Well Heres a new chapter. (I now that it take me forever to update I'm sorry)
Goten stepped out of his space ship and looked over planet Namek. His hopes left him as he saw that this planet is almost as bad as his, the sky was a dull gray and there was no sign of life except for a few low level ki's.
"Damn it they guardian is probably died" Goten murmured to himself as he went to the nearest ki's he sensed.
"Were do you think your going" A purple beetle asked
"It doesn't matter to you" Goten answered
"But it matters to our master" a giant sloth snickered
"Who are you guys and who's your master?"
"I am Lysimachus and this is Socrates" the Beetle said "and our master is the one and only Gohan"
"So your Gohans' little stogies"
"Hey Socrates what does stogies mean?" Lysimachus whispered to Socrates
"It mean that you're someone's henchmen and or goofy-offs" A monotone voice answered
"Oh thanks" Lysimachus smiled
""Um Lysimachus We're suppose to be bad guy" Socrates whispered to his friend
"Oh yeah… now kid come with us and don't put up a fight"
"may I ask what you two want with the teen" asked the stranger
For the first time the two stogies looked at the stranger and sow a tall human with long spiky white hair, almost glowing green eyes, and in his mid back came out a pair of huge scaly wings.
"It's nan of yer bizznis ok bub" Socrates said trying to act tough
"Since this is my planet IT IS my business 'bub'"
"Really than are the dragon balls still here" Goten asked
"Yes they are"
"That's enough Lysimachus you get the kid I'll take the other guy" Socrates said as he flow toward the demon looking guy.
"The names Zenrou" Zenrou said as he dodged Socrates attack and countered with his own move
"Rikishin blade" Zenrou yelled. Red Ki formed around his right hand and transformed into a blade made out of Ki. With the Rikishin blade Zenrou swung it and sliced through Socrates back.
"AHHHHHHHHHH" Socrates yelled as the ki blade left him in two.
"What No Socrates, Why you little……" Lysimachus didn't have time to finish because Goten took the opportunity to charge an energy blast and released it in Lysimachus side.
"FOOLS" Gohan yelled as he opened his eyes.
"What do you expect they were weak" Piccolo answered.
"I thought at least those two imbeciles could capture one kid" Gohan stated as he turned to go to his throne.
"Goten has gotten stronger… and he had help" Piccolo added
"Yes that Drakinark might pose a threat to my world" Gohan mused as he sat down.
"What do you suggest My Dark Lord" Piccolo asked
"Hmmmmm… Let's pay my dear little brother a visit"
"So the dragon balls are still here?" Gohan asked
"Yes for the thousands time" Zenrou answered again at the impataint youth.
Their conversations were mainly like that, as the two flow tawards what Zenrou decribed as a villiage.The village was made up of five poorly built stone houses.
"Elder you here" Zenrou asked bluntly.
"Shouldn't you ask more nicely" Gohan asked
"Don't worry young one Zenrouis always like this" a voice called out from one of the'larger'stone house
"Ah there you are Elder Pompas" Zenrou said to the short green wrikaly Namik.
"So you there young man what is your name" Elder Pompas asked
"Ah... I'm Goten sir." Gohan answered
"Goten come closer I want to get a better look at you"
"Ummmm... I guess" Gohan said as he walked over to the Elder
Imediatly Elder Pompas started to looke Goten over not missing anything out of his inspection.At the end of the look ove the Elder turnered away from the youngwarrior and started mummbleing about light and dark forces in the world and other nonesense.
"ELDER GET DOW..." Zenrou didn't have time to finish an energy beam shot though the old Namiks skull.
As every villiager gathered around the dead Elder everyone could hear a cold bitter laughter comeing from s frw yards away.
"HAHAHA nice shot Piccolo killed him instantly" Calleda voiceso cold itcouldfreeze even the sun.
Well There you go.
