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now means thoughts
sorry bout this just it's getting a little confusing to write.
When I young boy fell from a boat into the water, he started flailing but started to sink. I jumped in when I saw shadow moving towards the boy I looked up and saw the girl flying towards him. The beautiful woman captivated me as she flew to the boy. Silently cheering her on.
Chapter 5
As I watched her fly I noticed she had wings, that weren't there before. They were dark, almost black like the night sky; they were not small but not huge either. I could see the determination etched in her face as the wind blew her short slivery hair. I watched, wading in the water, as she dove in, disappearing from my sight. As I waited it seemed to be taking along time I start getting impatient, thinking 'the kid couldn't have been that far under, right?' Or, 'what if they're stuck, or being attacked I got to help them' as I swam towards the boat I saw bubbles float to the surface.
Flash sequence
I, in fear increased my speed hoping to be able to help if they were in danger but as I was almost there, they appeared from the water the child was placed on the boat and what I can tell as CPR was being used, though it wasn't as good as what we used in Canada. I told her, "Here let me try" as I started I could still feel a weak pulse so I began as fast as I could after 5 breaths he started to cough spluttering water from his lungs. I looked up relief washing through me. When I looked at the woman again she smiling at me without her wings. I notice how violet her eyes are as I stare at them.
End flash
"Hey! Is the kid okay?" can be heard from the ever-loud Dog. I groan as I was pulled out of my trance. Just as she breaks through the water, splashing me. I watched as she set him in the boat waiting for him to breath, check his pulse. I swam closer waiting for her to give the boy C.P.R. but she doesn't I ask her, "Why aren't you giving C.P.R.?" She looks at me and blinks. I start getting the boy in position and begin I try 3 times before his body starts to convulse in and out. I look up relieved his all right and see her looking at me in awe. I start blushing and fall in the water. As I go under I feel my self-turning red in embarrassment. Eventually I started to swim for the surface. Once I get there I see the boy chatting with his father about what happened, getting excited about how he was saved and given the breath of life by a 'demon'.
A while later
Once the excitement died down, it was getting dark. The fire crackled merrily bringing almost everyone closer. Stupid fire's they're either to hot or to cold, why can't I just sleep, and where is Shiori? This is her village maybe she's doing a patrol. I start to get up, but as I do she appears from the woods. Grinning evilly the girls drag the poor girl of to the nearest hot springs, That poor, poor girl I thought and as if my thoughts were heard aloud the darn monk looking happy about something spoke up, "Well I think I'll go for a walk in village see if I can read any fortunes, so long" as he turned away, "Not so fast Monk take the kid with ya, I got to talk with the brat here" referring to Shippo.
"Why?" he declares. "Fine, come on" as he pulls me along. Confused I am forced to follow. As were walking he tells me to be quiet, confused I wonder where we're going. As the quietness engulfs me I hear the sound of laughter ringing through the air. Miroku pulls me along going slowly. "Now whatever you do don't talk or scream or even whimper alright." Then he disappears from my sight, walking carefully I continue the way I was going. Slowly the sounds of laughter become mixed with voices, curiously I go forward until. I step to far and out from the bushes to see a little clearing, my breath catches as I see the girls laughing at Kagome doing, very realistic impressions of Inuyasha while in the hot spring, but my eyes were caught on the sight of Shiori. Sitting there giggling lightly. But at my gasp and collapse as I fall I hear them start shrieking and a splash, as I remember nothing more.
"Ugh, wha… where m I?" was my low question finding it hard to even breathe. "Well, Well, Well the new pervert awakes." Came the snide remark. Confused I look up to see a very pissed of Kagome. "What?" was my intelligent reply. "Come we say you at the hot springs what were you doing there, I though Mirku was the only one stupid enough to try to peak?" Peak what's she talking about…. Oh crap that was what Miroku was doing that letch, I'll kill 'im "I am really sorry Miroku dragged me off their and I didn't know where I was, honest I don't even remember what happened after I walked into the clearing." Oh man I hope they believe me please believe me.
"Alright, that I can understand but why did you stare at us like that, and why did you go towards the voices?" asked Sango.
"I didn't know… remember that you guys, uh girls were in the hot springs and I couldn't see where I was going, #blush# I never saw a woman before… well like that, and well I kinda went La La and then I don't know what happened" I state quietly, feeling embarrassed and ashamed by what I just said.
"Did you like what you saw?" asked Shiori, as soon as I understood what she had said and looked I saw she was blushing a deep pink. "Uh…well…uh" was all I got out before I was interrupt by the now blushing Sango, "what are talking about Shiori? Who cares if he liked it!"?
"Well, I don't know I mean he can't forget what he saw, and I would like to know if he liked it." Was all she said before becoming quiet once again. I just stared, she wants to know what my opinion is? I can't say it or they'll kill me, or Sango will anyway, what to say what to say? "I thought you were like an angel, bathed in an ethereal light.", oh crap did I just say that, I am dead, hello hell I closed my eyes waiting for the torture, timidly I open my eyes to see, a starry eyed Kagome and a blushing Sango and Shiori. I gulp feeling very scared I start to back away, but as I do so, Kagome squeals out, "oh that's so romantic, I wish Inuyasha would say that to me" 'My God this woman are weird' sweating I slowly try to back away from the woman, then once she calms down I stand up. "Um… I am really sorry about all this, I never meant to… uh… see 'that' I just hope you don't kill me and can forgive me someday soon." Oh crap I am giving them ideas.
"Thanks" the voice just a whisper that I barley heard it, as Shiori walked away almost unnoticed by the other woman. My eyes stayed unknowingly glued to where she disappeared all I could think was, why is she saying thanks
Don't know what to say I can't seem to make the other characters more interesting help could be nice.