DNAngel: Sacred Maiden

I finally get a break from doing homework! Now I have more time to just do what I really love, writing. Well this is chapter 5, read chapter 4, or if you just are tuning into this massively hated series well then read from the beginning. Well just incase someone smashed your head with a rusty crowbar, heres a recap of what happend in chapter 4. On the flight to Miami, Riku went a little wild, hint hint nudge nudge, and Risa got jealous, and that Naota kid wants to eat my children he hates me so much. So when we finally got to America, I realized that I was more popular with the ladies then I thought. "Its probably the hair and eyes, your hair is so naturally spiky its...hypnotizing" why thank you Dark! Now get me some ice cream "Yes Sir!" Now pretty much were on the boat and yeah...things...happen...look I'm just trying to look like I actually didnt rush this by making chapters longer then some fanfics!

Chapter 5: Smooth Sailings and broken hearts

I watched Naota play his guitar for a little while until he wrapped it around his back and walked towards his cabin. "Hes such a freak Daisuke dont even worry about him." Riku said stepping infront of me.

"..." I looked at my feet sad. Maybe hes looking for that Hara Haru Haruko girl that pissed me off. "Yeah, I liked her pink hair" Heheheh yeah it was so pink that it seemed like it was bubblegum "Heheheh" heheheh "heheheh" heheh" heheheh "STFU GOD DAMN!"

"Daisuke? Whats wrong? You've seemed to be so spacy lately." Riku said worrying. "Oh...have I? Well I'm sorry Riku." I said scracthing the back of my head

"..." she sighed and started to walk to the lobby. It was a huge boat, 5 pools, 3 restaraunts, a day care center, free room service, and even an arcade with its own laser tag! I smiled at the fact that there is so much to do on this one boat.

"I'm sorry about what I said before..." I heard Naota say, he stood next to me.

"I just lost someone who was very important to me..." He sighed.

"Whats her name?"

"Haruko..." He said clutching the guitar

"Oh you mean Hara Haru Haruko?" When I said that he was shocked and crabbed me by the collar and shoved me against the railing. "How do you know that name!" He spat.

"I...I...I met her at the fountain!" I yelled trying to tell him my excuse. He loosened his grip, "So you've seen her huh..." He said looking away from me.

"Yeah, crazy lady, likes to ride on a scooter." I said trying to lighten the mood.

"So...whats up with that guitar? You haul it around everywhere as if your life depended on it." I said abrubtly changing the subject.

"Haruko gave it to me..." He sighed. "Oh..."

"Daisuke! Hey Daisuke! Are you gonna have dinner or what!" I heard Riku yell as she stood about 10 feet away from me.

"Uhm...sorry Naota...I gotta go." I said walking to Riku.

"Call me Takkun..." He said smiling.

"Ok Takkun." I said before running to Riku.

We ate fried chicken with Riku and Risa sitting next to me, and then a huge crow of girls. They watched my every move with there mouths open as if they were ready to scream. "Personal space..." I heard Risa mumble as she pushed Ritsuko back.

Takkun sat down infront of me. "Oh hey Nao-I mean Takkun." I said greeting him. Riku pulled me towards her and whispered, "Daisuke, dont hang out with that freaky little guy, hes so weird."

"Well no one is his friend so I guess I'll be." I said sitting back up. We ate our food, laughed and tried to have as much fun as we could with 30 girls watching every move we make and are hungry to start rumors. Afterwards we said goodbye and I kissed Riku, girls "Aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww." And I went to my room.

Room 349 I said sliding the card through the scanner. The light flashed green and I opened the door where Hiwatari was lying on the bed with his arms behind his head. "Oh, hey Hiwatari." I said shutting the door behind me. His eyes just looked towards me without moving his head. "Oh, hello Dai-chan." He said scratching his arm. I layed my stuff on the other bed.

The bed shook when I sat down, I reached into my bag and pulled out a manga. I read for a little while until I looked over and saw Hiwatari sleeping. I turned off the lamp and slowly fell asleep.

Next Morning

I woke up to the annoying sounds of the alarm clock. I reached over to turn it off before I felt something diffrent. I looked over to see Hiwatari staring back at me half asleep in the same bed as me. "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" I yelled falling off the bed. "Oh, I'm sorry Niwa, I dont know how that happend." He said silently before collapsing onto his bed. I was panting for a little while and I got upand grabbed my bag. "Uhm...Hiwatari...I'm gonna take a shower first k?"

"K."

The feeling of the warm watter hitting the back of my neck was refreshing. "I forgot to change out of my uniform yesterday." I said smiling. I twisted the knob and the water stopped flowing. I put on a black T shirt that says "I do all my own stunts" and a blue hoddie jacket, and dark blue jeans.

