Ok thx for my 10 reviews. Also thanks for the offer, but I think I'm just going to do the chapters for my self. I think I will improve over time…hopefully……. Also if I find out I can't do it I'll ask you until then….. Anyways inuyasha gets cold…..very cold in the rest of the story. You should see what happens to kikyo and any other I see that would please him. He might change he might not, but one thing is for sure kagome woops his ass………

On with the story………………………………...

Kagome woke up in the morning with the biggest hangover ever in the history of history. "Man what I did I do last night?" kagome wondered. She felt like she was going to barf all over. Kagome ran into the bathroom opening the lid vomiting all over the toilet seat. "Ewwww" she though. Kagome's mom who heard the noise was there in a second.

"Kagome go to bed your not an any condition to do anything right now," kagome's mom said. Kagome wanted to protest but though it was best to do what she told her. Her mother wasn't the type to give up until she won. Kagome walked back into her room and went to sleep basically five minutes after she got in. Miss. H (that's her name for me) went into the kitchen after she was finished where she meets grandpa reading the newspaper.

"So did you tell her yet?" grandpa said as he looked up from the paper.

"No it's best she finds out on her own," she replied.

"So you figure that she will learn from her mistakes?" gramps asked.

"It works every time," she replied plainly. She went back working on cutting tomatoes for dinner.

Kagome woke up about two hours after she slept from the smell of Chile. "I better get back to inuyasha other wise he might go crazy" she though. She got up and was just about to go down stairs when something hit her. "Where are the jewel shards?" she though. She reached down in to her pockets searching for them, but couldn't find them. Kagome began to panick, yet there was something else she couldn't quite place in her mind. "I better stay here and try to remember. I'll just have to skip dinner," she though. Kagome sat down leaning her head against her wall trying her best to regain her memory's from the pervious night. She kept trying until she drifted off to sleep……….

Flash back………………………………...

"Kagome…….Why did you do it. Why would you of all people betray me?" Inuyasha said hurt. (I would, but I'm not doing the thing with kagome drunk. She will speak clearly in this part)

"You want me to tell you why? Cause you're a dirty rotten halfbreed with fleas. You only think of yourself halfbreed! You're not welcome here!" she yelled at him.

"Fine bitch give me what's properly mine, the jewel shards!" he screamed at her. She handed them over and smacked him across the face.

End flash back…………………

Kagome woke up with sweat dripping down her face. "I couldn't be real……. Is it?" kagome though. She then ran outside not caring what time it was or the shouts coming from her mother. All she cared about right now was inuyasha. Kagome looked at the bottom of the well ready to jump down. Little did she know that she needed the jewel shards. She jumped falling face first in the dirt. She passed out at the bottom of the well.

Inuyasha didn't care about what sango, miroku, and shippo though. He was going to kill naraku on his own. He though that nothing can stop him even his own father in a fight. Inuyasha was ready for anything. "Naraku will die tonight….." he though.

Flash back…………..

"Inuyasha what's wrong?" asked a concerned sango. Miroku looked up at inuyasha with concern checking his eyes to see if he can read his emotions, but they were was cold as sesshomaru's. He did catch one emotion though, the lust for power.

"I'm done traveling with you now. I'm leaving for good," he replied. Miroku couldn't believe his ears. Inuyasha alone? Traveling himself? With no kagome?

"But inuyasha what about us," sango pleaded. She looked up catching his cold gaze.

"What about you," he replied coldly as walking off.

End of flash back………………………………...

"Let me find you Naraku. Tonight will be very entertaining, but the problem is finding you. For a year now you managed to escape me tonight will be different. Tonight………………" Inuyasha said bloodthirsty. "Hmmm I see kikyo is around here let's see if she will let my have some fun with her" He laughed inside his mind. He circled around the forest running as fast as he can trying to reach passed his limits. Kikyo was in his site now and much to his pleasure Naraku. He lowered himself walking into the shadows. He caught there conversation easily.

