I'm workin' on it. Here you go!
Raph was dodging all of their attacks and was playing with them instead of actually fighting. "Are you done playing around yet?" Raph asked with a smirk when he saw that they had to stop to breathe while he barely broke a sweat.
"How…are…we…gonna…kill…I'?" Mikey asked as he gasped for air. They noticed that when they stopped to breathe, so did it. Only, instead of stopping to take a breath of air, it watched them with ridicule and annoyance in its loathsome, evil eyes.
"Attack," Leo gasped. Master Splinter watched it as he took deep, soothing breaths. It had a look in its eyes that screamed for them to make the first move…like it dared them.
"Something is not right," Master Splinter said as he looked it right in the eyes. Right before they could ask him what he meant, Master Splinter saw a flicker of fear in its "eyes". The odd part was that the fear was mixed with a bit of rage. Right then, Master Splinter knew that Raph was still alive…somewhere.
"My sons," Master Splinter whispered, low enough so the vesania bestia could barely hear him. "Be careful, I have a strong feeling that Raphael is still alive." Leo and Mikey's eyes widened. There was a chance that they could save someone from the creature.
With Raph
Raph looked around the small room, his eyes searching for an escape. The red substance was beginning to fill the small room. Raph saw everything that the beast was doing; yet he felt responsible for everyone's deaths. The red liquid was starting to reach his neck when the creature showed him its actual body, which freaked him out at first. Its head was a few feet above the liquid when it spoke. "They know Raphael. They know about what I am, what is happening to you, and what will happen to you."
What do you mean? You said I was going to Hell!
"Like I would pass up a new host?" it grinned as it spoke. "When the blood reached the top of the ceiling and you run out of air, your soul will die and I will feast. Then your body will be mine." Raph already had to keep his head up without touching the floor. Raph noticed that its feet were still on the ground even though its head was under the blood.
What about you! You'll die also! It grinned under the blood and Raph knew it even though he couldn't see the creature any more.
"You cannot kill what is already dead."
What do you mean? You aren't dead! You're takin' control of my body god damnit!
"Simple, I am the beast of Insanity, I control all acts of madness and mentality. I cannot die, for I have no true form. The one you and your brother see is the one I like the best, the form of Fear. I can possess you, and slowly eat your dead soul and mind."
Shit. I'm gonna die today. Raph looked up and saw that his head was already near the ceiling. Raph took a deep breath when the last of the air was replaced with blood. He looked around under the blood when he saw it. The creature swam straight at him as it grinned; its mouth was open as it bit into Raph's neck, causing Raph to lose the air he saved.
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