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Kel gasped. "What are YOU doing here?" She glared Che.

You see Che used to be with Tobe, and he even asked her to marry him but Che hates sticking in one place and now, well Tobe's with Kel.

Che shrugged. "Looks like we're your generals so get down and do 20!"

"What's 20?" Owen asked. "And Che, even though you almost killed me I love you!"

Che had also gone out with Owen at some point and time but had killed him. In fact she still couldn't figure out why he was alive and kicking.

"Why is it all the guys are coming back to haunt me?" Che whined. "I just want treasure."

tobe scowled at che in disgust "yea what are u doin here? im not gonna take orders from some mental killers!"

roseanna yelled "hey! look around TOBE! your surrounded by killers! who do u think we are? a bunch of pansys or something? NO! where PIRATES! gosh"

"gee no need to be fisty roseanna" tobe pulled back in resistance

"ORDER PEOPLE!" yelled captain anya potter "we have a ship to sail che? would you give the orders please?"

"sertainly" said che
"pft! a bunch of girls doing mens work" murmred tobe

"TOBE" said che "into the gully your our cheif"
tobe was lost for words "wha..."

"houst the sails man the decks" yelled che in the most desturbing voice u would have to obey or else there would be trouble "stations people i want some acttion here!"

as che rang out orders from the top of her head roseanna was down in the gully showing there guests around .

"this is the gully/kitchen or what ever u want to call it"

Kel, Tobe and Owen nodded. Suddenly the ship launched sideways and Tobe fell on his "bottom".

"Guess we've taken off, let me show you to where you will be sleeping."

Tobe burst into tears. "But I got a boo boo."

Kel rushed over to comfort him, running her hands over his back and putting little kisses on his cheek. Roseanna rolled her eyes and looked up to see Owen doing the same thing. She blushed.

Owen told her that the best thing to do is to leave them alone for a while.

"You mean you put up with this sort of thing all the time?" Roseanna asked.

"Yes, but now I have someone to deal with it with me!" He took her hand. "Come, show me the rest of this ship."

"ok so this is where you, me. kel, tobe, and che will be sleeping"

roseanna was a bit nervous because when owen grabed her hand witch he is still holding roseanna felt some feelings that she never thought she would ever feel again due to what happened with joe .

as roseanna show owen around, owen slowly moved closer to her.

"owen what are you doing?" said roseanna
"um...well...you see..." said owen netrvously
"awww owen" said roseanna as she moved in front of him "i..." roseanna thow her arms around his neck and gave him a hug, owen hugged her back.

suddenly che burst throug the doors "well well well isnt this a nice little suprize"

roseanna and owen pulled apart from there hug
"che! ... its... its not what u think"
"then just tel-" said che

"che..." interupted owen "this is my fault i shouldnt have let her show me around"

Che laughed. "I think you're a nice guy Owen, but no offence, I'm like, so over you!" she did a little flippy thing with her hand. "Roseanna can have you."

"We were just hugging," Roseanna mumbled.

"For now," Owen whispered at her.

Che went back on top to find Anya. "You said there would be obstacles along the way that we would have to face?" she enquired.

"Oh yea but its nothing to big," Anya shrugged. "Just a few sea monsters and flash storms, nothing much to worry about."

The weeks went by with nothing much to tell. Calm seas, a good wind. Che found friends among the other sailors because Roseanna spent most of her time with Owen. It happened not five weeks after they left port. Anya and Che were examining a map.

"You see here," Anya pointed, "is the way we're heading."

Che face paled as she read the name of the lake they were passing through. "Loch Ness."

Suddenly the ship launched sideways. "I thought it was dead." Che said, crashing into the table.

Anya looked at her funny. "The Loch Ness Monster can never die, and it's also pretty peaceful this time of year. Some one on the ship must have angered it a lot."

They both run up onto the deck. The others were already there.

"It's after us," Che told Roseanna and Tobe. They nodded grimly.

Anya looked around. Her ship was in a mess. The mast had been broken. Most of the supplies had been knocked over board. "I'm sorry Che," she shouted as the tail crashed down beside her. "The monster will not leave us be until you are off the ship! Save the rest of us."

Che and Roseanna nodded grimly and got ready to jump. Tobe wailed, clutching Kel who was sobbing. "I can't, I won't."

Anya growled, grabbed the back of his tunic and chucked him over board into the sea. Che and Roseanna jumped, plummeting down into the ice water.

"No!" Owen went to jump too.

Anya grabbed him. "Don't be stupid. If I know Che and Roseanna, they'll swim to the nearest land, they are most resourceful. We also need to go there for repairs and new supplies so you'll see her again." Owen nodded grimly.

The Loch Ness monster, satisfied that its enemies were no longer on the ship, swam away.

Che and Roseanna burst through the surface of the water, grabbing a piece of wood from the ship to hold onto.

"Where's Tobe?" Che asked looking around. They couldn't see him anywhere.

The two slowly swam to the nearest land, which happened to be a tropical island, full of coconut trees. They collapsed on the beach.

"Who be you?" A voice asked.

Che looked up to see a sword at her throat. "I am Che, who be you."

"Jack Sparrow."


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