My second story, hope you like it, and I don't own Square Enix, and anything related to the game, but good news is, I own the make-up names from my clan,
and,'thought' and"speech" ok:)
Chapter 2- endeavor
After that event, Malcolm thought a lot about it, 'why does not Ritz want to go back to St.Ivalice, why?', but on the other side, Ritz always thought 'why does Malcolm want to go back?', as the two of them thought, their two best friends in Ivalice, for Malcolm, Montoblanc, his best moogle friend, and for Ritz, Shara, her Vienna Partner, they went near to their corresponding clan leaders, and said, "you look like your in deep thought., is there something wrong?", and then the two clan leaders said "ow, nothing, just thinking of something", then their two best friends said "ok, if you said so.".
As days past, they where still in very deep thought, they had not have meals for 3 days straight, now their two best friends know started to think, 'what is wrong with them?', as they where going on missions, the two were not in their regular strength, a coincidence, so finally the two said to their leader, "what's wrong with you, you have not been your self for 3 days!", then the two said" nothing is wrong ..", but the two replied, "nothing wrong, something is wrong!", and the clan leaders replied angrily "THERE IS NOTHING WRONG!", then the clan members shuted there mouths, and murmured" we are just worried.. " , so they moved away from their clan leaders, and wondered" why are our clan leaders like this….?"
So how do you like it, I hope there will be reviews on this, ok, good reviews , and not to harsh critsism pls.