was blocked. Doom couldn't figure out why it wasn't hitting Johnny as it was supposed to, and tried even harder. It failed to hit Johnny... again! Doom looked around and saw that Sue was no longer leaning against the tree he had thrown her against. But then... where was she? He looked around and saw no one, before he realized that she had turned invisible.

"Ah, magic tricks again Sue? You never could stay invisible for long... it took too much out of you. Now, what's this? A trickle of blood? Come now Sue, surely it isn't worth bleeding over," Doom replied. He glanced over near Johnny again and saw the same sparkling engagement ring that Sue had worn before. He shot electricity, hoping that she had her back turned to tend to Johnny, but no such luck— she had been facing him and blocked it again. Now it was a matter of who could hold out the longest. Sue became visible again, because it was too strenuous for her to be both invisible and creating a force field. Her nose began bleeding even more and ran down her face, but she couldn't stop now. If she did, the electricity that Doom had powered up would kill her and Johnny instantly. She had no choice but to hold out...

Unknown to any of them at the time, Reed had finally awoken. As blurry as his vision was, he could make out Doom and Sue fighting, both trying to outlast the other. He waited a moment for his vision to clear and got up slowly, walking quietly over near Doom. He began to stretch, planning to pull Doom's feet out from under him so that Sue could stop trying to hold off the electricity, when Jake stood in front of him.

"Hello.." he said. He began to reach out but Reed hit him with his arm and dragged him over to the tree. He restrained him with his stretched limbs and attempted to stretch his head over to where they were. Perhaps he could bite Doom...

There was however, no need for biting as Ben jumped up and shoved Doom out of the way. He was thrown into a brick wall surrounding the park and his body actually began to sink into it from the force he had been shoved into it with. Johnny got up and engulfed himself in flame again. He ran over as fast as he could to Doom, and Sue, although tired, blocked in the flame with a force field. Johnny allowed himself to go all out— and reach supernova. Ben saw what they were trying to do and ran over to Ice.

"Please," Ben replied. "You're friend died to save Johnny. Don't let it be for nothing— help us." Ben pleaded. Ice didn't say anything. What was there to say? Her friend was dead— gone forever. Nothing could bring her back now... but she couldn't blame the Fantastic Four, as much as she wanted to. Rhia always found friends in the most unlikely places... even in those who were good. Like her. It was Doom who had killed her— and it was Doom who hadn't regretted it. It was Doom who would have killed her anyways for not following orders. And it was Doom— who would pay. She stood up and after one last look at Rhia, began walking towards where Doom was blocked in. Johnny, weaker than ever, couldn't maintain the Supernova temperature anymore and flamed off, being knocked out entirely. Sue fell to the ground to, and Reed, deciding that Jake was no harm to them as all he could do was fist fight and read minds, ran over to her.

"You're friend Alicia is at the abandoned building across the street from the apartment building that burned— the one where all the ice was found that Johnny was at." Ice replied. Ben looked at her confused.

"Why tell us now?" he asked.

"Because after I do this, it will have drained my powers from me entirely. And I won't remember a thing..." Ice replied. Jake called out to her, begged her to stop, but she didn't. She closed her eyes and concentrated on what she was to do. Sue crawled over to Johnny and pulled him out of the way. Small droplets of rain began to fall from the sky, before it turned to rain so cold that it should have froze, but didn't. She shot out a large burst of water at Doom, that it reminded Sue of when she was a kid. She would take a bath in the tub with her rubber ducky, and every time her mother would add more water, the ducky would go under. That was what happened to Doom. The metal froze instantly, and finally after he could stand no more— he broke into tiny little pieces. He had been all metal except for around his eyes... they were all that didn't break. Ice fell to the ground, and after that, she remembered nothing. It was as if an instant case of amnesia had overcome her.

Overall, it had been a sad day. Rhia had died protecting Johnny, Ice had forgotten everything... even about Rhia... and would never regain the memory back. She only knew that Rhia was her adopted sister, but she would never remember how she really died. She would never remembered how she had helped the Fantastic Four. Ben finally was reunited with Alicia, for real this time. Ever since they had defeated Doom over a week ago, it had rained every single day constantly. The streets didn't get flooded— which was a good thing— even though it rained so much at once. And Ben had proposed to Alicia— they were getting married. He still hadn't told Debbie the news, but he had a feeling that she wouldn't be overly happy about it. Johnny turned on the TV, and saw that the Fantastic Four were on the news.

"The Fantastic Four have once again managed to protect this city. But it appears that this time around with their enemy, he was more worried about getting to them. A body was found, of a woman who had no identification of any sort on her... she was found dead. Another woman with a rare case of amnesia was found— she remembers her past as a young child, but everything from then on is suddenly blank. She was found to be the only witness of what the Fantastic Four did and how the other woman may have died, but I guess its one mystery we'll never know. Moving on to other news, the rain has still—" at this point, Johnny turned the TV off. Sue, Reed, Ben, and Alicia were sitting in the room as well, and they had all heard the same thing. She was found to be the only witness of what the Fantastic Four did...

"What about Jake?" Johnny asked.

"I guess... they never found him." Sue said. They all were silent for awhile... then Johnny tried to break the silence.

"Well hey, all he could do was read minds, right?"

A/N: That is officially the last chapter of Fantastic Four: A New Addition. If you thought that Ice, or Rhia, or even somehow Jake would become part of the Fantastic Four, well... you thought wrong. A New Addition simply meant Alicia becoming part of the Fantastic Four family through the engagement that I had had planned all throughout the story. Several people thought this would become another "Fantastic Five" story, but I had never planned it that way. There is a bit of an opening at the end, I could make something of it if I wished to. That was the point of leaving it. The way it is, the story is still fine. But if I ever wished to, I could make a sequel story, and continue on about Jake. Its one of those things that would work either way... like the Skeleton Key movie. It left a bit of an opening, but it ended just fine so it could be left as is. I want to thank you guys who read this story all the way through, and who enjoyed it the most. For those who reviewed, I want to thank even more for telling me how much you enjoyed this story and your ideas. Even if I didn't always use them, they were still all appreciated. Hope you enjoyed this story. Now you can review for the last time for this story and tell me what you thought.