Harry Weasley
Chapter seven: Halloween Trolls
A/N: Hey all I thought I would answer and acknowledge all my reviews and reviewers before I go on with this chapter. Please as always read and review, and every couple of chapters I will acknowledge my reviewers and there reviews good or bad. Thank you –Donald
For my very first reviewer of this of this story, I would like to acknowledge Nightwing509 and say thank you for all your reviews of this story, I always enjoy reading positive reviews and that people like my stories. I also appreciate on how you have put how you liked different things that I have done with the story so far, from how I had Molly raise Harry, to how I had Harry stand up for Hermoine. You my friend will find out if you stick with this story til the end, that this last event that you made mention of, is quite significant in my story line. This is a Harry Hermoine Romance fiction along with being a epic story after all.
To Athenakitty, first things first, as your review for my first chapter brings up. You don't have to worry, the Dursley's will be making absolutely no appearances in this story. For your other review, thank you for the correction on the spelling of Slytherin, and yes Dumbledore will let Harry know a whole lot sooner than in the books about why Voldemort is after him.
To GigiFanFic, I know that it seems that I am neglecting my other stories, but I can assure you that I will be working on them also. I also know that I seem to be putting up stories more than I am finishing them, but I can guarantee you and my other faithful readers that I will be updating all my stories soon, I can't guarantee when, but soon.
CountingSheep, thank you for your review and I am updating as much and as fast as I can, like I said in the beginning of a previous chapter,. I have all the names of the chapters outlined, and I am working off my list for each one as I get done with them.
Angelkitty27, thank you also for your kind review, as you can see that I am trying to update soon.
Blackpadfoot, thank you Andy for your comments, I do update as soon as I can.
Padfoot, thank you my AOL friend, I hope you like the rest of the story as much as you like the chapter.
Beth5572, I hope that this is going as well as you think it has from the beginning Terri, I always love hearing from my reviewers.
TheMagicBringer, I know what you mean about Dumbledore not telling Molly about the prophecy, but that is just the way that this story is going to go, it makes complete sense in the long run, believe me.
ShadowoftheBlackAbyss, yes Harry will be taking his schooling a lot more seriously than he is in the books, but remember he is still the son of a Marauder, I can't just have him being a bookworm you know.
Nightgodess, as you can see I have been trying to update at least one chapter a day, but sometimes there are extenuating circumstances where I can't update so much. Keep up with your review, I love getting them.
Layce74 thank you for your comments, yes it does seem to be turning out great.
Gryffindor-Mom, actually yes I did sort Harry people may know that he is Harry Potter, but in this story, his legal name is Harry Weasley, and that was the name he was sorted by. Thank you for pointing that out tho.
Tiggersangel2001, I am trying to post them fast and close together. In fact with this chapter, I am going to be trying to post at least 10 chapters today. I hope you like them. PS: I love your Author Screen Name, I am a fan of Winnie the Pooh.
,00., I hope that this stories writing will get better, I know that sometimes it may seem that I need a BETA, but my writing isn't anywhere as bad as some of the errors I find in peoples stories. I hope that this doesn't stop you from reading this story farther.
Anonymous, thank you also for your corrections in my spelling of the houses, I really appreciate that.
Hpstoryguy, thank you for being glad that it is so long, I don't see many epic length stories on this site, and I actually like reading them. I find that this story is going to be around 300 to 350 thousand words. What I consider epic length is 100 or more chapters for you that would like to know.
Shivani, no this isn't just a copy of the book, even tho it may look like it. There are some parts that can't be messed with and would have to look like they were taken from the book, even tho I put my own spin on things. You will also find that I might put things that happen in the wrong order, but they are put in the order that I think that they happened. I am sorry if this offends anyone, but it is my story and I'm sticking to it. –Smiles–
HermoineGirl, ok I can take constructive criticism, but saying that I suck because I like Harry/Ginny being together is a little harsh. So you won't be calling me even more bad things, I can guarantee that this will not be a Harry/Ginny story.
