DISCLAIMER: I SAID IT ONCE AND I'LL SAY IT AGAIN, I DO NOT OWN KENSHIN!!!
HE OWNZ ME.ANY MORE QUESTIONS?
WARNING: TOMOE AND KENSHIN FOREVER FANS DO NOT READ THIS!!!!!
***************************A GIRL NAMED TOMOE**********************
It was another day of school and today was February 12, 2003.
(Two days before Valentines Day! Just remember this for later chappy)
Kenshin went to pick up Kaoru. He was in his limo and he stopped in front of
Kaoru's house. She was looking gorgeous as usual. She was wearing Colombian
(For those of u who don't know they are really tight jeans, which can be any color)
azure pants and a white shirt saying "Kenshin is ma man!!!" Kenshin smiled at the shirt.
He was wearing a shirt with a similar message except it went like this: "Kaoru is mine, so
back off!" He wore a pair of baby blue AND1 pants. (I love AND1!!) One of his body
guards escorted Kaoru to the SILVER limo!!! As soon as they started driving, Kaoru
greeted Kenshin with a kiss. Kenshin kissed back to a giggling Kaoru. "Nani?" "Did I
miss something ?" Kaoru quickly read him and answered by handing him a compact. He
had lipstick smeared on his lips. He smirked at Kaoru and licked it off, cleaning himself.
Kaoru gaped at the scene but didn't ever close when Kenshin continued kissing. And then
The limo came to a sudden stop! They reached the school, as they came out they had a
band of friends waiting for them at the front of the school. These friends were: Misao,
Soujiro, Aoshi, Megumi, Sano, and two mysterious people, a young lady with black hair
and a young man with white hair and glasses. Kenshin and Kaoru stepped out of the limo,
hands enlaced with each other.
As the couple went to meet their friends, they noticed two new faces. "Who are they?"
Kenshin asked Sano. This is Tomoe, and this is her brother Enishi. "They're new to the
school so we're showing them around!" Misao said. Kenshin had to admit Tomoe was
very attractive, but Kaoru was prettier and he loved her. As Kenshin was noticing Tomoe,
Kaoru was looking at Enishi.
**Kaoru's Thoughts**
"I have this gut feeling that this Enishi guy is trouble. "Then again, he is a new student so
I'll have to get to know him a little better!" "That Tomoe girl is checking Kenshin out!"
"She better read my shirt and think twice if she thinks she can take Kenshin away from
me!!" ****Kaoru's thoughts ended****
Kaoru's thoughts were interrupted when Kenshin elbowed her lightly, which meant it
was time to introduce themselves. "Oh, hi I'm Kaoru, and.I'm Kenshin." "Nice to meet
you!" I'm Tomoe, and this is my little brother Enishi.
(I'm not sure if he was the younger brother or older brother so I put younger.)
The bell had rung and it was homeroom first, because of new schedule changes for some
people. Kenshin and Kaoru were talking when the teacher handed Kaoru a paper, it was a
schedule change!! Now she didn't have lunch with Kenshin! Now Kenshin had lunch
Sano, Tsubame, Soujiro, Akira, and Tomoe. And Kaoru had lunch with Megumi, Misao,
Aoshi, and Enishi. Kaoru was sad that Kenshin wasn't in her lunch, but she was
thankful most of her friends were. Kaoru had started her lunch and was talking to her
friends. This was her time to learn more about Enishi. "So Enishi, why don't you tell
us some things about you? "Ok, I like sword training, I came from Kyoto, Japan, and I
am available." He said looking at Kaoru hungrily. Kaoru felt the feeling again, and she
didn't like it. But she didn't need to worry because her friends would always protect her.
Enishi knew Kenshin and Kaoru were together but the truth was, he wanted her! (not as
in romance, but in sex.) While Enishi was trying to work on Kaoru, Kenshin was having
his own trouble. Tomoe was pressing onto Kenshin. (what a hoe!! ^_^) Kenshin and his
were talking. Tomoe was wearing a hoe-ish outfit looking out fit, it was a really tight and
short skirt and a short shirt with a few slits here and there, and an enormous one over her
breasts. Kenshin noticed this, but had no interest in her. Tomoe was trying to turn-on
Kenshin. First she pretend to drop something right in front of Kenshin and bend down to
pick it up making her breasts be right in front of Kenshin. Kenshin thought she was such
bitch. He knew he just met her but there was a certain horish thing about her! He looked
her in disgust! Tomoe was pissed and she found herself alone, for lunch was finished and
Kenshin and his crew had left her for herself. School had passed like a breeze.