"Ok all yours." I said walking out of the bathroom, coming my hair with my hand. Hiwatari just nodded and closed the book he was reading. Just then I heard a knock on the door, I stumbled over my shoes as I went to open the door, it was Riku. "Oh hi Riku, whats up?"

"Hey Daisuke, Ritsuko is inviting us to go swimming with her, wanna come?"

"Oh sure I'll be right there." I said smiling. Then Jessica came and shoved Riku violently out of my view and said. "Hi Disuke!''

"Uh...uh...hello Jen-Jennifer."

"Your coming to my room tonight to play truth or dare right?"

"Uh...yeah...sure." I said looking behind me to see Hiwatari glaring at me. What's his problem? "Well your gay for Hiwatari." I am not! "Yes you are, when you kiss Riku you probably think its creepy boy!" I DO NOT! "YES YOU DO!'' I DO NOT! "STFU!"

Riku scratched her head as she stood up and stomped towards Jennifer. "Hey Jennifer, how about a little girl chat." She said twitching angrily.

"Sure...bitch" Jennifer said silently.

"Well that sure isnt going to go well..." I heard Satoshi say from behind me, I just nodded.

In the girls bathroom

Riku pushed Jennifer through the door. "Whats your problem Riku!" Jennifer said her back against one of the stalls walls.

"My problem is is that you keep trying to steal my boyfriend!" Riku said dangerously close to her face.

"Hey I just give him what he wants, he needs better then you!" Jennifer said pushing Riku back. Riku stumbled and regained her balance.

"He does not! He likes me for ME! You just wouldnt understand that you cold bitch!" Riku said pinning Jennifer to the wall.

"Phhtt, you teens always think you know true love when its just a little crush." Jennifer said mockingly. Riku slapped her hard leaving an imprint on her face and making Rikus hand turn red.

"This isnt some normal half assed crush! Although you wouldnt know!" Riku said slapping her with her other hand. Jennifer started to cry. After a short while tears began forming in Riku's eyes as well. Soon they were both crying.

Jennifer hugged Riku and said "I'm so sorry Riku..." she sobbed.

"I'm sorry too Jennifer" Riku cried.

Back at the bedroom

"50 bucks cat fight." Hiwatari snickered.

"Well I only got my switchblade and a paperclip." I said pulling out random things out of my pocket. Just then I could see them both walking back, Jessica's face was bright red. "Ah! Jennifer what happend!" I asked worried

"I...uh...I fell" she said her eyes darting side to side, Riku twitched.

"Hey! Hey Niwa-kun!" I heard Takkun shout as he walked down the hallway.

"Oh, hai Takkun." I said smiling.

"Would you like to come swimming with us?" I asked Naota.

"Uh...sure" he stuttered for he knew that Riku didnt like him at all. Riku glared at me, "Well I'm gonna change into my swim suit, I'll be right back!" I heard Riku yell as she ran down the hall.

"So Riku still thinks I'm a freak right Niwa-kun?" Takkun asked smiling.

"Yeah, well with those bandages around your head its kinda hard not to." I said jokingly. Takkun gave a slight smile until he went back to his room. Hiwatari was still reading that book.

"Do you ever stop reading that book?" I asked. Hiwatari just stared at me until his eyes darted back to the book.

At the pool

"Daisuke! Hey Daisuke!"

"Oh, hai Risa." I said smiling.

"Dagooshi! Dagki!"

"Oh hello Jennifer."

"Daisuke! Hey Daisuke!"

"Risa you already said that..." I said giving her the half eye look. Just then Riku came out of the pool in her sexy red bikini. That would make any guy drool "Hot!" Dark shouted in my mind. "Hey Daisuke!" She yelled and wrapped her arms around me neck and held me close. I heard two people growl behind me jealously.

"So are you guys just going to stand there or what!" Riku yelled excitedley as she grabbed my hand and pushed me into the 12 foot deep pool. Riku jumped in right after I hit the water. I blew air out of my nose so I would descend to the bottom, Riku did the same.

Meanwhile At the surface

"So are you hot for Daisuke too." Jennifer asked slyly to Risa. Risa blushed and looked towards the ground. "...yes." She mumbled.

"Dont worry we'll get him." Jennifer said patting Risa on the back

Meanwhile Underwater

I touched the rough bottom of the pool with my toes and the pressure in my ears started to grow. I pushed off the bottom and so did Riku and we both came to the surface at the same time. Riku and I laughed and swam in the water together for a little while, Sahera taking pictures of us of course...freakin pervert "Hey you read dousjin!" Dark! Half of those are yours! "Oh...right..."

Jennifer came in the water soon after but Risa didnt come in complaining that the water was too cold. Hiwatari-kun just sat at a chair and took a nap. Naota didnt really do anything except play that guitar. Jennifer came up close to me, "Hey Daisuke"

"Hey! You got my name right!" I said as I treaded the water

"Yeah I've been practicing." She said winking. Ugh... I groaned in my mind. I could feel Riku glare at her. ''I'm getting hungry! Daisuke wanna go get some lunch?" Riku asked climbing out of the pool.

