Hello lol
You know i am not the author of the story like i have written X times.
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So some ideas for the beginning of the rewrite to all of you who have ideas or want to read it.
First if it was me who write it i have the SI have the corps of sheppard when the caretaker experiment of him and gain access to the caretaker array.
First the SI will take the bluprint of the caretaker array, the space station with all his technology and database.
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From its large block of data, the Si will give Voyager crew some task like :
- find a galaxy map,
- find an atlas of the races know with their territory, government, history and languages,
- find the blueprint of the sensor,
- find the blueprint of the reactor ( tetryon reactor ),
- find the energy weapon blueprint ( who were capable to give energy to ocampa ),
- find the medical and holographic facility blueprint,
- find the shield (tetryon shield ),
- find how they travelled 75 000 light year in X times,
Response : displacement wave that could drag ships from other parts of the galaxy.
- find blueprint of armour,
- find ftl tech ...
Caretaker tech upgraded acquise.
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With those task the SI give the crew some objectifs to work up.
(And he doesnt use Inspired Inventor points for knowledge he shouldnt know.)
Even if the SI know from his future knowledge that it will take X years to come back.
Or that they would not come back from it because they cant make a space station to push them back home.
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The SI to train, give ideas or let the crews search some technologic paths on their own create some reality case like in Sword Art Online with better security, a link to the Doctor and no dead switch tech.
But the VR case function when the user dreams and times is X 50 times.
With this tech, the SI give access to games like Crysis, Metroid, Dead Space,Call of Duty, The Division, Metal Gear, Mass Effect trilogie and Andromeda, Doom, Halo, Alien and Predator, SAO, Star Wars and Titanfall to security.
Same to command he give access to ME Andromeda, Battlestar galactica, Starcraft, Supreme Commander, Planetary Annihilation, Command & Conquer ( Tiberium and Red Alert ), Starcraft, Homeworld...
For the pilots like Kim and Tom Paris introduce them to knightmare of code geass, mobile suit and mobile armour from gundam série, the titans from titanfall and armored core or starship from babylon 5, starwars, starcraft,
For the engineer departement see some other scifi games like No Mans Sky, Metroid, marvel, dc and the games of command for ideas of news techs for Voyager.
For the science département see Stargatee, Doctor Who, Crysis, Metroid, Call of Duty, Dead space, The Division, Metal Gear, Mass Effect trilogie and Andromeda, Doom, Halo, Star Wars and Titanfall.
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Idem the SI post on a board for the crew :
- what tech can upgrade the ship,
- what tech can help the crew,
- what tech can be produced,
- what tech can ge amuding,
- what tech can be interresting...
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Tell me :
What you think of my ideas ? Good or Bad ?
How you think the Voyager crew will like those games, ideas, animes or movies ?
What games, animes or movies, do you think, should be used to prepare the crew for the future ?
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Do you think the SI shouldnt ask that holo tech be installed in all the ship for the Doctor from the start of the delta campagn ?
And should the SI ask the crew if they want some holo copy from the dead crew, for psychological help or for crew work ?
Do you think more of the episode of the serie should be used or news be created ?
