My Love

Disclaimer: Lot's might have changed in this rewrite but I still don't own InuYasha or the characters.

Okay hey everybody, this is a rewrite of 'My Love' because let's be honest the previous format sucked and made my story more boring, less descriptive and a lot shorter so here's the new format and there might be a few new things in here, not sure yet but basically it will be the same. Enjoy!

Ages:

Basically everyone is 3 years older.

'Thoughts'

"Talking"

(Me talking or just a side note)

Chapter 1: Will You?

The gang was now close to Naraku's Castle and were preparing for what would hopefully be the final battle. Kagome had all the jewel shards except for the ones that Naraku possessed. They were standing on a small green, flowery hill; they had just exited the forest. They were looking at Naraku's Castle in silence that is till the monk interrupted.

"There it is…"

"Naraku's Castle" finished Sango.

"Now let's go get that bastard"

"InuYasha don't swear, and can I speak to you for a second?"

"Can't it wait?"

"SIT! NO!"

"Fine!"

InuYasha looked over to the monk who winked at him; InuYasha just growled in response and followed Kagome.

"Sango and I will go ahead and cherish our time alone together; you two should do the same!"

Sango's eye twitched and she couldn't take it any more she hit him over the head and dragged his unconscious form off ahead leaving InuYasha and Kagome alone.

"InuYasha…"

"Yea?"

"Just be careful okay"

"Why would you care?"

"Because…just because okay!"

Kagome was tired of InuYasha's temper and began to stomp off when InuYasha grabbed her wrist and pulled her into a hug.

"InuYasha?"

"Thanks" Kagome was shocked at InuYasha, did he just say what she thought he just said.

"Err…for what?"

"For everything, being there for me, caring for me and you know that kind of stuff!"

'And for showing a filthy half breed like me what love is' InuYasha added in his head.

"Um…sure, no problem"

Kagome pulled out of his embrace and was about to leave when InuYasha pulled her back and gave her a quick peck on the lips. Kagome was shocked.

"Sorry Kagome I didn't mean to…" but he was interrupted with Kagome putting her arms around his neck and kissing him. When he got over the shocked he returned the kiss.

SMACK

The two broke apart from the sudden sound. They were both blushing from their intimate moment.

"Miroku again"

"Yea we better go catch up with them"

When InuYasha and Kagome caught up with Miroku and Sango they saw a familiar sight an unconscious monk and a flustered Sango. InuYasha and Kagome sweat dropped.

"What did he do this time?"

"Asked me to bear him a child after this was over"

"Hey weren't you the only one he never asked?"

"Yea and…"

"Maybe he was serious"

"Kagome I doubt it"

"Let's go"

The group headed off to Naraku's castle.

(At Naraku's Castle)

The group came into a dark wide room and saw Naraku standing there looking emotionless as usual. They had already destroyed all his allies and he was the last one he had to face.

"Welcome"

"Bastard"

"InuYasha I go out of my way to be nice to you and this is how you treat me?"

"Enough with the chitchat" InuYasha rushes towards Naraku.

"Oh so it's a fight you want is it?"

(Okay I can't write fighting scenes but I will try and I'm sorry but I can't remember how Miroku fights and I can't remember what Sango's weapon is called)

InuYasha lunged again at Naraku cutting one of his many tentacles, Sango threw her boomerang cutting off another and Kagome's arrow cut of yet another but it didn't help much, they jut grew right back. Worse yet Naraku didn't seem to notice the hits from anyone, his attention was only focused on InuYasha who's injuries were fast becoming serious.

'How much longer can I hold on?'

Naraku striked InuYasha one more time before he fell over.

"InuYasha!"

Naraku got ready to deliver the final blow and kill InuYasha when he started to feel the room heat up; he turned around to find Kagome glowing he decided to ignore InuYasha and started to head towards Kagome.

"Leave her alone, your battle is with me"

Naraku turned to find InuYasha half standing with a fully transformed tetsaiga.

"It's true, Dog Demons, even halves are very protective towards their bitches"

"Leave him alone or else!"

"Or else what?"

"This…" The whole room was absorbed in a bright whitish/ pinkish light.

After the light fades everyone is fully healed and the jewel and Naraku are gone. InuYasha looks over to see Kagome smiling but looking rather weak like she's about to fall over and she was crying. "Kagome?"

"Inu, you finally did it, you killed Naraku"

'Inu!'

"And my wind tunnel is finally gone!" Sango glomps Miroku while kissing him and they fall onto the ground while InuYasha and Kagome watch while laughing.

"It's about time those two got together"

"I love you Kagome" Kagome looked at InuYasha in shock only to find that he had fallen asleep. 'Did he say what I think he said?'