"Sure!" I said, I was starving. I climbed out of the pool and grabbed my towel. "Ah crap! I forgot my towel!" I heard Riku say frustrated.

"Its ok Riku." I said sweetly. I came up close to her with my towel around me, and I held her close and wrapped the towel around her. She rested her head on my chest and I rested mine on her head. I clutched her wet body close until I looked up to see Risa and Jennifer, they both twitched. I just smiled and kissed Riku's forehead.

Afterwards we went to one of the Panda Express that was in the food court. I ordered Orange chicken and Riku ordered ramen. (mmmmmmmmmm ramen drools). We ate and talked and then I could see Takkun and Satoshi at the table next to us.

"Oh! Hai!" I shouted, they both looked at us and said hello and started eating again. Then out of no where Jennifer rushed towards us and sat down at our table. I could see Riku glare at her for a few seconds until going back to eating her food.

Afterwards...

"So Dai-chan, what do you want to do?" Riku asked as we walked down small hallway holding hands.

"Whatever you want to do." I flashed her a smile, she blushed and turned her head away from me embarrased.

"Do you want to...I mean if you want...come to my room?" She asked hopefully, looking up at me instantly.

"Sure." I said happily and she leaded me to her room which wasn't to far from mine. She swiped the card and opened the door, Risa was lying on the bed and looking out the window towards the bright blue ocean. "Oh hai Harada-san." I happily said to Risa. "Hai..." She said glumly.

"So Daisuke, do you want to watch some tv?" Riku asked.

"Sure" I agreed and we sat down on her bed and turned on the tellie. "The tellie?" Yeah the tellie "..."

We watched "Happy tree friends and friends" and we laughed at the little animals demise. Risa just stared at me the entire time and everytime I'd look at her,she'd turn away. Riku laughed loudly as she saw 'Nutty' break his jaw on a jawbreaker. I just gazed at her in a trance, memorized in her hazel eyes. I looked at my watch, 3:52 pm. "The afternoon is still young, what do you want to do Riku?"

She smiled slyly and I read her lips, 'I want you'. I leaped back almost losing my balance, Riku just laughed. "Oh Daisuke, your too cute." She said walking up to me. She wrapped her arms around my neck and I wrapped mine around her waist. She snuggled her head into my chest and sighed. Risa's face was full of pain... "Huh? Harada-san whats wrong?" I asked slowly breaking the embrace.

"She's fine Niwa-kun." Riku said, sounding slightly mad as she looked towards Risa. "But she looks sad, shouldnt we at least try to help her?"

"She's fine Niwa-kun!" Riku shouted at me. I didnt like it when she called me 'Niwa-kun' she always calls me that when shes angry... I just looked away, hurt from what she just said.

"Why dont you give him a break Riku!" Risa shouted out of no where.

"What?"

"He's been trying so hard to make you happy! Doing whatever you say! Doing what YOU want! And all you do is scream and shout at him!"

"That's a lie Risa!"

"Oh, is it? Well why dont you ask Daisuke!" Risa pointed a shaking finger towards me. "Tell her Daisuke!" Risa shouted.

Ugh this isnt making me feel any better...I sighed in my mind. "Well Niwa-kun!" Riku shouted.

"Well..."

"WHAT!"

"YOU ANNOY ME AND MAKE ME FEEL BAD OK!" Oh no! That didnt come out right! I shouted louder then I should have.

"You see Riku! Your just a nusiance to Daisuke!" Risa screamed once again.

"Risa! I didnt mean it like that!" I said trying to heal the scars.

"Just stay away from me Niwa-kun!" Riku shouted as she walked me to the door and pushed me violently to the side. I tried following her and I tried to hold her in my arms to take away the pain. But when I did, SLAP! She slapped me very very hard and I hit the side of the wall, the side of my face still stinging. "STAY AWAY FROM ME NIWA-KUN!" She screamed at me.

"LEAVE ME ALONE! I HATE YOU DAISUKE! I HATE YOU! I WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU DAISUKE NIWA! YOU LIED TO ME! YOU SAID YOU LOVE ME! AND THAT WAS A LIE! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!" Riku shouted so loudly that my ears stung. She stormed off down the hall. Tears fell from my eyes and I began to sob. "Riku...Riku..." I said touching the side of my face stinging still. "Riku...I...I love you" I said quietly between sobs.

(A/N) Holy crap...well I wasnt planning to write that but...wow...now I'm glad I did. Well this is chapter 5, I would say that its about half finsihed about here. Do you like it? Do you hate it so much that you want to vomit out your stomach liner? Tell me. Constructive criticism only please l. Chapter 6 coming at ya in about a week, definately by Friday. Sorry that this one is short -.-". I'll try to make them longer I REALLY WILL!