A Knight's Promise
Chapter 5: How could an Angel Break my Heart
The Author: Greetings! Whoaaa I got 5 Reviews from Keiry, Whoo hoo thanks a lot for reviewing my fic (*salutes at Keiry) and I got another one from Rinoa Heartilly 1999..geez are you really 11 years old? No kidding? Heheh but hey thanks for the review and as you wished, here's Chapter 5...and I got a tip for you at the end of this fic..what tip? Um just read at the end of this fic and of course to the reader of this fic, if you have any opinions, comments or a violent reaction about this story, please kindly inform me. Thanks!
Disclaimer: The title of this fic came from a song "How could an angel break my heart" by Toni Braxton (am I right?) so definitely, It's not mine wahhh! Squaresoft owns all Characters mentioned here (including my pen name heheh) with the exception of the following characters: Lester (my bro's name), Ninia (my friend's name) and Keiry (owned by. who else, by her parents. Heheheh! Kidding aside, she's a reviewer of this fic and I promised to include her here. So once again . THANK YOU VERY MUCH KEIRYYYYYY)
Previously...(*as usual)
Raine: Um please come in officer.um can we help you?
Police man: It's about your son..Squall.
Laguna and his family:???!!!
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Laguna: Umm...officer...w-what happened to my boy?
Police man: Um. (*looks downwards) I.don't know how to tell this sir. (*closes his eyes, puts a closed fist in his chest) I...cannot . It's..
Laguna and his family:???!!! (*alarmed)
Laguna: (*Shocked) ah...officer...p-please have a sit...
Police man: Thank you Mr. Loire (*was about to sob)I.cannot relay.oh no.my heart(*covering his face instead) .ohhh I think I'm gonna faint! P-Please.I b-beg you all! gimme something to drink.
Laguna: (*looks at Raine) Raine, do we have a glass of water.
Police man: Ohh come on Mr. Loire..I prefer soda (*Sobs) with lots of ice and please add a straw..
Laguna: ?
Raine: (*gets a glass of soda, putting some ice cubes and straw in it) Here we go..(*gives the glass of soda to the officer)
Police man: Thanks..
Kiros: so..You were saying?
Police man: (*Sobs hysterically) ahuhuhuh...
Laguna and his family: ???!!! Oh no .please what happened to our dear Squally?
Police man: Um ..(*saw Squall's cookie jar) Mr. Loire .
Laguna: Yes? Calm down Mr. Officer..please tell..
Police man: wahhhhhh..
Laguna: Please ...I'm begging you officer.
Ellone: (*gets a box of tissue) here you go Mr. Officer.
Police man: Thanks.(*blowing his nose hard)
Laguna and his family: ewwww
Policeman: thanks Kid.and um can I get some of these yummy cookies.I'm starving.ugh
Ellone: um. Ok
Laguna: (*raising an eyebrow)
Police man: and Mrs. Loire can I have another glass of that soda please? (*pointing at the pitcher of soda)
Laguna: Waitttt a minute.. HOLD ON . (*Slaps the policeman at the nape ) HEY THERE WISE GUY!
Policeman: (*chokes) ughh.
Laguna: Who are you and what are you doing here?
Kiros: Sure about the policeman-thing Mr. Pretender?
Policeman: Yeah.um.actually.er
*door bell rings*
Raine: hmmp.I'll get that (*opens the door)
(*there stood a hazel-eyed lady staring at them; her silky dark brown hair was being played by the soft breeze)
ALL: (*stunned) WHOAAA..
?????: (*in a very attractive voice) Hello .Is this.(*upon seeing her partner) LESTER?
Policeman: Yep.It's me
Raine: So what do we have here?
?????: So this must be The Leonhart~Loire's Residence..Am I right?
Laguna: (*mesmerized by what he saw) Yeah. (*smiling)
?????: Ohhh ..Where's my manners.I'm Keiry .The Head of the Winhill's SeeD. And that's my partner. (*looks at her partner, gesturing him to apologize to the family)
Lester: Yeah.um Mr. Loire sorry for that..Ah I'm really hungry.that's all
Laguna: Yeah.Whatever pal!