Kenshin and Kaoru had arranged to go to the mall. Kenshin needed to take care of
something, so he couldn't drive her but he would meet her there. It was two hours before
she could go to the mall, so she watched her favorite anime show: Rurouni Shinta. Her
show was interrupted with a sudden news alert.
*****News channel******
"Hello, I am Tae Toriyama and I'm here with breaking news!" "The rapist Ishine (read it
backwards and what do u get?) is on the lose again!" "He escaped on February the 10th
and is on rampage right here in Tokyo!" Kaoru was terrified, so she decided to bring
her magical bokken with her. (u guys know, the one that magically appears out of
nowhere!) With that she took her black escalade (ma fav. Car!) to the mall.
***********Meanwhile***********
What Kaoru didn't know was that Kenshin was doing. What Kenshin hadn't told her yet
Was that he was the Hitokiri Battousai.
NOTE: In this story the hitokiri battousai is when he goes undercover like a spy and saves Peeps!!!
Tonight he had heard Ishine was on the lose, and he hoped that Kaoru got to the mall
safely. But all he could do was hope, then his walkie-talkie thing was sounding.
It was his comrade, and he had news on Ishine's where-abouts. (A/N: his friend is Sano, an undercover agent)
Sano: " He is on Aventura Blvd. And heading straight for the mall!!!!!!!"
Kenshin: "Oh no, I'm expecting my girlfriend to be there anytime now!
Sano: "You better hurry up buddy, I'll be there in a few minutes to help you out!"
Kenshin: "Ok."
Then Kenshin sprinted off to the mall!
Kaoru had now gotten to the parking lot of the mall to find no lights, guards, or any
protection whatsoever. It was supposed to be a valet parking lot, so she squinted her eyes
the valet stand. She saw a man there and automatically assumed he worked there.
She handed him her keys and the amount of money it would've been to park but when
she did so the man laughed cynically, not to mention nerdy-like! Then she saw who it
was in the moonlight!!
************CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!****************
WHO IS THE STALKER!? WILL KENSHIN MAKE IT IN TIME??
SO MANY QUESTIONS, AND ALL WILL BE ANSWERED IN THE NEXT
CHAPPY OF MY FIC!!!MWHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
IS IT GOOD IS IT BAD, DO U LOVE IT DO U HATE IT, TELL ME IN A REVIEW!!
I LOVE REVIEWS.. JUST NO FLAMES!!
AND THE PEOPLE WHO THINK THIS IS SHORT.
IM MAKING TWO CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY SO I HAD TO LEAVE IDEAS FOR
THE NEXT ONE!!! THIS IS SEVEN PAGES ON WORD SOOOOO...
THOSE OF U WHO R TOMOE LOVERS.I WARNED YOU AND U READ IT ANYWAYZ SO DON'T FLAME ME!!!!!
***************************REVIEW RESPONSES**********************
DARK-LUV-DOVE- YUP THAT WAS THE STORY I READ, I LOVE IT!!!! WELL I UPDATED SOO HERE U GO!! REVIEW!!
13AL13YANIME- YES THAT BURP WAS FUNNY!! I'M GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING MY FIC!! PLEASE REVIEW!
K+K FAN- THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH, YOU ARE THE ONE WHO GOT ME AMPED TO MAKE THIS CHAPTER.I WAS GONNA BE LAZY AND UPDATE
THE CHAPTER NEXT WEEK BUT THEN I READ YOUR REVIEW AND IT WAS LIKE A CUP OF COFFEE!!!!
KIMIKO5- I APPRECIATE YOUR REVIEWING A LOT!!! HOPE U LIKE THIS CHAPTER!! NOT MUCH HUMOR, BUT THE NEXT ONE IS FULL OF LAUGHS!!!
LADY KATSUMI- I DIDN'T WANT TO MAKE IT TO FLUFFY, BUT I GUESS I DID!!! WELL JUST PREPARE FOR SOME FUNNY AND ANGST!!
~LADY HIMURA- YOU ARE ALWAYS ONE OF MY FAVORITE REVIEWERS, I LOVE YOUR LONG RESPONSES, AND YOIUR STORIES AS WELL!!
~SSJ HIMURA- THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLEMENT, AND I LOVE YOUR STORY, JUST UPDATE PLEASE!!!
~SORA HIMURA- GRACIAS AMIGA!!!! READF MY OTHER CHAPPYS WHEN U GETS THE TIME!!!! I LOVE YOR STORY!!!!!
AND IF I MISSED ANYONE YOU KNOW I'M THANKFUL!!!!!!!
******************R&R****************
JA!!!!!!!!! WITH LOVE,
XOXOXO BATTOUSAI'S-GODDESS!!!!!! XOXOXO
P.S- KENSHIN'S TOMMOROW!!!!!!!
