10 minutes after we left Marvin, Torn, and everybody else at the Naughty Ottsil under attack we left the appartment fully loaded with weapons on our backs. Jak let me borrow his spare Jet board, so we wouldn't have to share one. Two people on one jet board is kind of hard to control easy! Anyway, we jacked a paired zoomer and raced over to the Naughty Ottsil ready to fight. Jak was driving, and I just looked up close to when we were there.

Jak's eyes widened, and ghasped, immidiately stopping in mid air, sending me almost nearly flying off of the vehicle! I looked at him, slightly annoyed, but then noticed him staring what's in front of him, I looked where he was seeing. It was the Naughty Ottsil apperantly unharmed! Earlier on there was a giant hole in the front of it! The only noticable change we saw was that there were no guards in sight. I reached out for Jak's hand and held it, closing my eyes. I said lowly, "We're left clueless... This shit don't make no sence.."

Jak studied the building, seeing Daxter's ottsil decoration ontop of the entrance. He laced his fingers with mine and held my hand tight, "No... We're not left clueless..." He said slowly. I looked at him, and he faced me. "Erol wouldn't just let us get out of the prison without torchuring us first." He said. Then it came to me. At that moment I knew Jak was right. Erol had something to do with this. "Before we jump to conclusions we have to see what's inside..." I said quietly.

We walked in holding hands, and nobody was there. Jak sighed, putting his free hand on his forehead. The blue communicator thing beeped, and Erol's head popped up. He laughed histaricly and said, " I don't know what came over me when I let you two go... I wish that I felt at that time to kill both of you." We both got very agrivated, and I shouted, " Erol you son of a gun. Where are they!" Erol sneered, grinning in a strange way. " Well as a matter of fact... They're right underneith you." He said in a clever tone. Our hearts sank thinking the horrors of what he just said.

"No.." I whispered. "WHAT THE HELL YOU TALKIN' ABOUT!" Jak barked at Erol. "Simple. They're under you in a ditch, and they probably don't have a lot of time left, if you know what I mean." He said evily, and started laughing again. That annoyed me, "Quit your laughing. You sound pretty corny right about know!" I snapped. "Hey! I'm not as bad as your new eco freak boyfriend here!" He laughed. That pissed me off even more, and with my dark powers I smashed the center of the communicator.

"Torn's not going to like that.." Jak said. I looked at him with fearful eyes, "If we don't get those guys out, including Torn, he's not gonna be able to not like it." I said. The ground is rock solid. Not even dark powers could get through it. Jak hugged me, and I hugged him even tighter, knowing Marvin was down there. "Don't worry... There must be a switch of some kind." He said gently, trying to confort me.

I just remembered something, "Or a password.." I said quietly. We separated, but still holding eachother's arms. He put his hand on my cheek, "What?" He asked. "A password. I remember Torn talking about a password to hold toxic fumes from weapon fuel underground." I said louder. I looked at the communicator, with the center of it blasted. " Oh holy shit..." Jak said lowly. "It's still functional, but there's gonna be no visual on it." I said, rushing over to it pushing at the buttons. I messed with the computer, looking for the password entry. It beeped. "GOT IT." I yelled in exitement. He rushed over behind me, trying to see what I was doing. "Now I just have to think about what the password is. Torn designed it.." I said, in thought. "What's Torn's favorite thing to say to people?" Jak asked. I looked down in thought, and smirked. I then wrote what I thought it was into the computer. The voice said, "Access Approved."

Jak smiled, and hugged me from the backside. I held his arms, and he asked while in front of us 2 sides of the floor split , "What was it?" I laughed, "It was, 'Not likely'.." Jak rolled his eyes, smirking, "Oh yea... Can't forget that one." He let go, and we rushed over to the whole. It had a leading of stairs, and we ran down finding everybody in see through prison cells. Marvin was slouching looking down baning his head on the side of the cell until he saw us. His face lit up, and he smiled yelling, "Mom!" I ran over, and opened the door, and he jumped on me giving me a warm hug.

"Hey! You ok?" I asked. He nodded happily. Everybody else started to get up, and Jak started releasing them. We all got out of there, and we explained Erol had did that for some reason. Torn predicted Erol did that as a warning to me, and saying I should try to run back to him again. Jak disagreed, and argued with him, but only for a second or two before Torn gave him the death stare. Also when we were all talking, Jak accidently blabbed out about our date and that we got togeather. Marvin burst out laughing, and Ashlin rolled her eyes.

Eh.. It was pretty funny. Time went on, and Erol never really did much of anything after that. Rumor spread throughout the city that I got back with Erol and I was cheating on Jak, but that was NEVER true. I'd never stray Jak. I loved him more than when I loved Torn or Erol COMBINED. We talked to the city government on letting Marvin stay and live with his father, Torn until he turned 18, and they granted our wish. Jak and I really needed our space.
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Well... Um... Yea. LMAO Just to give you a heads up I'm rearing towards the end of the story. But don't worry.. I'll make different fanfic stories related to this. I'm currently working on an alternate story PARTING off from when Laona and Jak hooked up. I just arranged their relationship in a different way. I was inspired by this SLASH fanfic. It was disturbing and creepy yet cute, funny, and sweet. It was a JakxTorn thing. It was "All of This" I forget the author, but if you search for it in the search browser you'll find it. I loved the story layout.. Just not how they had the charactors. The ending was very awkward, especialy the last paragraphs on the last chapter. LMAO but that's not the point.positioned. COMMENTS WELCOME AT ALL TIMES.