Raine: But we could give you something to eat, all you've got to do is ask. What's important is that you've .and (*suddenly ignoring Lester) please Ms. Keiry come in and have a sit. I'll fix you something to eat.
Keiry: Thanks ma'am but don't bother. I'm just here to tell you about your son..Squall
Laguna: WHAT HAPPENED TO MY SON?
Kiros: Calm down Laguna.
Keiry: So.Lester ..you haven't told his family what really happened to their son? (*eyeing Lester)
Lester: I tried.
Kiros: (*grabbing Lester by the collar) TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED TO SQUALLLLLL!!!!
Laguna: Calm down Kiros!
Ellone: (*slaps her forehead) Dope!
Raine: Oh my.Please tell me he's safe. please...I'll die if something happened to my baby!
Ellone: ...
Keiry: Um don't worry Madam, Sir .your son is ok.
Laguna and his family: Hayyyy.(* relieved)
Lester: Um we saw him crying near the woods. You know it's quite dangerous to go alone there. There are lots of undead creatures lurking. It so happen that we've come across him during our daily rounds.
Laguna: WHAT? T-THE WOODS? B-but how? And what? My son? He is crying?
Keiry: Ah huh.we asked him why, but he just keeps on yelling (*imitates Squall's voice) I HATE YOU RINOAAAAAAAA! By the way, who's Rinoa? Is she your son's Girlfriend or what? (*pauses for a while) Um...wait. I know someone with that name..um Les, Rinoa Heartilly.
Laguna: (*was about to tell Keiry but he was interrupted by Lester) Mr. Cara..
Lester: Yep she's Mr. Caraway's daughter, you know Mr. Caraway..Mrs. Julia's hubby.
Keiry: Ahhh! You mean Julia? As in "the Julia" m-my favorite singer? What's the title of that song...
Laguna and his family: Eyes on...
Lester: (*Butts in) EYES ON ME ..yeah! (*smiles at Keiry)
Keiry: WOW really?
Laguna: HEP HEP HEP... I think we're going too far out of the subject.We're talking about "my son" here.
Keiry: oh yeah sorry. By the way sir, he's at the Winhill's SeeD Head Quarters. We've examined the boy if he got any injuries or what. We can bring you there to fetch your son. (*smiles)
Kiros: wait.um Miss Kylie..I mean Keiry .so you're a SeeD? With a capital S?
Keiry: Yep and we're assigned here. You know part of our mission and training. (*smiles)
Ellone: WOW! Can I please have your autograph Miss Keiry! Cozzz You'reeee a greatttttttttttt singerrr (*Sings) Come.come .come into my world..
Keiry: Ok (*giggles) (*in her mind ~ heck that's another person...but hmm anyways.)
Lester: how bout me? I'm a SeeD too!
Laguna and his family: (*ignored Lester)
Lester: Yeah fine whatever..
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Rinoa: (*gasp) whew.. Where's Squall? Oh no. I cannot go out there.
Seifer: Hey there you cheater!
Rinoa: (*surprised) WHAT? Hey Seif.um
Seifer: Hmm.I'll tell Mr. Caraway about you, trying to runaway outside the town. (*runs towards Rinoa's house)
Rinoa: Hey wait! Oh no.(*in her mind ~I'm a dead meat.ohh) I'm gonna kill you Seiffff (* runs after Seifer)
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SeeD member: Oh come on please stop crying there lil' one.
Squall: (*still sobbing) I HATE YOU RINOAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Keiry: Hey Ninia!
Laguna and his family: SQUALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!
Squall: !!
SeeD member: Hey Keiry and Lester! Glad to see you two back.
Laguna: MY SQUALLY BOYYYYY (*runs and hug Squall)
Squall: (*shocked) !!! HEY dad put me down!
