Corrine: Jay-Tales does not own ToS, he does however own most of this idea, the prayer Kilia says, Dorr's special attack, the characterBalphagore and the Genocide Potion!
That is all...
Dorr and Kilia had just set off to the Palmacosta Ranch to save Clara, when they came into contact with monsters, "Kilia, stay back!" Dorr pulled the knife on his leg from out of it's holster, "I'll take care of it!" he took a few swipes at the lady bug monster and destroyed it, now came the tricky part; destroying the preying mantis,
AGH! it slashed at Dorr and hit him head on, sending him flying to the ground, "Daddy!" Kilia screamed as she ran toward him, at the same time though, the preying mantis was heading for Kilia, she reached her father and noticed the preying manits was coming, "Don't hurt my daddy!"Kilia yelled as a black light emanated from her palm and shot at the enemy, destroying it,
"W-What was that?" Dorr asked, staring at his daughter, who had powers he did not know of,
"I saved your life daddy..."Kilia said smiling at him, he smiled back at her, sheathed his knife and they continued forward.
Meanwhile, at the Palmacosta Ranch;
Crack! the desians were working everyone like dogs, but they worked Clara even harder, they treated her like a slave, "Move fasterscum!" Crack!
"Daddy, how much further?" Kilia asked, her feet swelling in agonizing pain,
"Not that far now..." Dorr said, watching the sun set, "It's getting late, let's stop at that house of salvation up ahead and stay the night,
Yawn, "Okay..." Kilia said softly,
"Dorr...please come save me..." Clara whispered, her face burrowed in her knees,
"Please..."
"G'night Kilia..." Dorr said turning out the light,
"G'nightdaddy..." Kilia said, folding her hands and looking up at the starry sky through the window;
Martel, Our Goddess, give me and my daddy the strength to save my mommy from the nasty desians...
...and please, watch over and protect my mommy...
Kilia finished her prayer and crawled into bed, not knowing that Dorr was still awake, he knew they would be able to make it there, but he wasn't sure if they'd actually keep their end of the bargain.
"Kilia!" Dorr yelled frantically,
"Daddy? What's wrong?" Kilia asked,
"The desians were here! They said that if we're not there in an hourmommy will be slautered!" Dorr yelled, holding back the tears,
"WHAT?"Nooooo..." Kilia began to cry,
"Save it Kilia! We have to go!" Dorr grabbed her arm and bolted out of the house of salvation and in the direction of the ranch.
45 minutes later>they could sort of see it, the ranch of course,they kept running until something struck Dorr, sending him flying,
"So Governer-General Dorr, how do you expect to get to the ranch if you can'tforesee one measly attack!" ranted the source of the attacker, "I am Balphagore, Commanding officer of the Desian Ranch,
"So that would make you next in line to power after Magnius!" Dorr said skeptically,
"Correct" Balphagore smirked,
"You must not bother us! We have a meeting Magnius!" Dorr said frantically
"Ah yes, about that, there's been a change of plan..."
"What?" Dorr hollered, sweat rolling down his cheek,
"Yes, Magnius has decided that he wants me to take the girl and he'll just kill off the woman!"
"Noo!"Kilia Screamed as Balphagore swooped down and snatched her,
"STOP!" Dorr Yelled, a yellow aura surrounding him, as he began chanting;
'Omoakie Toomuaeki
Ognidaku Masasukeu
Nagaiestecoo!'
"What?" Balphagore was in a state of shock as he began to shake, "An earthquake? No wait that's impossible, I'm in the air, but that means..." Dorr's special skill was causing the gravitational field around Balphagore to shake, rattle and rumble, he then Cried out the last word of his six word chant;
'Fresesuke Gravitateeon'
"Nooo!" as the gravitational field shook he dropped Kilia and closed his hands into fists causing the shaking field to explode, killing Balphagore, his blood and guts going every which way,
"Com'on Kilia, let's go!"
1:03 minutes later> "I guess he's not coming, retrieve number 6312 and bring her to me!" Magnius ordered his desians
"Yes, Lord Magnius!" the desians replied, moments later she wasthrown into Magnius' quarters,
"Hello, Clara..."Magnius smiled
"Magnius, you bastard!"
"Shut your mouth!" Magnius ran up to her and grabbed her arm pick the exsphere up off the table beside them, "Here, it's your's!"
"No!Noo!NOOOO!" Clara's cries were blood curdling, Magnius placed the uncrestedexsphere into the backside of her hand, and then cut a slit beside it, blood oozing down Clara's hand and dripping onto the floor, he then took an orange liquid and poured a small portion of it into her cut,
"YAAAAAAAH!" Clara's cries were yet again blood curdling,
"That was Genocide Potion, it increases the reaction rate, as soon as it's completely in you're blood stream, you will become a horrid monster!" Magnius smirked, knowing that it wouldn't be long now,
"You, how you-" Splat! Agh!
"Magnius, open up!"
"Dorr?"Magnius opened the door and he and Kilia walked in,
"There, I came, now give me Clara!"Dorr demanded
"There's really no point, in no time at all, she'll be a horrid beast!" Magnius laughed
"You bastard!" Dorr glared at him,
"You horrid man!" Kilia screamed, lifting her arm and opening her hand, revealing a black, similar to the light that destroyed the mantis,
"So this is the power of the Negelon?" Magnius spoke to himself, Kilia shot the light at Magnius, only to have him stop it and return it back, but this time it was actually shining, as if it was a black amethyst jewel, it entered Kilia's body and a dark aura surrounded her,
AGH! Kilia screamed fiercely, rattling her own body, then the aura engulfed her and when it dissipated, she was a different being, as Magnius called it, the 'Negelon' !
"Kilia!" Dorr cried, just then Clara began to grow and chnage color,
"Yes, it's begun!" Magnius hollered, menacingly,
"No...Clara..." Dorr watched as his beautiful wife and daughter became creatures to be feared, he watched in horror as his beautiful wife became...a beautiful monster!
"Muhaha!"Magnius laughed,
"It's not funny!" Dorr yelled as he slashed at magnius, striking him down,
AGH! Magnius fell to the floor, "Dammit!"
Dorr ran, he ran away from it all, he now has to hide is daughter's true appearance and keep his wife locked away in a cage in his cellar...
He watched his life crumbled as his daughter became an evil creature, and his wife became...
"A Beautiful Monster!"
Jay-Tales: OOOOkay...that was totally creepy...
Corrine: Indubitably
Jay-Tales: Indubi-wha?
Corrine: Nevermind...