Even if no one is reading this I'll update to give you an idea of what I mean in the first chapter.
And could you read my first story and tell me what you think.
Chapter 2: Tala's side of the story.
It all started when we were about 3 or 4 years old, well from what I've seen anyway.
Kyrose was only 3 when I first saw what she could do, it wasn't what she did that shocked me but what I heard her say…
You see we can beyblade but only those who can pull off extreme launches have another thing that's… well unique.
Take Kai and myself for example, we are both great bladers but we are different to everyone else, Kai can levitate things and I'm physic, meaning I can see the past, present, and future, read peoples minds, channel my thoughts etc… Kyrose can't beyblade as well as us but she has another ability that makes up for that, she can heal people.
The first time that I saw this was when we were little, Kai and I were standing in front of Rose to shield her from the man that runs this performing arts thing, anyway we were shielding her until he grabbed Kai by the throat, lifted him up and threw him against a wall, I ran over and saw that he was bleeding from his mouth and head, I knew that he was dying, Rose came over and said, "Don't worry Tala, Kai's ok he's my best friend, he won't get hurt see."
She walked over to him and placed her hands on his chest, his eyes closed, I guess it was because she was healing him but I didn't know it at the time.
"Kai's gonna be ok, he won't die. I need you're help, TALA ARE YOU LISTENING!" she was crying, I could see that she wanted to help, but didn't know how.
About 3 seconds after she yelled at me I snapped out of my vision, "I know how to help you," I said, "here…"
I took her hands and placed one on Kai's head and one on his chest, "Now concentrate, if you do Kai will be all better ok?" I stood back, and that's when I knew that she would help us all get through this.
Her hands began to glow and so did her eyes, Kai began to stir and the blood was disappearing, for some reason she believed that if she helped Kai everything would be alright, how wrong she was…
Kai got up and rubbed his head, slowly he stood up and looked around, Rose was smiling and I was as white as a bed sheet, to use Kai's description of me, "What the hell happened here?"
Rose just laughed and hugged him, I nodded at Kai and walked away, thoughts of events to come running through my head, I saw Kai only older on the floor covered in blood, myself but older in a headlock suffocating, Rose strapped to a chair watching Kai die slowly, a cold, cruel laugh was echoing in my ears…
"Tala? Tala wake up do you hear me? TALA!" Kai was shaking me trying to wake me up.
"What…" I replied sounding tired, "it's only 3 o'clock in the morning go away…" I muttered rolling over.
"No it's 4:15 pm now get up off the floor." I heard Kai get to his feet and step backwards.
I opened my eyes took Kai's offered hand and stood up, it wasn't the first time that I had a vision and passed out. I told Kai what I saw but he didn't believe me, so 4 years later I had the same vision only I was awake when it finished, I told Kai and he believed me.
Now, 10 years later, when I walk down this passage I know that my warning to him and Rose will not be forgotten.
"Hnnnn"
"Hey Tala!" a voice cried from the shadows, "what are you doing down here alone…"
The man grabbed me and put me in a headlock, my vision is becoming a reality…
End Chapter…
Phew that's a lot to write and pls R&R it means a lot.