Laguna: Ohhh you don't know how much you made your daddy worry.ohhh (*still hugging Squall)
Raine: oh Squall.thank GOD you're safe!
Ellone: BROOOOO!
Kiros: Whew .Glad you're ok kid. Your dad almost killed Officer Lester for not telling your whereabouts right away.
Squall: Dad let me go!
Laguna: Ohhhh come on let me hug my baby squally poo.
Squall: I'm not a baby anymore!
Laguna: Uhhh that's scary.(*putting Squall down) Ei there...you crying young man?
Squall: (*wiping his tears) Nope ..I'm not.
Laguna: Tell me what happened?
Raine: Laggy...I think we should talk about that later.let's go home.
Laguna: AH! (*scratches his head) ok Hun.oh yeah..(*looks at the other SeeD) oh hello there! May I know your good name ma'am?
Keiry: Oopss sorry Ninia, I forgot to introduce you..um Mr. Loire, this is Ninia, She's one of the SeeDs assigned here, and we're from Balamb Garden.
Ninia: (*offers her hand to Laguna) Nice to meet you Sir!
Laguna: (*shakes her hands) The pleasure is mine. And thanks for taking care of my boy.
Ninia: No problem sir! That's our duty! (*smiles)
Ellone: Hello Ms. Ninia.can I have your autograph?
Ninia: Sure!
Lester: how bout me? You don't want my autograph?
Laguna and others: Whatever!
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Seifer: hahaha made it!
Rinoa: No fair! Don't you DARE tell my dad about that Seifer!
Seifer: Ohhh I'm scareddddd..hahaha
Rinoa: P-pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee I'm begging you Seif.don't !!!
Seifer: (*teasing her) Rinoa's gonna cry! Rinoa's gonna cry!
Rinoa: Arghhh! Please don't start Seif or else I'm going to call my knight!
Seifer: you mean that puberty boy? Hahaha
Rinoa: Hey stop that!
Julia: (*opens the door) Rinny dear come.(*surprised to see Seifer) Seifer!
Seifer: Hello Mrs. Julia (*smiles)
Julia: Since when did you and your family arrive?
Seifer: Oh.just this morning ma'am!
Julia: Oh please come in Seifer. And Rinny dear, please entertain him while I fix some snack.
Rinoa: (*sticks her tongue out at Seifer) Meany!
Seifer: Hahha (* just followed Mrs. Heartilly~Caraway inside)
Rinoa: Hmmp..(*In her mind~ oh no. how 'bout Squall? I better call him)
Seifer: Oist Missy! Mrs. Julia told you to "entertain me".
Rinoa: AHHH WHATEVER MR. MEANYYYYYYYY!!!!!
Julia: (*from the kitchen) Rinny I can hear you!
Seifer: (*sticks his tongue out at Rinoa)
Rinoa: Arghhhhhh!!! Bummer!
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Laguna: Ok say your thanks and goodbyes to your angels here, Squall. (*looks at his son)
Squall: (*looks down) Uh. Ms. Keiry, Ms. Ninia and Mr... uh
Lester: (*smiles) Lester
Squall: Oh yeah .. Thank .. (*still looking down)
Laguna: Come on Squall say thank you to them.(*Smiling)
Squall: (*still thinking about Rinoa) ..
ALL: (*looking at the kid) .
(*suddenly crystal-like liquid falls to the floor)
ALL: Ohhh
Squall: YOU BETRAYEDDD MEEEE ANGELLLLL!!! (*runs outside the HQ)
ALL: !!!
Raine: Ohhh my poor child!
Laguna: Uh.er (*to the SeeDs) I do apologize for my son's behavior.you see he's a good boy but maybe.
Keiry: You need not to explain that sir. Better talk to him regarding his problem. He needs a loving family right now.
Laguna: I will (*looks at Keiry)
Raine: ahem. let's go Laggy.
Laguna: (*still looking at Keiry) ..
Raine: (*shouts at Laguna's ear) LAGUNA!!!