WARNING: TOMOE AND KENSHIN FOREVER FANS DO NOT READ THIS!!!!!
***************************A GIRL NAMED TOMOE**********************
It was another day of school and today was February 12, 2003.
(Two days before Valentines Day! Just remember this for later chappy)
Kenshin went to pick up Kaoru. He was in his limo and he stopped in front of
Kaoru's house. She was looking gorgeous as usual. She was wearing Colombian
(For those of u who don't know they are really tight jeans, which can be any color)
azure pants and a white shirt saying "Kenshin is ma man!!!" Kenshin smiled at the shirt.
He was wearing a shirt with a similar message except it went like this: "Kaoru is mine, so
back off!" He wore a pair of baby blue AND1 pants. (I love AND1!!) One of his body
guards escorted Kaoru to the SILVER limo!!! As soon as they started driving, Kaoru
greeted Kenshin with a kiss. Kenshin kissed back to a giggling Kaoru. "Nani?" "Did I
miss something ?" Kaoru quickly read him and answered by handing him a compact. He
had lipstick smeared on his lips. He smirked at Kaoru and licked it off, cleaning himself.
Kaoru gaped at the scene but didn't ever close when Kenshin continued kissing. And then
The limo came to a sudden stop! They reached the school, as they came out they had a
band of friends waiting for them at the front of the school. These friends were: Misao,
Soujiro, Aoshi, Megumi, Sano, and two mysterious people, a young lady with black hair
and a young man with white hair and glasses. Kenshin and Kaoru stepped out of the limo,
hands enlaced with each other.
As the couple went to meet their friends, they noticed two new faces. "Who are they?"
Kenshin asked Sano. This is Tomoe, and this is her brother Enishi. "They're new to the
school so we're showing them around!" Misao said. Kenshin had to admit Tomoe was
very attractive, but Kaoru was prettier and he loved her. As Kenshin was noticing Tomoe,
Kaoru was looking at Enishi.
**Kaoru's Thoughts**
"I have this gut feeling that this Enishi guy is trouble. "Then again, he is a new student so
I'll have to get to know him a little better!" "That Tomoe girl is checking Kenshin out!"
"She better read my shirt and think twice if she thinks she can take Kenshin away from
me!!" ****Kaoru's thoughts ended****
Kaoru's thoughts were interrupted when Kenshin elbowed her lightly, which meant it
was time to introduce themselves. "Oh, hi I'm Kaoru, and.I'm Kenshin." "Nice to meet
you!" I'm Tomoe, and this is my little brother Enishi.
(I'm not sure if he was the younger brother or older brother so I put younger.)
The bell had rung and it was homeroom first, because of new schedule changes for some
people. Kenshin and Kaoru were talking when the teacher handed Kaoru a paper, it was a
schedule change!! Now she didn't have lunch with Kenshin! Now Kenshin had lunch
Sano, Tsubame, Soujiro, Akira, and Tomoe. And Kaoru had lunch with Megumi, Misao,
Aoshi, and Enishi. Kaoru was sad that Kenshin wasn't in her lunch, but she was
thankful most of her friends were. Kaoru had started her lunch and was talking to her
friends. This was her time to learn more about Enishi. "So Enishi, why don't you tell
us some things about you? "Ok, I like sword training, I came from Kyoto, Japan, and I
am available." He said looking at Kaoru hungrily. Kaoru felt the feeling again, and she
didn't like it. But she didn't need to worry because her friends would always protect her.
Enishi knew Kenshin and Kaoru were together but the truth was, he wanted her! (not as
in romance, but in sex.) While Enishi was trying to work on Kaoru, Kenshin was having
his own trouble. Tomoe was pressing onto Kenshin. (what a hoe!! ^_^) Kenshin and his
were talking. Tomoe was wearing a hoe-ish outfit looking out fit, it was a really tight and
short skirt and a short shirt with a few slits here and there, and an enormous one over her
breasts. Kenshin noticed this, but had no interest in her. Tomoe was trying to turn-on
Kenshin. First she pretend to drop something right in front of Kenshin and bend down to
pick it up making her breasts be right in front of Kenshin. Kenshin thought she was such
bitch. He knew he just met her but there was a certain horish thing about her! He looked
her in disgust! Tomoe was pissed and she found herself alone, for lunch was finished and
Kenshin and his crew had left her for herself. School had passed like a breeze.
Kenshin and Kaoru had arranged to go to the mall. Kenshin needed to take care of
something, so he couldn't drive her but he would meet her there. It was two hours before
she could go to the mall, so she watched her favorite anime show: Rurouni Shinta. Her
show was interrupted with a sudden news alert.
