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ThoughtsRaph held his breath as Hun neared him. There was one thing that Raph knew for certain: this was going to hurt like a bitch. "Say Ah," Hun joked as he lightly placed it on Raph's left leg. Hun then pressed it in deep and twisted it, causing the flesh and skin to be torn apart. Raph screamed when the blade went fully through his leg. Hun stopped twisting to see his work. Blood was flowing profusely from Raph's leg, staining everything in its path. Hun then ripped it out of Raph's leg as fast as he could. Immense pain engulfed Raph as little chucks of his bloody flesh hit the floor and mixed with the puddles of blood. Raph felt his vision begin to swim from lack of blood. Plus, all of the remaining blood was in his head. Hun then pressed the blade to Raph's left shoulder, doing the same thing, and then the right. After Hun finished with the dagger, a large puddle of blood covered the floor. Raph felt the pain leave him as he lost consciousness. Hun put the dagger on the table and unchained Raph's feet, casing Raph's limp body to hit to floor and land in his cold and warm blood. Hun then unhooked Raph's arms, only to re-hook them so Raph was right side up. Hun went over to one of the boxes and sat on it. Hun waited for two hours before Raph began to regain consciousness.
"Uh…Déjà vu," Raph muttered in a hoarse voice as he looked around. Right then Hun grinned and Raph saw him. "An' I ain't pretty." Hun grin disappeared and he narrowed his eyes at Raph.
"Don't worry scum," Hun growled as he stood up and walked towards Raph. "I didn't do anything to you while you were out. I want to hear you scream and PLEAD for mercy." Raph glared back weakly. Hun walked overt to the table and picked up the chainsaw. "Do ya want to see what this can do?"
"No, but I bet ya're gonna show me anyways," Raph said as Hun started the chainsaw.
"Of course, after you."
With Master Splinter, Leo, Donnie, and Mikey
"What did you see Master Splinter?" Leo asked as Master Splinter followed them into Donnie's room. Master Splinter had insisted that they run a search on the Internet.
"At first I was in an hallway. There were at least twenty door, and as far as I could see, there was one floor," Master Splinter said, trying to give Donnie keywords for a search. "I followed the hallway and found Raphael." Mikey, and Leo noticed the look of rage in his eyes and the sorrow in his voice. "The Shredder is behind this."
"I'll search for anything on him in the city," Donnie said as he began to type like the wind. Leo and Mikey exchanged worried looks.
"Are you sure that he's involved in this, Master Splinter?" Leo asked, fearing the truth.
"Hun was, and where ever Hun is, The Shredder is," Master Splinter said as he nodded. Mikey felt nervous all of a sudden. A feeling of pure rage was flowing through all of them when they found this out.
"Got it!" Donnie said as he printed out the article. Everyone gather close to Donnie as he read it silently. "Oroku Saki bought a huge facility a few days ago. Problem, it is in Canada. I have a map with the building highlighted."
"Well, off to the land of Red leafs and maple syrup," Mikey said, trying to relieve the tension in the room. Everyone shook their heads at his attempt. "What? They have a red leaf on their flag…don't they?" Everyone got dress in thick clothes, and they brought an extra pair for Raph. Master Splinter led them to the Battle-Shell, where they decided that Donnie would drive. After Mikey took his bathroom break, they started their drive to Canada.
"I love maple syrup," Mikey said as he looked out the window.
"Focus Michelangelo," Master Splinter warned as he began to meditate in the car. Leo and Mikey decided to join him when the ride became much more smooth.
In their minds
Master Splinter, Leo, and Mikey were in the hallway that Master Splinter had described earlier. "I'm guessing that this is the place," Mikey said. They heard a chainsaw start up and they knew that something was wrong. If they had looked into Master Splinter's eyes, they would have seen fear.
"Follow me," Master Splinter said to them as he began to run down the hallway. Leo and Mikey were in full pursuit. Master Splinter opened the door and they walked in. Master Splinter held a finger to his mouth, signaling for them to be quiet. They nodded and followed Master Splinter. They saw Raph still chained up, only he was no longer upside down. They also saw the blood and Hun walking towards Raph with the chainsaw, grinning. Leo growled and was about to lunge when they heard it.
"Guys, we're here!"
"Donatello," Master Splinter whispered. They snapped out of it when Donnie called again.
Back to the Battle-Shell
Master Splinter, Mikey, and Leo opened their eyes to find the car/truck stopped and Donnie looking at them. "Where here," Donnie said as he pointed out the front windshield and to a one floor, long, white building. It seeped of evil and looked like a doctors office that no one would go to.
"Hurry, we have to find Raphael," Master Splinter said urgently. Everyone nodded, though Donnie did not know in detail what had happened, Mikey briefed him. Master Splinter opened the front door and found that they were in a similar hallway as when they meditated. It was slightly smaller so they began to search for the right hallway, searching behind ever door that they passed. Donnie opened a door and was met with another hallway. He called everyone to him and they realized it right away. This time, not only the sounds of the chainsaw met them, but also mixed with those sounds, were the sound of something being cut and Raph screaming. Master Splinter led them through to the right door and they opened it. The sound intensified as they neared the door and was almost to the point of making them deaf when they opened the door. They walked over to Raph and saw blood flow freely to the floor as Hun cut into him with a grin. A huge puddle of blood was on the floor and they growled before lunging at Hun. Chainsaw or not, they knew that they would give him a painful death, before they freed Raph. Hun didn't see them till it was too late though.
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