(At the camp site)

It was now night time and they had just finished setting up camp, Sango and Miroku were flirting etc by the campfire while InuYasha was up the tree being look out like usual.

"Inu?"

"Yea?"

"I love you too"

"…"

"Sit!"

"What was that for!" Kagome walk's up to him and gives him a quick peck on the lips. "So I could do that" InuYasha got up looking slightly surprised but he was smirking He leaned down and kissed Kagome back.

"Inu, I have a question.

"What is it?"

"Do you mind if we go some where they can't hear us?"

"Fine, hop on"

(Random place not to far, but far enough from the camp site)

"So what was it you wanted to ask?"

"Um…when Naraku called me your 'bitch', what did he mean?"

"…"

"Inu?"

"Well…it's kind of a dog demons version of the human wife I guess"

"Oh so when dog demons get married they call their wives their bitches?"

"Not really, dog demons don't get married they err…mate for life which is similar to the human version of marriage except you can't get out of it except for by death"

"Oh"

"So when are we going to your time again, it's a new moon tomorrow?"

'Inu actually wants to go to my time!'

"We'll head there first thing tomorrow morning, we better head back"

"Okay let's go before Miroku makes any perverted comments"

"It might be too late for that"

(Back at the camp site)

When InuYasha and Kagome got back Miroku and Sango where curled up together and surprisingly Miroku was keeping his hands to himself.

"Inu can I sleep with you in the tree tonight?"

"Sure" InuYasha lifted her up and they stopped at a good sturdy look out branch. They settled down with InuYasha's back against the tree and Kagome against his chest.

"Goodnight Inu"

"Err…night"

(Next Morning)

Miroku and Sango were getting ready to head to Kaede's village and Kagome and InuYasha were getting ready to go back to Kagome's time.

"Have fun, bye!"

"Bye"

"I'm sure they'll have lot's of fun!"

"Sit!"

(Kagome's time/ place)

"Mama I'm home!"

"Hello Kagome and InuYasha"

"How did you know I was here?"

"I just know"

"What's that supposed to mean!"

"Nothing!" (Sing song voice, mothers know everything don't they? -)

"Inu do you want some ramen?"

"You still ask?"

"Here you go, I'm going to go shower, no peeking!"

"Eh!"

InuYasha carried on slurping his ramen while Kagome went to go shower and her mom kept doing the dishes. When InuYasha finished Mrs H came and sat down next to him and stared at him like she was expecting something.

"What!"

"So when are you going to ask her?"

"Ask who what?"

"Ask Kagome for her hand in marriage"

"Why would I want her hand?"

"I mean ask her to marry you"

"Keh"

"I know you want to, and you have my permission to do so if you want as long as you promise to never hurt her"

"Um..."

Yes?"

"Ho do you ask for someone to marry you here?"

"You have to buy a ring; I'll take you shopping tomorrow!"

"Thanks!"

Kagome's Mom then walked off and went to phone one of her friends like some hyper school girl with some juicy gossip.

(Next Day)

"Kagome I'm taking InuYasha shopping, he needs some stuff"

"Um…okay"

"InuYasha, let's go!"

'What have I gotten myself into' "See ya Kagome!"

(At the Jewellery store)

"Now you just have to pick one"

"How bout this silver one with the small blue jewel?"

"Good choice, Kagome loves Sapphires and white gold!" (A/N: I made that bit up, as if I would have a clue as into what kind of jewellery she likes, but that's the kind I like)

(Kagome and InuYasha are now back in the past, after spending just over a week in Kagome's time)

"Come with me I want to how you something"

"Err…sure"

Kagome looked at her surroundings to find she was by a lake and the flowers had only recently started to bloom because it was early spring.

"Well…um I'm not very good with words but…Kagome?"

"Yea"

"Will you marry me?"

"Are you serious?"

'Oh shit she doesn't like me I should have known, I'm so stupid'

"Keh"

"Oh Inu of course I want to, I just couldn't believe you had asked me"

InuYasha ears perked up and he couldn't help but smile, he leaned forward and kissed her for as long as her human lungs would allow.

"One more thing"

"What?"

"Will you be my mate?"

A/N: So what shall the answer be, shall this author be evil and make Kagome say no? Or will she make it even fluffier by making Kagome's reply yes? Stay tuned to find out in chapter 2! R&R

EDIT: So how's the rewrite, yes the fighting scene sucks and I can't write for peanuts but I'm not forcing you to read this. Any tips etc please stick it in the reviews thanks.

Wow the original format only had 988 words, this one has 1, 700 words, remember most of the original ones words were just the words saying who the speaker is eg 'InuYasha'