Somebody's Knockin'
Ok, I'm switching back to the past now, just so that you don't get confused. I had a few confused people along the line, and that's ok, because everyone gets confused at least 100,000,000 times in their life, I mean, come on. Who doesn't? Anyways...last time they ran into a bald guy with a gun, right? I don't own these people, but if I did, I'd turn them into marionettes. Here it is!
Chapter 5
"Who are you? What are your names?" asked the man. He seemed more curious than frightened.
Daniel was the first to speak up. "We come in peace," he told the man again. "My name's Daniel, this is Sam, Teal'c, and Cameron," he continued as he pointed at the people he was introducing.
The man held the gun steadily at them, still. "My name's Chiron."
"Like the goat guy?" asked Cameron, recieving a glare from Daniel, and a little smile from both Sam and Teal'c.
"Excuse me?" asked Chiron.
"Nevermind," said Daniel. "As I said, we mean you no harm. Would you take us to your village? We come from a planet very far away. We mean to learn from your people."
"You are not the first to come through, and we have treated everyone the same. You must leave at once. We may look to you like savages, but we have very advanced weapons, and we will use them to defend ourselves if you strike," said Chiron.
"We will not strike unless you give us reason to," said Teal'c.
"Then leave. I will not ask you again," said Chiron as his weapon made a disturbingly dangerous sound.
"Fine. Carter, T, Daniel, come on," said Cameron.
"Cameron-" Daniel argued.
"Daniel, I don't want a fight, now come on. I'll find something for you on another planet. Something more high-tech. Let's go," said Mitchell.
Daniel reluctantly turned aroundand followed the others back towards the Stargate, and Chiron followed, also.
As they walked, Daniel tried to bring up a conversation with Chiron.
"Why can't we stay? Is their danger here? What is it?"
"When the Ring of Water opens, there is always trouble," he said simply.
"What kind of trouble?" asked Daniel.
"When we came here, this place was ruled already by men of metal. Deep-voiced and had symbols on their heads. They turned us to slaves, but then, many years ago, they left. But when someone comes through Ring, they come back and take the people with them, and they never bring them back. And sometimes they stay at our village for many days with their prisoners until the prisoners starve or are beaten to their death. That is why you must leave," Chiron explained.
"But we can help you-"
"Many people have said that, and yet, they always lie," said Chiron, then went quiet. Daniel sped up a bit to catch up with the others, then told them what Chiron had just told him.
Finally, they reached the totem pole clearing, and they all stopped dead in their tracks as the platform beside the totem started to glow, then eight rings came down onto it, and they all ralized what it was: A Goa'uld transporter. Teal'c immediately looked up and saw a ship a few miles up, but it only looked like a pea from where he was standing. Then the rings went back up, and they all grabbed their guns and ran as at least a dozen Goa'uld appeared from the glow.
And there it is! Now I can get back to the present where I belong. Thanks again for the reviews! They really help me:0D