Well that covers all my reviews so far for this story, and I will be doing this again probably in about 10 or 20 chapters. I have a special treat for all my readers, I am going to give you the major pairings that are going to happen in this story. They will be, Harry/Hermoine, Ron/Luna, Ginny/Neville and I think I am going to let Draco's love life be a surprise to you for later in the story. Thank you all again for your reviews. —Donald
It was Halloween and everyone was happy and excited about the upcoming feast that was going to happen that night. The trio was spending part of the day getting some last minute homework done so that they could have the whole weekend for themselves to have fun and enjoy it. That night as the feast was going into full swing in the great hall, Draco Malfoy was being a git as usual in his teasing of Hermoine, and she was just not being able to take it much, so she left the hall in tears.
As she ran off, she headed to the Girls bathroom in tears to cry about how much she hated Malfoy, and that her only two friends were boys. She was in there when the commotion started in the Great Hall, and didn't know what was going on. All she knew was that after a while, she wasn't alone anymore, for there was a big Troll in the bathroom with her, and she wasn't able to do anything about it. She was cowering in the corner under one of the sinks hoping that it didn't notice her, when something happened that she couldn't believe. Ron and Harry came in and helped her.
A few minutes earlier in the Great Hall-
Professor Quirrel came rushing into the great hall in a huff saying that there was a Troll loose in the School. Then he fainted dead away.
Of course there were a lot of screaming and shouting from the students, and the Headmaster raised his voice to get everyone's attention. "Now everyone follow your prefects to your dorms in an orderly fashion and Professors come with me to take care of this problem." As the students all followed there perspective Prefects to there dorms, the Professors followed Dumbledore in there quest to find the Troll, all the Professors except Professor Quirrell who was still out cold, and Professor Snape, who had slipped out through the side door the Great Hall on his own mission to get the Troll.
As Ron and Harry left the hall and were following Percy, they remembered that Hermoine was out there still somewhere on her own, because she didn't know about the Troll. "We have to find Hermoine, let's go." Harry dragged Ron off practically to go find there friend. When they rounded a corner, they found a shadow and a rumbling coming from around the next corner, indicating that they had found the Troll. They decided to hide and wait to see where the Troll went. When they saw him go into the girls bathroom, they decided to lock him in and get a Professor. When they locked him in, they heard a muffled scream that sounded like a girls scream and unlocked and rushed in to see if they could help. They had found Hermoine in a corner under one of the sinks, trying to defend herself against the troll, but being quite ineffective.
—Present-
When Hermoine saw her two friends in the bathroom, she let out a scream, and the troll turned around to see what she had saw. When he had seen Ron and Harry, he started after them with a grunt. Harry raised his wand, and was immediately picked up by his ankle and the troll was about to brain him with his club when Ron cast aWingardium Leviosa spell on the trolls club to levitate it above the trolls head. The troll just looked at the club running above his head with a stupid look on his face, and then the spell disappeared and the club knocked him senseless on the head, and he dropped with Harry. Luckily Harry had the reflexes to get out from underneath the Troll. When the Troll started to wake up, Harry stuck his wand up his nose knocking the Troll out again. When he pulled the wand out of the Trolls nose, Ron said "ewe Troll buggars."
Hermoine ran and gave them a big hug in thanking them for rescuing her. As she was hugging Harry, Professors Snape, Quirrel, McGonagall and Dumbledore came in wondering what had happened and how the Troll was not there snacking on the students bones for a snack.
Hermoine was the first to react and said. "I'm sorry professors, I thought that I could take care of it by myself, and Ron and Harry came in to rescue me."
The four Professors looked at her with disbelief, but couldn't deny that it is possible that is what happened. So Snape was about to punish the students, when McGonnagal said that they were her students, and that she would take care of the punishment.
Snape gave his usual snort and stormed out of the bathroom with Quirrell on his tail. McGonagall turned to her three favorite students and said. "There won't be any punishment for this, in fact I award the two Mr. Weasley 20 points each for taking down a fully grown Troll, and in further more, I award you Ms. Granger 10 points for your loyalty. Now you fours go off to your tower and don't mention anything about what happened here tonight, do I make myself clear on this?"
The three students just nodded there head and said there good nights to the two professors as they ran out and too the Gryffindor common room and off to bed. They were just glad that they weren't killed tonight, and were awfully tired. They all had some interesting dreams that night about what happened, and not all of them were nightmares.