Laguna: oh..ah heheheh Thanks Ms. Keiry, Ms. Ninia and uh what's your name again?
Lester: Les.
Laguna: ok Goodbye and thanks (*waves his hand)
His family: THANK YOU (*bows)
SeeDs: Until then. Take care (* waving their hands)
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Squall: (*sprints his way into his room) (*still crying) Why?
Laguna: Squall! Hey wait up! Squalllll!
His family: (*following by) Squall!
(*Squall closing the door before Laguna can come in)
Laguna: Yeouchhhhh my nose!
Ellone and Kiros: (*chuckles) hehehe
Raine: (* kissing Laguna's nose) OH poor nose. Dear, why not give him some space. I mean, let's just talk to him later when he's feeling a bit ok.
Laguna: (*nodding)
(*phone rings)
ALL: I'll get that (* all of them grabbing the phone) HELLO! Loire's Residence may I help you?
Rinoa: (*giggles) Whoaa how sweet, all of them greeting me hehehe. Um Mr. Laguna, Mrs. Raine, Mr. Kiros and Sis Ellone, can I talk to Squall please.
Raine: Ok dear but Squall's in his room now, I'll just pass you over to the phone inside, is that ok with you?
Rinoa: Sure! (*~whew I'm glad he's ok)
Laguna: but um er Rin, Please help my son, I think you're the only person who can do that.
Rinoa: Huh? What do you mean sir? Is there something wrong with him?
Kiros: You're the only one who can answer that question Rin.
Ellone: LQ (Lover's quarrel) hehehe!
Rinoa: (*blushing) ..
Raine: Ok I'll connect you to my son, just hang on a bit.
Rinoa: Thanks Ma'am Raine
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Squall: (*still weeping) huh? (*picking up the phone)
Rinoa: Hellooooooo Squalllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Squall: (*recognizing Rinoa's voice) ...
Rinoa: Hey there Squall wassup?!
Squall :(*~I hate you.)..
Rinoa: I'm so worried about you. 'Coz I saw you running outside the. (*pauses for a while after noticing there's no one responding on the other line) Squall? .still there?
Squall: I hate you
Rinoa: what?
Squall: (*without any emotion) I said I hate you!
Squall's family: (*listening) Whoaa!!!
Rinoa: (*almost in tears).b-but why? (*her voice shaking) w-what's wrong?
Squall: I HATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU RINOAAA!!!!! (*he then drops the phone)
Meanwhile his family who's listening outside his room..
ALL: (*shocked) Ohhhhh! Poor Rinny.
Squall: (*looks at the small box that Rinoa gave him 2 days ago) LIAR! (*throwing it into the trash can) (*weeps bitterly)
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Rinoa: (*crying) (*~ "I hate you?" Squall hates me? Why? (*a stream of tears flow continuously moistening her cheeks) Those harsh words slashes my heart into million.No, billions of pieces. I just don't understand how could someone you cherish, the one who is giving you so much joy; can also be the one who will cast you with overwhelming pain. I'd rather die than he, hating me like that. (*sobs)
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Squall: (*still in his room) I saw her.my angel with another knight. I.I thought I was the only best friend, she said I'm her first and last knight. But it seems that she lied to me, she betrayed me, she. (*wiping his tears) s-she. broke my..heart. If she only knew how much I.... cared for her (*closes his eyes 'til he falls into a deep slumber)
The author: (*sobs) oh please pass that tissue box over here. ohhh poor Rinny and Squall. Um it's not that they're weeping coz of you know.them having a deeper relationship (gf and bf) nope remember they're just kids, rather, for the main reason that Rinoa is Squall's one and only friend here in this fic and maybe Squall must have a little crush on her. (Maybe? Welp alright he got a crush on her here).
Yeah my tip for Rinoa Heartilly 1999 (come on don't read this, it's for her eyes only heheh) (*whispers at Rinoa) use 4-5 spaces instead of one or two. You'll see a great improvement in your masterpiece. Use the Preview to check if all's well and VOILA!
