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He walked, slowly, very slowly down the rocky dark path. His mind, filled with thoughts of anger, despair, angst, and hatred.
Night had fallen already. He could finally get air and leave his brother's position. How he hated his brother.
His brother always putting him down for no reason. Always thinking people were useless and pathetic. Especially humans. His brother didn't even seem at all like him. Both of them. So different. Yet, so alike. Both, vampires, yet, both with different purposes.
"Another walk in the night, master Yoh?" A distant voice called.
A tall thin man appeared before Yoh. His hair black as very dirty snow. Straight and thin.
"What are your worries master Yoh?" He said in a England accent.
"Nothing, just silly old me, worrying about nothing Ryu. However, please do not call me master Yoh. It sounds like I treat you wrong like a prisoner." Yoh cleared out for Ryu.
" Well, I like to say master Yoh, so I get used to it when you become king. I'd rather thee become king than your devious brother, Hao".
Ryu stepped toward Yoh; he gently placed his right hand on Yoh.
"You worry too much prince Yoh; you will be a great king, just like your father." Ryu said in a smirk.
Yoh cleared his throat and looked Ryu in the eye. "That's the problem, my father died when I was six, and I still don't remember him. How am I to be king, when I do not even know how to rule!"
"But I remember thou father, he was the best. Even though I was only ten. I still remember him. Oh, your mother, she was the prettiest of them all. The fairest and prettiest."
"Always thinking of women Ryu?" a far voice questioned.
Yoh and Ryu turned to see him standing there. His hair was purplish and his eyes were pure yellow. His age, about sixteen.
"Well Ryu?" he mocked.
"Ah! Little master Len!" Ryu yelled in surprise. He slightly placed his hand on Len.
"Where have you been!" he tried to hide his surprised face.
Len was always the rebel guy. But he was one of the most kinder persons in the world. However, he didn't show it. That much.
"Get your dirty filthy bloody hand off me!" Len scowled.
Both Yoh and Ryu backed away.
Okay, so maybe he didn't show it .At all.
"He slowly licked his lip. Flavoring the blood on his lip.
"What did you eat this time?" Yoh questioned.
"What the hell do you think?" Len shot back.
"Well, anything else EXCEPT human." He reminded Len.
"I told you, humans taste nasty."
"You've never tasted one, have you?" Ryu questioned.
"Nope. Don't want to. Besides, for your information I had a rabbit for breakfast, a deer for lunch and a goat for dinner." Len answered in a mock.
"So did I!" a voice answered from far.
Out of nowhere, a blue haired boy appeared. His eyes were pure blue. He was about Len's and Yoh's age.
"Great. I tried to get away from you. But, I guess it didn't work. Pathetic Horohoro. (Trey)" Len mocked.
"Hey Len! Where were you? I looked all over for you!"
Horohoro placed his both hands on Len. And looked at him straight in the eye.
"I was at a human's house" Len mocked.
"Really? How did they treat you? Were they nice?" Horohoro said in amazement.
Everyone did the anime fall.
Yoh interrupted the conversation with a simple statement.
"Okay, I think we have had enough for a day. Let's get back to the cave. Night fall is going to end very soon. Besides, Chocolove (guy with afro, who is making up dum jokes) must be there. Waiting."
BACK TO THE END OF CHAPTER 3
She ran fast as the wind, not stopping to breathe or to do anything. Finally she reached the main gate. She opened the two locks. She quickly went to the stable. She led out a brown horse with a white crest on its forehead.
Without a thought she jumped on the horse and slapped it hard. The horse quickly galloped outside, but, outside the gates the horse did not act natural. It neighed and did not want Anna on him.
It spinned in circles and neighed harsh.
Until Anna could not stand it she fell off the horse she turned and hissed at the horse, showing her deadly fangs.
In a blink of an eye, the horse ran like hell.
She limped toward the village. Her hands smothered in blood. Her velvet pretty dress all ripped and dripping with blood.
She looked at the peoples faces. They were all shocked to see her. They did not know whether to help her, or leave her.
One villager threw a rock at Anna.
"Thou get out of this village!"
Anna turned and stood up, her pretty hair covered with blood. Her face blinded by all the blood.
Villagers started throwi8ng rocks and small pebbles at her.
She turned all over and hissed showing her death killing teeth.
"DEMON!" An elderly woman yelled.
Anna soon realized, she was going to die.
She gulped steady and hard. In an blink of an eye she ran like hell. She tried not to look back at all the villagers chasing her. Knives, axes, and other weapons were held up while they were chasing her.
Then, the most terrible fate happened.
She tripped on a large rock, damaging her ankle. The villagers were not at all very far from her.
"Demon!" A man yelled.
Back to Yoh and the boys
"Did you hear that?" Horohoro questioned.
"Yeah, but what was it?" Ryu looked around, searching for an answer.
"Someone's in trouble, we have to go check." Yoh suggested.
"No, what if it's a human? He will surely kill us." Len reminded Yoh.
"Demon!"
They heard a loud yell.
"Does that sound like a human?" Yoh asked.
Len glared at Yoh with a worried expression
"Let's go then, but as bats. Humans must not see us. Let's hurry"
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