Thanks for all of the reviews oceam aka. TOAT, xxredfirexx, fire and sun, Lone Warrior2, Irvine659, Uriko M. Coon, and Soon to be world renown Gracie.
To: oceam aka. TOAT- Of course it is! Glad that you like it.
To: fire and sun- I'm continuing, glad that you found that the best. And I'm not saying anything about Raph…yet.
To: Lone Warrior2- Glad that you like being called a psycho. Grins widely, disturbing huh? Mean? Grab another box of tissues then, and hold on to your skin.
To: Irvine659- Of course it does. I created it, stands proudly.
To: Uriko M. Coon- Don't worry, only a few chapters are left. Here's a clue: two more are going down this time.
To: Soon to be world renown Gracie- I'm definitely not God, I'm joking with you of course…though I ain't him. Glad that you loved it. The first chapter intrigued and ooged you? Never heard of that before.
To: xxredfirexx- here you go, glad you find it good.
Have fun…
Thoughts
With Raph
Raph's unconscious body lightly connected with the bottom of the blood-filled room. The vesania bestia stopped a mere inch away from his neck. "Fifteen seconds," it said with eagerness in it's voice. Raph's form did not move from its position. The blood started to recede quickly and was soon covering only half of the room. "Your body will soon be mine, and your soul will rot in Hell with the rest of your damned 'friends' and 'family'."
With Leo and Master Splinter
Raph stood a few feet away from them, grinning like the Cheshire cat. "The clock's ticking, and it's your move," he said in a chilling whisper. When he said this, chills ran up Master Splinter and Leonardo's spines. Leo and Master Splinter lunged at Raph. When they went to strike, Raph ducked, dodging both blows at once. Jumping back a bit, Raph spoke up, "tsk, tsk, try harder." Master Splinter growled and Leo glared at it.
Lunging again, Leo and Master Splinter planned on trying a different tactic. Master Splinter went for its legs, while Leo went for the arms. Unfortunately, it knew of that routine for years. Recognizing it when they began running, Raph jumped over them, after using their heads like springboards. When he landed, Leo and Master Splinter turned around. "Five seconds."
Master Splinter felt a feeling of dread run through his veins, knowing that they could not save Raphael before the five seconds ran up. "You are still welcome to continue trying to 'revenge' their deaths, but it is not necessary. You can apologize to them in Hell, Leonardo." A deep feeling of guilt filled Leo.
"…And Raphael's time is up…"
With Raph
As the time limit ran out, all of the blood that was occupying the room disappeared without a trace. The vesania bestia stood eagerly next to Raph's, unconscious form. When Raph's time was up, the creature sprang, grabbing the adolescent turtle by the neck. It snapped the neck and bent it to a ninety-degree angle. It bit into the newly formed angle, taking the corner in its mouth. Fresh blood gushed into its mouth. As the vesania bestia drank the warm blood, it torn chunks of flesh from the neck and ate them.
Continuing this act, Raph's head eventually had no skin or muscle attaching it to its body, allowing the dismembered head to fall to the floor of the room. Next it began to devour the skin and muscle at his right shoulder, until it fell to the floor. The vesania bestia continued this on the other shoulder and both thighs. It then proceeded by eating the flesh off of the dismembered limbs. Still, part was still their, not including the bones that is, so the vesania bestia turned to Raph's shell.
It shoved on of its talons into the soft flesh in-between his plastron and shell. It then grabbed one of the edges and pulled up, ripping the plastron off and revealing hidden muscles, but more importantly, hidden flesh. It shoved its face near Raph's flesh, opened its mouth and shoved its teeth through the meat. It ripped up a huge chuck and swallowed it. Continuing this act, soon, all that was left of Raph was his shell, plastron, and bones.
"Now, the others get to die, by the hands of their loved one, Raphael."
With Leo and Master Splinter
Blood began to run down from the sides of Raph's mouth as he watched Leo and Master Splinter. "We're…we're too late," Leo whispered. Tears began to fall from his and Master Splinter's eyes. He had never imagined that seeing one act of immorality could lead to the deaths of his brothers, his friends, soon his father, and him. I have to put a stop to this! Leo thought, that has to be a weak spot on that creature, we just have to find it!
Raph began to grin. "There is no weak spot on my person, Leonardo, you can try to find one, but you will die no matter what you find," Raph said, showing off his blood covered teeth and tongue. Something kept telling Master Splinter that it was Raphael's blood, not the blood of the vesania bestia. Just then Master Splinter remembered something.
It did not bleed when Leonardo stabbed it when it was in the body of that woman. …It did not bleed, what does that mean? Master Splinter thought, knowing that there was some sort of connection. Leo was also caught in his thoughts, not noticing that it had struck, until Master Splinter gasped. Leo looked at Master Splinter and saw Raph breaking Master Splinter's spine, immobilizing him.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk, was it not you who told us to always keep our eyes on our enemies, 'Master' Splinter?" Raph said in a voice that dripped with mockery. "To clear our minds of all thoughts while in battle? Looks like you do not follow what you preach. What a way to die." Raph looked over to Leo and saw that he stood still, frozen by fear.
"Watch this Leonardo," Raph whispered, a grin on his face. He placed his right hand on Master Splinter's head. "Do not worry, he brought the best out of you, he will die quickly, somewhat." Before Leo could think of anything to say, Raph twisted Master Splinter's head in a full three-sixty degrees, snapping the spine and brain stem, giving Master Splinter a partially painful death.
"No need to thank me," Raph said as he stood away from Master Splinter's cooling corpse. "You are next."
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