Alright cool, so yeah! This is chapter 8 yo, i think, crap i gotta check again. YUP this is chapter 8. In my efforts of reading the story, well the um, seventh chapter, i relized how this story is going into the gutter.(i don't mean like getting less popular, i mean like with the dirtyness.) I mean i guess i was so unreasonably censored that i wrote that. But hell this is more like an experimental thing, (think excel saga) i didn't know that you people would love it so much. I am so happy, yet disgusted with myself that i wrote something like this. (but who cares if i wrote something more explict then this, i usually rip it up or put it into the forbidden folder i have stashed away...) Well i don't have one of those but i think i should get one. Write with big black letters, NC-17, even though i am like under that age. Maybe i will just put it as... THE FORBIDDEN MATERIAL! DUM DUM DUMMMMMMM! Okay sorry for getting so like dramatic on you guys, but i just watched Private Benjerman, and it has some really funny stuff in it. Like when the guy was making love to this girl, he has a heart attack and dies on her. I was cracking up, and wait, i'm not suppose to be telling you that, i am suppose to be writting a story. Gees, i usually write a sentence in here...


AND NOW THANK YOU TO THESE PEOPLE...

Sesshoumaur's Luver- You spelled Sesshoumaru like weird, but i don't care i love your screen name. But lemme tell you he is MINE! AHAHHAHAHAAHHA Gees now i sound like a crazy person. You like reviewed 1, 2, 7, 8, that's trés intérestante. Je pense vous êtes aliéné, mais c'est bien parce que bon je pense que vous êtes mignon. Take French. I think Akito is awesome! Tohru is cool, but annoying sometimes. I mean it is impossible for someone to be so nice.

cptlydia - gees, your name sounds like clymittia, well that's what it reminded me of. Donuts and climitta, damn we've got a party! Sorry if you are like under 12, disreguard the first sentence, and if you are not, then you can call me a disgusting pervert. I just had to like reply to you cause i thought your review was just so funny. Thank you for damning me, that is really nice... GRRRRR. Uh, i responded to you? Like where, dude get your sn on here, it's as easy as 1, 2, 3. Now i have to go eat some donuts, even though we don't have any in the house, maybe tony has some. (Tony is my friend, she is like in the other chapter if you like read the review responces.) Thank you for the birthday wish and also Happy... whatever you celebrate.

anime airi13- well you betted...correctly...hehe. Um yeah, i did get a lot of presents, it was cool. MY dad is clueless about me thou. So here is the story!

Kyonkichi05 - NO DONUTS FOR YOU TONY!

invisible cappucino conspiracy- yes... oh and jelly you wrote a lemon and didn't tell me? I'm gonna kill you! I WANNA READ IT!

Everyone else- SUP! MERRY CHRISTMAS and stuff...


"Haru?" Tohru asked.

"Yeah it's me." He came out of the darkness and eyed her.

"P-please, help me, he, Kyo tied me to the wall." She rattled the chains that held her arms.

"How long has he left you down here?"

"I don't know, maybe an hour or so, just please, unchain me, he is probably going to come back any minute."

"I can't." Haru scratched his head, and sighed.

"What! What do you mean, you can't? Of course you can! Release me!"she yelled to him angrily. He showed up, and now he wasn't going to help her? What a waist!

"If he doesn't find you where he left you, he will know someone helped you free. Why are you chained down here anyway?"

"I don't know, Kyo went crazy and locked me down here, now you have to help me please!"

"I can't Tohru, the answer is no." He began to walk away, neglecting her.

"Please Haru, he's going to kill me."

Haru turned towards her. "Why will he want to kill you, he payed so much for you."

"Come look at my neck and check what he tried to do."

Haru stomped over, and pushed away the hair on her neck. He saw two bite marks on her neck, and then pulled away. "He bit you?"

"Yes, please, please Haru, help me."

"I, umm," He grabbed onto the shackles and in seconds they were off. "How did you do that?" Tohru asked.

"Maybe i shouldn't of did that, you probably won't survive that long."

"Survive? Come on, it's just."

"Let's go."Haru pulled her through many hallways and cells, finally she was out into the open.

"Hold on tight."Haru held onto her hugging her, and then flew off into the distance. Tohru held onto him as hard as she could and buried her face in his chest. "Calm down Tohru." Tohru started to cry even more, and then...black out.

"Tohru, wake up. Tohru." Tohru opened her eyes and saw Haru, he was over her, with a concerned look on his face. "Are you alright?"

"Mmm hmmm." She sat up, and then Haru gave her something to drink. "Drink that, you'll fell better." She hesitantly took a sip and then drank the whole thing down.

"What is that?" Tohru asked, she began to shake.

"Something to heal your wounds. You started coughing and then running a fever, i don't want you sick you know."

"I have to go, you have no clothes, and i don't think i have woman's clothing hanging around. See you later, and please stay inside." Haru walked out the door, and quickly shut it.

Hours passed and Haru did not come back. Tohru started to get a bit worried.

She began to pace the floor, going back and forth back and forth. Then there was a knock on the door. "Tohru let me in, it's Haru, come on i don't have all day."

Tohru walked over and opened the door. "Come on in," A hand thrust out and grabbed her neck, slamming her to her to the floor. "You know you are more trouble then you are worth."


"Iloveanimesomuch, Iloveanimesomuch, I sit in myden and write fanfictions all day long Iloveanimesomuch, only three last days since i skipped my last dead line." Lol okay i was late, but blame fanfiction, they wouldn't let me upload. GRRR. Sorry i suck today, but i am having an off day...for no reason. Oh well sowhatever, i am like weird. I can't type or think. SEE YOU GUYS ON FRIDAY!