Chapter 2

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The following day at school, Mirabel was walking down the hallway with her friends.

"What you guys think of that science test?" asked Valentina.

"I thought it wasn't too bad." Mirabel replied.

"I thought it was muy duro." mentioned Angela.

"Well at least it's over now." Mirabel told her.

Just then they heard a commotion coming from around the corner. Curious they went to see what was going on. Turning the corner, they saw many students crowded around something or someone.

Mirabel tapped someone on the shoulder.

"Com promiso, what's going on?"

"A guy in the next grade is inviting people to a party."

That sounded interesting, and the girls quickly pushed themselves into the crowd. There they saw him. A tall guy who looked to be about 16, he had short scruffy black hair, and wore a designer red and black t-shirt, designer jeans, and expensive shoes.

"Si, my brother's opening a new club in the city, and the he's decided to let the teens have first dibs on it. Anyone is welcomed to come." he announced, as he handed out flyers.

Angela took one of the flyers and the girls looked at it. The club was called Noche, and it was going to open at 6:00.

"What do you think girls?" she asked.

"It sounds like fun." Valentina replied.

"I don't know." Mirabel mentioned.

"Come on, Mira. It'll be fun." persuaded Angela.

"Besides, this club is open to teens first. When will we get another chance like this?" added Valentina.

"Well...maybe. But what if my parents say no?"

"You'll never know until you ask." Angela replied.

Mirabel smiled at her friends, knowing they were right.

So as soon as Mirabel got home, she went to her dad. He was in the garage helping Luisa train.

"Hey, Papa. I need to ask you something."

"Okay, what is it?" Augustin asked, as he counted how many bench presses Luisa was doing.

"Well...a classmate is having a party, and I was wondering if I could go. Valentina and Angela are going."

"5, 6, 7, I'm not sure."

"Come on, it's going to be in a public place, and it'll be really fun."

"11, 12, 13 perhaps... 15, 16."

"So is that a yes?"

"17, 18, sure sure just be careful and be back at a decent hour."

"Gracias."

And Mirabel hurried off to her room to get ready. She called her friends, and told them, she was able to go.

"Bueno, we'll come pick you up at 5:00." said Angela.

"I'll see you then."

Mirabel picked out a nice blue dress and black shoes to wear. When 5 came around, the doorbell rang. Mirabel hurried downstairs, and saw the Julieta had opened the door. Angela wore a red sleeveless shirt, white skirt, and red shoes.

And Valentina wore a teal short sleeves blouse black pants, and sandals.

"Hola girls." she greeted.

"Hola, Senora Madrigal, is Mirabel ready?" asked Valentina.

"Here I am." Mirabel piped up.

"Mirabel, you look nice." Julieta complimented.

"Now you be safe, have fun, and be home before 10:00."

"I will, Mama. Bye."

And with that Mirabel and her friends went down the street to the city.

They caught a taxi, and he drove them to Noche. It was a black building with a large neon sign that was the place's name.

"Well let's go girls." Mirabel declared.

And with that, the girls went into the club. Inside the party was in full swing. The place was dark, but multi colored lights came on and off, a DJ played music, and many teenagers were talking, dancing, and mingling.

"This is incredible." observed Valentina.

"Let's party." urged Angela.

And that's what the girls did. The danced on the dance floor, ate empanadas, baked patacones, chips n dip, and chicken and drank punch and soda to wash it all down. And they danced on the dance floor.

After a while, they decided to take a rest at one of the booths.

"Whew, this is so much fun." said Valentina.

"Yeah, I'm glad we came." Mirabel replied.

She had to admit being at this party made her forget about her home troubles.

"I could use some more soda." Angela mentioned.

"I'll go get them." Mirabel offered.

She got up, and went to the refreshment table. She grabbed three cans, and was about to make her way back, when she bumped into someone.

"Oh, sorry." she replied.

Then he saw who it was; it was the guy who was handing out the flyers for the party.

"Oh, it's you."

"Si, my name's Marcos Herrera; second year of high school."

"Mirabel Madrigal, first year of high school."

"So are you enjoying the fiesta?"

"Yeah, my friends and I are having a great time."

"Glad to hear that. If you need anything just ask."

As Mirabel walked back to her friends, she looked back at Marcos. She didn't get a good look at him at school, but he seemed pretty nice and good looking.

"Hey, girls I just ran into our host."

"Oh really?" asked Valentina.

"Yeah, his name's Marcos Herrera."

"Marcos, I think I may have seen him around." mentioned Angela.

The party went on, and the girls continued to have fun.

"I can't wait till we're old enough to come these kinds of places all the time." said Valentina.

"Me neither." agreed Angela.

Just then, Marcos came on the microphone.

"Atención everyone, it's time for this place to open up for the adult patrons. So unless you're 18 it's time to go now."

So the underclassmen started to leave the club.

"That means us too." Mirabel told her friends.

And the three started to leave. Marcos then caught Mirabel leaving.

"Except you Mirabel."

She looked up at him surprised.

"You and your friends can stay if you want."

Mirabel was surprised, and blushed a little.

"Gracias, but we really gotta go." Mirabel replied.

And she and her friends hurried out.

"Think someone has their eyes on your, Mira." teased Valentina, as the girls got a cab.

"Oh, I don't know." Mirabel replied.

But she did have to admit, it was flattering to get attention from a guy like Marcos.

That's chapter 2, plz review