Chapter 5: How could an Angel Break my Heart
The Author: Greetings! Whoaaa I got 5 Reviews from Keiry, Whoo hoo thanks a lot for reviewing my fic (*salutes at Keiry) and I got another one from Rinoa Heartilly 1999..geez are you really 11 years old? No kidding? Heheh but hey thanks for the review and as you wished, here's Chapter 5...and I got a tip for you at the end of this fic..what tip? Um just read at the end of this fic and of course to the reader of this fic, if you have any opinions, comments or a violent reaction about this story, please kindly inform me. Thanks!
Disclaimer: The title of this fic came from a song "How could an angel break my heart" by Toni Braxton (am I right?) so definitely, It's not mine wahhh! Squaresoft owns all Characters mentioned here (including my pen name heheh) with the exception of the following characters: Lester (my bro's name), Ninia (my friend's name) and Keiry (owned by. who else, by her parents. Heheheh! Kidding aside, she's a reviewer of this fic and I promised to include her here. So once again . THANK YOU VERY MUCH KEIRYYYYYY)
Previously...(*as usual)
Raine: Um please come in officer.um can we help you?
Police man: It's about your son..Squall.
Laguna and his family:???!!!
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Laguna: Umm...officer...w-what happened to my boy?
Police man: Um. (*looks downwards) I.don't know how to tell this sir. (*closes his eyes, puts a closed fist in his chest) I...cannot . It's..
Laguna and his family:???!!! (*alarmed)
Laguna: (*Shocked) ah...officer...p-please have a sit...
Police man: Thank you Mr. Loire (*was about to sob)I.cannot relay.oh no.my heart(*covering his face instead) .ohhh I think I'm gonna faint! P-Please.I b-beg you all! gimme something to drink.
Laguna: (*looks at Raine) Raine, do we have a glass of water.
Police man: Ohh come on Mr. Loire..I prefer soda (*Sobs) with lots of ice and please add a straw..
Laguna: ?
Raine: (*gets a glass of soda, putting some ice cubes and straw in it) Here we go..(*gives the glass of soda to the officer)
Police man: Thanks..
Kiros: so..You were saying?
Police man: (*Sobs hysterically) ahuhuhuh...
Laguna and his family: ???!!! Oh no .please what happened to our dear Squally?
Police man: Um ..(*saw Squall's cookie jar) Mr. Loire .
Laguna: Yes? Calm down Mr. Officer..please tell..
Police man: wahhhhhh..
Laguna: Please ...I'm begging you officer.
Ellone: (*gets a box of tissue) here you go Mr. Officer.
Police man: Thanks.(*blowing his nose hard)
Laguna and his family: ewwww
Policeman: thanks Kid.and um can I get some of these yummy cookies.I'm starving.ugh
Ellone: um. Ok
Laguna: (*raising an eyebrow)
Police man: and Mrs. Loire can I have another glass of that soda please? (*pointing at the pitcher of soda)
Laguna: Waitttt a minute.. HOLD ON . (*Slaps the policeman at the nape ) HEY THERE WISE GUY!
Policeman: (*chokes) ughh.
Laguna: Who are you and what are you doing here?
Kiros: Sure about the policeman-thing Mr. Pretender?
Policeman: Yeah.um.actually.er
*door bell rings*
Raine: hmmp.I'll get that (*opens the door)
(*there stood a hazel-eyed lady staring at them; her silky dark brown hair was being played by the soft breeze)
ALL: (*stunned) WHOAAA..
?????: (*in a very attractive voice) Hello .Is this.(*upon seeing her partner) LESTER?
Policeman: Yep.It's me
Raine: So what do we have here?
?????: So this must be The Leonhart~Loire's Residence..Am I right?
Laguna: (*mesmerized by what he saw) Yeah. (*smiling)
?????: Ohhh ..Where's my manners.I'm Keiry .The Head of the Winhill's SeeD. And that's my partner. (*looks at her partner, gesturing him to apologize to the family)
Lester: Yeah.um Mr. Loire sorry for that..Ah I'm really hungry.that's all
Laguna: Yeah.Whatever pal!
