Beginning- The remix (chapter 4)
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-Mk
Chapter 4, summary:
Sakura, Tomoyo and Eriol are in uni, but it seems someone else is too, making new friends, learning more, that's what its all about.
"Oh my god! ohh my god! We're in UNIVERSITY! ARGHHHHHHHHHHH" yells Tomoyo so that everyone around her turns
"Yeah, I'm a little shaken too! This has to be different to high school? We're all sharing a room this time" laughs Sakura
"Hey! Don't think I haven't forgotten those nasty jokes you guys kept saying about me and snoring on the phone, and how it would be sharing a room in Uni," laughs Eriol
"We're in room 11, A block, ah! Here we are" said Eriol excitedly
"Oh! I heard these rooms are really good! A blocks the best apparently, lucky we booked earlier!" says Sakura
Click – They open the door to find an average sized sitting room and a built in kitchen, 2 bedrooms and a bathroom
"Hmmm, not to bad, I like it, lets take a look around," says Tomoyo pleased
"Alright, looks like there's 2 bed rooms, 2 beds in each, Tomoyo and I will go-" said Eriol being cut off
"laughs No, laughs again , I think Sakura might get a bit lonely by herself so I'll be room mates with her" said Tomoyo laughing
"laughs But what about me! I'll get lonely!" jokes Eriol
"You're a big boy now, I'm just in the other room if you need anything!" says Tomoyo
"Oh alright then" smiles Eriol
"laughs Thanks Tomo, I'd hate to be left alone by myself while you 2 are talking and having fun" jokes Sakura
Knock Knock Sakura answers the door
"Hello-" she cuts off
"Uh hey" blushes the man " I'm suppose to be your new room mate, I was told there was a spare space in this room" he says
"Ah yes, that's right, sorry I forgot, My names Sakura Avalon, and this is Tomoyo Daidouji and her boyfriend Eriol Hiiragizawa" says Sakura
"Nice to meet you all" shakes Sakura's hand
"I'm Syaoran Li, your new room mate, I hope we can all be friends," he says
"Hey Syaoran" they all say
"You'll be bunking with me, Sakura will be sad without her best friend "sighs" ah well laughs we're going to have more fun than the girls, ain't that damn straight?" says Eriol sarcastically
"laughs What ever, Sakura and I are going to look around and try to find some of our classes" says Tomoyo smiling
"See you girls later" say the boys
The girls grab their room keys and walk out with their schedules, while the boys begin to unpack their stuff
"I cant wait to settle in here, we're gonna have a blast! You guys are a lot nicer than the last lot, they kicked me out cause they wanted free beds so they could make room, I would have complained to stay but why bother? Their no fun" said Syaoran
"laughs Yeah I know what you mean, the world can be tough sometimes, we've met some bad eggs while we've all been mates, but we live with it" says Eriol
"Anything really bad?" says Syaoran
"Ah well in year 7, this was when I first met the girls, first day "sighs", Tomoyo was so beautiful, her long hair, black velvet hair swished and flowed in the breeze-" Eriol paused
(Long silence happening as Eriol starts to drool)
"Um Eriol?" says Syaoran finally
"laughs Yeah, I'm just messing with ya, but yeah she was beautiful, anyway, Sakura had bumped into and fell over this other boy, that's how we met because I came to check if they were ok. This "boy" asked her out and with the moment she said yes, they met up but he cheated on her with another girl, it really hurt Sakura being the first date and all" said Eriol sadly
"What happened, Is she ok now?" said Syaoran
"She's ok now, but it hurt her that much she set up her girls dolls" said Eriol
"Her dolls?" said Syaoran confused
"Yes, girls day dolls, It's believed every day they are left out is another day the daughter will not get married. She's only ever put them away twice since then" says Eriol
"Why is that? Said Syaoran curiously
"Because, first time she moved house, and second time well, we're in University now and she's moving all her stuff" said Eriol
"What happened to the boy?" said Syaoran
"Ah, "France", he made it to year 9, by then everyone hated him as he'd either hurt them (the girls) or they girlfriends (the boys)" says Eriol
"Ah, Sakura must be very sensitive aye? She's very beautiful though, it's no surprise any guy would ask her out first time they see her" says Syaoran
"Yeah she is, never really let go of it all, that fancies thing, hurt her a lot to be dumped first time round" said Eriol
"I'll see if I can help her, It's Uni now, new people, new friends aka ME, new surroundings, she's got to let go sometime!" says Syaoran
"laughs Well I'm here with ya brother, just tell me what to do" says Eriol
"That new guy Syaoran's cute don't you think Sakura?" says Tomoyo
"Yeah he's alright, nice eyes I guess" said Sakura
"Hmmm, you don't suppose you might consider going out with him after getting to know each other?" says Tomo curiously
"No, no way! Don't do this to me Tomo, Eriol is just one in a millon and lucky for you, all the other boys are stinky turds and perverts and I don't want to have my heart broken, or that feeling … like last time" Sakura said fading out
"Oh Sakura, you are so insecure, NOT ALL BOYS ARE LIKE FRANCIS! You have to understand that everyone is different and so is he, he's only interested in what he can get, now just think about it? Ok?" said Tomo loudly
"Yeah yeah whatever, hey this campus is really beautiful, can't wait to start our classes" says Sakura
"…Yeah, me neither" said Tomo
Later that evening
"Hmmm, lalala, humalalahamalala WHOAAAAAA!" screams Sakura
"I've got you!" says Syaoran sprinting over and catching her
Sakura blushes "Thanks Syaoran, these boxes are heavy" she says
"That's alright, no problem, here let me help" said Syaoran as he helped carry her things
"Whoa girl! you guys have a lot of stuff, by the way, where is Tomoyo anyway, shouldn't she be unpacking? And Eriol too now that you think about it" he says
"Well Tomoyo and Eriol have gone out as a well, celebration date, they've been together for 6 years now from today" says Sakura unhappily
"What's wrong Sakura?" says Syaoran gazing into her deep green eyes watching her, feeling helpless
"Eriols just so perfect, I wish all boys were like him, I'm happy for Tomo" smiles Sakura though deep down she was crying
"Sakura … not all guys are like Francis" he said softly
"ERIOL TOLD?" Sakura yelled
"Uh well, I was talking about you and he brought it up" says Syaoran trying to cover his mistake
"Oh, why were you talking about me then?" smiles Sakura
"AH, Um, urgh, well you see, you wear a lot, of um, PINK, that's it, sorry I forgot, yes you look very nice in pink" says Syaoran
"I'm wearing green right now?" Sakura blushes while giggling
"Um well I can tell since your names Sakura being cherry blossom, which can be pink, and girls like the colour pink and I'm sure you have a lot of pink clothes, … (whispers) I have a 6th sense you know (winks)" says Syaoran thinking he's got off Scott free
He blushes "I'm going to make some tea, would you like one?" he says trying to change the subject
"I'd love some" smiles Sakura, as she begins to go into deep thought
That was chapter 4! What did ya think mates? Well next chapter's summary:
Was Tomoyo supposedly right? Does Syaoran have a 6th sense? Dolls set up.
Keep reading as more surprises are up ahead
-Mk l8er dudes