"But…..but I can't kill him Naraku I love him….. Please anything but that I'll kill my copy but not inuyasha," Kikyo pleaded.

"Who do you love more kikyo, me the great Naraku or Inuyasha from the weak halfbreed race. With the final pieces of the jewel shards you can have your body back, and I…….and I will be a full demon," he said happily.

"I love you more Naraku, but I still don't want to kill him. I don't even know if I can he has grown in power since the last time we met," she said. Naraku leaned down and kissed her and she kissed back. After the kiss was done they stared at each other for a while.

"Naraku what will happen if inuyasha gets the jewel shard and becomes pure blood. He would be very strong. You seen how powerful he is as a half breed he would be unstoppable. I don't think we would stand a chance and with that copy around it will only fuel him," Kikyo asked. There was a pause at least a minute naraku felt someone watching.

"Naraku?" Kikyo asked.

"Kagura see what's hiding in the shadows," Naraku commanded. The wind witch stepped out from behind a tree nodding to her master. She walked into the forest not knowing that she will never return.

"Now back to the matter at hand naraku. We have the wolf what should we do with him he is no use now. Should we kill him?" kikyo asked. Naraku looked at her about to nod but didn't get to finish.

"No he is mine to kill no one else's. Naraku I'm from the weak halfbreed race? Have you forgotten that you're a half blood and much less stronger than me," Inuyasha said. Naraku and Kikyo looked up in shock.

"Kagura where are you," Naraku though.

"If your looking for Kagura here she is," Inuyasha replied. He tossed a body with claw marks all over. (She isn't dead kagura plays a big part in the story) Naraku couldn't believe what was happening. First he was found by someone who couldn't even find him for a year. Second, He killed someone with out even hearing a noise at all.

"Naraku your next," with that inuyasha charged at Naraku pulling out tetsusaiga in the process. Naraku was surprised at the sudden burst of inuyasha but dodged his swings. Kikyo ran to the other side of the battle field pulling out her arrows aiming at inuyasha. "Hmm I'm out numbered. I have to get kikyo to shoot him, but how?" he though. Naraku jumped in the air and was quickly followed by inuyasha.

"WIND SCAR!" Inuyasha yelled a yellow lines came out aiming for his body. Naraku tried to dodge but failed the attack made contact with his body ripping it to shreds. Naraku's heart was the only thing that was left on the field besides his pieces of flesh. "The heart that's the key to his life or death. I have to destroy it," Inuyasha though. Inu ran after his heart. Kikyo who knew what inuyasha was about to do aimed carefully and fired her arrow. Inuyasha wasn't paying any notice until a pink light made contact with the right side of his face burning and ruining his right side forever. Inuyasha flew back into a tree. Blood running down his face. It hurt like hell, but he wouldn't show any pain or weakness. Inuyasha put his hands on it to only feel nothing but nasty freshly burned flesh and he was ashamed his right side was completely gone. He stood up looking at kikyo with hatred ready for his next kill. He charged at her, Kikyo tried to ready another arrow, but was too late she was turned into a pile of the thing she was before anything dust and bones. "Fuck I shouldn't have done that, but I see naraku still hasn't even got his body complete yet," he though. Inuyasha looked at the have that was trying to recuperate.

"WIND SCAR!" he yelled a second time. His other half split apart again. Inuyasha walked over to Naraku's heart slicening it into pieces. Naraku was gone…….It was over. Inuyasha couldn't help but smile at what he had accomplished on his own with no help at all. He bend down to pick up his jewel shard adding the rest of the pieces. It was complete he made his wish.

"I wish I was full fledge demon with my own control no one else's," He said. Pink light surrounded him.

Ok here is my other chapter I know it is ooc……. I'm not even caring, but that's what I think what would happen if kagome really did that to him. I don't wanna sound picky but I need like 5 reviews to keep going. I will have another chapter up by tomorrow I'm into this story I even read it like a thousand times.