Raine: But we could give you something to eat, all you've got to do is ask. What's important is that you've .and (*suddenly ignoring Lester) please Ms. Keiry come in and have a sit. I'll fix you something to eat.
Keiry: Thanks ma'am but don't bother. I'm just here to tell you about your son..Squall
Laguna: WHAT HAPPENED TO MY SON?
Kiros: Calm down Laguna.
Keiry: So.Lester ..you haven't told his family what really happened to their son? (*eyeing Lester)
Lester: I tried.
Kiros: (*grabbing Lester by the collar) TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED TO SQUALLLLLL!!!!
Laguna: Calm down Kiros!
Ellone: (*slaps her forehead) Dope!
Raine: Oh my.Please tell me he's safe. please...I'll die if something happened to my baby!
Ellone: ...
Keiry: Um don't worry Madam, Sir .your son is ok.
Laguna and his family: Hayyyy.(* relieved)
Lester: Um we saw him crying near the woods. You know it's quite dangerous to go alone there. There are lots of undead creatures lurking. It so happen that we've come across him during our daily rounds.
Laguna: WHAT? T-THE WOODS? B-but how? And what? My son? He is crying?
Keiry: Ah huh.we asked him why, but he just keeps on yelling (*imitates Squall's voice) I HATE YOU RINOAAAAAAAA! By the way, who's Rinoa? Is she your son's Girlfriend or what? (*pauses for a while) Um...wait. I know someone with that name..um Les, Rinoa Heartilly.
Laguna: (*was about to tell Keiry but he was interrupted by Lester) Mr. Cara..
Lester: Yep she's Mr. Caraway's daughter, you know Mr. Caraway..Mrs. Julia's hubby.
Keiry: Ahhh! You mean Julia? As in "the Julia" m-my favorite singer? What's the title of that song...
Laguna and his family: Eyes on...
Lester: (*Butts in) EYES ON ME ..yeah! (*smiles at Keiry)
Keiry: WOW really?
Laguna: HEP HEP HEP... I think we're going too far out of the subject.We're talking about "my son" here.
Keiry: oh yeah sorry. By the way sir, he's at the Winhill's SeeD Head Quarters. We've examined the boy if he got any injuries or what. We can bring you there to fetch your son. (*smiles)
Kiros: wait.um Miss Kylie..I mean Keiry .so you're a SeeD? With a capital S?
Keiry: Yep and we're assigned here. You know part of our mission and training. (*smiles)
Ellone: WOW! Can I please have your autograph Miss Keiry! Cozzz You'reeee a greatttttttttttt singerrr (*Sings) Come.come .come into my world..
Keiry: Ok (*giggles) (*in her mind ~ heck that's another person...but hmm anyways.)
Lester: how bout me? I'm a SeeD too!
Laguna and his family: (*ignored Lester)
Lester: Yeah fine whatever..
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Rinoa: (*gasp) whew.. Where's Squall? Oh no. I cannot go out there.
Seifer: Hey there you cheater!
Rinoa: (*surprised) WHAT? Hey Seif.um
Seifer: Hmm.I'll tell Mr. Caraway about you, trying to runaway outside the town. (*runs towards Rinoa's house)
Rinoa: Hey wait! Oh no.(*in her mind ~I'm a dead meat.ohh) I'm gonna kill you Seiffff (* runs after Seifer)
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SeeD member: Oh come on please stop crying there lil' one.
Squall: (*still sobbing) I HATE YOU RINOAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Keiry: Hey Ninia!
Laguna and his family: SQUALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!
Squall: !!
SeeD member: Hey Keiry and Lester! Glad to see you two back.
Laguna: MY SQUALLY BOYYYYY (*runs and hug Squall)
Squall: (*shocked) !!! HEY dad put me down!