*****News channel******
"Hello, I am Tae Toriyama and I'm here with breaking news!" "The rapist Ishine (read it
backwards and what do u get?) is on the lose again!" "He escaped on February the 10th
and is on rampage right here in Tokyo!" Kaoru was terrified, so she decided to bring
her magical bokken with her. (u guys know, the one that magically appears out of
nowhere!) With that she took her black escalade (ma fav. Car!) to the mall.
***********Meanwhile***********
What Kaoru didn't know was that Kenshin was doing. What Kenshin hadn't told her yet
Was that he was the Hitokiri Battousai.
NOTE: In this story the hitokiri battousai is when he goes undercover like a spy and saves Peeps!!!
Tonight he had heard Ishine was on the lose, and he hoped that Kaoru got to the mall
safely. But all he could do was hope, then his walkie-talkie thing was sounding.
It was his comrade, and he had news on Ishine's where-abouts. (A/N: his friend is Sano, an undercover agent)
Sano: " He is on Aventura Blvd. And heading straight for the mall!!!!!!!"
Kenshin: "Oh no, I'm expecting my girlfriend to be there anytime now!
Sano: "You better hurry up buddy, I'll be there in a few minutes to help you out!"
Kenshin: "Ok."
Then Kenshin sprinted off to the mall!
Kaoru had now gotten to the parking lot of the mall to find no lights, guards, or any
protection whatsoever. It was supposed to be a valet parking lot, so she squinted her eyes
the valet stand. She saw a man there and automatically assumed he worked there.
She handed him her keys and the amount of money it would've been to park but when
she did so the man laughed cynically, not to mention nerdy-like! Then she saw who it
was in the moonlight!!
************CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!****************
WHO IS THE STALKER!? WILL KENSHIN MAKE IT IN TIME??
SO MANY QUESTIONS, AND ALL WILL BE ANSWERED IN THE NEXT
CHAPPY OF MY FIC!!!MWHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
IS IT GOOD IS IT BAD, DO U LOVE IT DO U HATE IT, TELL ME IN A REVIEW!!
I LOVE REVIEWS.. JUST NO FLAMES!!
AND THE PEOPLE WHO THINK THIS IS SHORT.
IM MAKING TWO CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY SO I HAD TO LEAVE IDEAS FOR
THE NEXT ONE!!! THIS IS SEVEN PAGES ON WORD SOOOOO...
THOSE OF U WHO R TOMOE LOVERS.I WARNED YOU AND U READ IT ANYWAYZ SO DON'T FLAME ME!!!!!
***************************REVIEW RESPONSES**********************
DARK-LUV-DOVE- YUP THAT WAS THE STORY I READ, I LOVE IT!!!! WELL I UPDATED SOO HERE U GO!! REVIEW!!
13AL13YANIME- YES THAT BURP WAS FUNNY!! I'M GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING MY FIC!! PLEASE REVIEW!
K+K FAN- THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH, YOU ARE THE ONE WHO GOT ME AMPED TO MAKE THIS CHAPTER.I WAS GONNA BE LAZY AND UPDATE
THE CHAPTER NEXT WEEK BUT THEN I READ YOUR REVIEW AND IT WAS LIKE A CUP OF COFFEE!!!!
KIMIKO5- I APPRECIATE YOUR REVIEWING A LOT!!! HOPE U LIKE THIS CHAPTER!! NOT MUCH HUMOR, BUT THE NEXT ONE IS FULL OF LAUGHS!!!
LADY KATSUMI- I DIDN'T WANT TO MAKE IT TO FLUFFY, BUT I GUESS I DID!!! WELL JUST PREPARE FOR SOME FUNNY AND ANGST!!
~LADY HIMURA- YOU ARE ALWAYS ONE OF MY FAVORITE REVIEWERS, I LOVE YOUR LONG RESPONSES, AND YOIUR STORIES AS WELL!!
~SSJ HIMURA- THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLEMENT, AND I LOVE YOUR STORY, JUST UPDATE PLEASE!!!
~SORA HIMURA- GRACIAS AMIGA!!!! READF MY OTHER CHAPPYS WHEN U GETS THE TIME!!!! I LOVE YOR STORY!!!!!
AND IF I MISSED ANYONE YOU KNOW I'M THANKFUL!!!!!!!
******************R&R****************
JA!!!!!!!!! WITH LOVE,
XOXOXO BATTOUSAI'S-GODDESS!!!!!! XOXOXO
P.S- KENSHIN'S TOMMOROW!!!!!!!