Laguna: Ohhh you don't know how much you made your daddy worry.ohhh (*still hugging Squall)
Raine: oh Squall.thank GOD you're safe!
Ellone: BROOOOO!
Kiros: Whew .Glad you're ok kid. Your dad almost killed Officer Lester for not telling your whereabouts right away.
Squall: Dad let me go!
Laguna: Ohhhh come on let me hug my baby squally poo.
Squall: I'm not a baby anymore!
Laguna: Uhhh that's scary.(*putting Squall down) Ei there...you crying young man?
Squall: (*wiping his tears) Nope ..I'm not.
Laguna: Tell me what happened?
Raine: Laggy...I think we should talk about that later.let's go home.
Laguna: AH! (*scratches his head) ok Hun.oh yeah..(*looks at the other SeeD) oh hello there! May I know your good name ma'am?
Keiry: Oopss sorry Ninia, I forgot to introduce you..um Mr. Loire, this is Ninia, She's one of the SeeDs assigned here, and we're from Balamb Garden.
Ninia: (*offers her hand to Laguna) Nice to meet you Sir!
Laguna: (*shakes her hands) The pleasure is mine. And thanks for taking care of my boy.
Ninia: No problem sir! That's our duty! (*smiles)
Ellone: Hello Ms. Ninia.can I have your autograph?
Ninia: Sure!
Lester: how bout me? You don't want my autograph?
Laguna and others: Whatever!
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Seifer: hahaha made it!
Rinoa: No fair! Don't you DARE tell my dad about that Seifer!
Seifer: Ohhh I'm scareddddd..hahaha
Rinoa: P-pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee I'm begging you Seif.don't !!!
Seifer: (*teasing her) Rinoa's gonna cry! Rinoa's gonna cry!
Rinoa: Arghhh! Please don't start Seif or else I'm going to call my knight!
Seifer: you mean that puberty boy? Hahaha
Rinoa: Hey stop that!
Julia: (*opens the door) Rinny dear come.(*surprised to see Seifer) Seifer!
Seifer: Hello Mrs. Julia (*smiles)
Julia: Since when did you and your family arrive?
Seifer: Oh.just this morning ma'am!
Julia: Oh please come in Seifer. And Rinny dear, please entertain him while I fix some snack.
Rinoa: (*sticks her tongue out at Seifer) Meany!
Seifer: Hahha (* just followed Mrs. Heartilly~Caraway inside)
Rinoa: Hmmp..(*In her mind~ oh no. how 'bout Squall? I better call him)
Seifer: Oist Missy! Mrs. Julia told you to "entertain me".
Rinoa: AHHH WHATEVER MR. MEANYYYYYYYY!!!!!
Julia: (*from the kitchen) Rinny I can hear you!
Seifer: (*sticks his tongue out at Rinoa)
Rinoa: Arghhhhhh!!! Bummer!
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Laguna: Ok say your thanks and goodbyes to your angels here, Squall. (*looks at his son)
Squall: (*looks down) Uh. Ms. Keiry, Ms. Ninia and Mr... uh
Lester: (*smiles) Lester
Squall: Oh yeah .. Thank .. (*still looking down)
Laguna: Come on Squall say thank you to them.(*Smiling)
Squall: (*still thinking about Rinoa) ..
ALL: (*looking at the kid) .
(*suddenly crystal-like liquid falls to the floor)
ALL: Ohhh
Squall: YOU BETRAYEDDD MEEEE ANGELLLLL!!! (*runs outside the HQ)
ALL: !!!
Raine: Ohhh my poor child!
Laguna: Uh.er (*to the SeeDs) I do apologize for my son's behavior.you see he's a good boy but maybe.
Keiry: You need not to explain that sir. Better talk to him regarding his problem. He needs a loving family right now.
Laguna: I will (*looks at Keiry)
Raine: ahem. let's go Laggy.
Laguna: (*still looking at Keiry) ..
Raine: (*shouts at Laguna's ear) LAGUNA!!!
Laguna: oh..ah heheheh Thanks Ms. Keiry, Ms. Ninia and uh what's your name again?
Lester: Les.
Laguna: ok Goodbye and thanks (*waves his hand)
His family: THANK YOU (*bows)
SeeDs: Until then. Take care (* waving their hands)
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Squall: (*sprints his way into his room) (*still crying) Why?
Laguna: Squall! Hey wait up! Squalllll!
His family: (*following by) Squall!
(*Squall closing the door before Laguna can come in)
Laguna: Yeouchhhhh my nose!
Ellone and Kiros: (*chuckles) hehehe
Raine: (* kissing Laguna's nose) OH poor nose. Dear, why not give him some space. I mean, let's just talk to him later when he's feeling a bit ok.
Laguna: (*nodding)
(*phone rings)
ALL: I'll get that (* all of them grabbing the phone) HELLO! Loire's Residence may I help you?
Rinoa: (*giggles) Whoaa how sweet, all of them greeting me hehehe. Um Mr. Laguna, Mrs. Raine, Mr. Kiros and Sis Ellone, can I talk to Squall please.
Raine: Ok dear but Squall's in his room now, I'll just pass you over to the phone inside, is that ok with you?
Rinoa: Sure! (*~whew I'm glad he's ok)
Laguna: but um er Rin, Please help my son, I think you're the only person who can do that.
Rinoa: Huh? What do you mean sir? Is there something wrong with him?
Kiros: You're the only one who can answer that question Rin.
Ellone: LQ (Lover's quarrel) hehehe!
Rinoa: (*blushing) ..
Raine: Ok I'll connect you to my son, just hang on a bit.
Rinoa: Thanks Ma'am Raine
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Squall: (*still weeping) huh? (*picking up the phone)
Rinoa: Hellooooooo Squalllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Squall: (*recognizing Rinoa's voice) ...
Rinoa: Hey there Squall wassup?!
Squall :(*~I hate you.)..
Rinoa: I'm so worried about you. 'Coz I saw you running outside the. (*pauses for a while after noticing there's no one responding on the other line) Squall? .still there?
Squall: I hate you
Rinoa: what?
Squall: (*without any emotion) I said I hate you!
Squall's family: (*listening) Whoaa!!!
Rinoa: (*almost in tears).b-but why? (*her voice shaking) w-what's wrong?
Squall: I HATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU RINOAAA!!!!! (*he then drops the phone)
Meanwhile his family who's listening outside his room..
ALL: (*shocked) Ohhhhh! Poor Rinny.
Squall: (*looks at the small box that Rinoa gave him 2 days ago) LIAR! (*throwing it into the trash can) (*weeps bitterly)
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Rinoa: (*crying) (*~ "I hate you?" Squall hates me? Why? (*a stream of tears flow continuously moistening her cheeks) Those harsh words slashes my heart into million.No, billions of pieces. I just don't understand how could someone you cherish, the one who is giving you so much joy; can also be the one who will cast you with overwhelming pain. I'd rather die than he, hating me like that. (*sobs)
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Squall: (*still in his room) I saw her.my angel with another knight. I.I thought I was the only best friend, she said I'm her first and last knight. But it seems that she lied to me, she betrayed me, she. (*wiping his tears) s-she. broke my..heart. If she only knew how much I.... cared for her (*closes his eyes 'til he falls into a deep slumber)
The author: (*sobs) oh please pass that tissue box over here. ohhh poor Rinny and Squall. Um it's not that they're weeping coz of you know.them having a deeper relationship (gf and bf) nope remember they're just kids, rather, for the main reason that Rinoa is Squall's one and only friend here in this fic and maybe Squall must have a little crush on her. (Maybe? Welp alright he got a crush on her here).
Yeah my tip for Rinoa Heartilly 1999 (come on don't read this, it's for her eyes only heheh) (*whispers at Rinoa) use 4-5 spaces instead of one or two. You'll see a great improvement in your masterpiece. Use the Preview to check if all's well and VOILA!