A.N. This chapter I am concentrating mostly on sub characters—so do not expect any fluff between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. But there is good news— I actually passed my Spelling Final! I thought I had lost my study guide so I did not remember what words I had to use for sentences (It was stuck to my social studies study guide) long story short—I got an A! I'm totally done with finals that I was worried as all anything over and just have a placement test Saturday on the fourth.
Summary: Who new that all you had to do to become famous was drown?
Disclaimer: If I had a dollar for every anime I did not have... I would be rich.
Thanks go out to my beta reading KogasGirl!
Delightfully Disastrous
(TSUKI)
Chapter Nine
(TSUKI)
Sango walked out of her bathroom and into her room, clad in a pink and green robe and pink fuzzy toed slippers. Her hair was dripping wet and she was humming cheerfully.
She giggled as she exited the sizeable room a smile plastered to her face. She was still clothed in the robe and her slippers.
To her, nothing felt better than a shower on a bright sunny morning, except making her favorite breakfast in a robe and slippers.
It had become sort of her morning routine. It was simple: wake up, get ready, and pull on a robe made from a fuzzy material and do her job. She was fully dressed underneath in a pale skirt and tennis shirt, but she just felt she could not make the perfect breakfast with out that extra touch.
That extra touch being her morning garb.
It was a bit passed six and she was getting ready to make her famous pancakes. They were fanciful in form; embossed with crests, molded into fish, or shaped into tiny balls, or small cakes with fruit fillings.
It all was quite unusual. But, she remembered with a sigh, would also have to include some bowls of something within the meat food group. In a household of mainly youkai and such, a meal lacking meat was not a meal worth eating and Sango really was not looking to be unemployed.
A lot of the maids were youkai, and those would kept up with the maintenance of the villa. Even if the house seemed empty, it was always bustling with life as strange as if may seem.
She went on with her morning musings that were quite typical and known to run from thought to thought without pause. She sighed, 'Ayame is probably not going to be here today. She seemed quite upset yesterday not that that is new, and Kirara I'm sure will help out any way she can.'
Sango smiled fondly in thought of the fire neko sleeping soundly in her room. The mononoke was her only near by family since her parents were in the states. Her brother was attending school there also, so she was by herself there in Japan.
She received a letter everyone few days or so, but it was not as good as seeing her family in person. Not even close.
"But what can you do?" Sango continued downstairs.
But it was almost summer time and her family would e back in her company. She would be going back to the States to spend her vacation with her family. That or they were coming over to Tokyo. Nothing had been planned yet for that summer.
Everyone was either sleeping or working so no one ever saw her morning apparel. For that she was glad. It was just something she always did with her family and did not want anyone to question it. She had not to even worry about Sesshoumaru since he would train every morning around that time.
'I wonder if he ever sleeps...' she thought with a giggle.
He was always working if not in a business like manner then, physically working. But everyone needed a break and he was no different from everyone.
Stretching she entered her beloved kitchen. It was her second home. Sango did not mind having to stand for hours on end if only she could spend the time cooking.
She was about to head for the pantry when she spotted one of the men from before—'Mirouku was it?'
'Yes, that was it. Mirouku. He was that perverted man from yesterday!' Sango suddenly blushed as she took in his relaxed features, "Um, can I help you?"
He was sipping a cup of tea; a book in his free hand. Sango took a peek at the title and lifted a brow when she read the title, 'Idiot's Guide to Managing.'
Mirouku cleared his throat with a smile and placed the book face down gently on the island counter top. "No help needed, thank you."
He stared at her chosen apparel. With a crimson face Sango scampered off to the pantry, "Say a word and I'll kill you."
Mirouku just smiled and stood, "Well, I'll leave you to your cooking."
She looked at the titled floor shyly in the doorway of the storeroom, "You don't have to leave if you don't want to."
Mirouku returned to his seat and Sango smiled, "So, why up so early?" A light chuckle erupted from the young man, "Doing a little studying."
Sango smiled as she got out a box of mix for the pancakes. Mirouku looked at the ingredients she pulled from the refrigerator, "What are you making?"
"Japanese Pancakes," she gave a soft smile.
"Need any help?"
His reply was a snort, "You cook?"
Mirouku shrugged, "I've made toast before."
A mock exasperated sigh greeted him and she waved him over. "I suppose that's good enough."
She pulled out a bowl and gave him a few instructions as to how many eggs he should add and the amount of milk and mix.
Getting an electric mixer, Sango turned in on. It whirred to life. Sango was saying something to him, but it was lost on him as he was caught up in his own thoughts, that did not happen at all to be rated G...
Mirouku's hand twitched as he just then realized how close he was to a beautiful girl. It inched closer to his goal slowly. Mirouku struggled to pull it back to his side.
As if it had a mind of its own his hand went to stroke Sango's bottom as she fiddled with the speed of the electric mixer. Hand caressed ass and chaos erupted.
Sango's eyes widened as she felt someone's hand on her rear and she dropped the mixer into the batter as she went to slap who she just knew did it. "You pervert!"
...And then the contents of the bowl exploded...all over the near by pair.
Sango grimaced as bit of egg and milk from the batter rolled down her brow. She glared at the manager who wiped off the flour covering his face and gave an innocent grin.
"Well I'm certain that there's no harm in washing your hair twice..."
Sango glared and threw a rag from the counter top at him, "When I come back, I want this kitchen spotless."
Mirouku sighed and took the rag that was thrown mercilessly off his head, as Sango stomped out of the room growling about 'perverted managers who should be castrated.'
"This hand will be the end of me..." He sighed as he started wiping the partially yellow and completely slimy mixture from the counter.
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Sango stomped up the stair her face contorting every time a drop of the pancake goo rolled down her face. She for the second time went or rather, ran in to the bathroom and washed her hair. Half an hour later, Sango ran back down the stairs her beloved robe now in the hamper and her hair once again sopping wet.
She now knew how hard it was to get egg yolk out of your hair.
And she still had to finish those pancakes. She was thirty minutes behind schedule and a meal-less house hold was not a very pleasant one. She did not have time to blow dry her hair so she would have to spend an hour or two with dripped locks.
"Why did I have to let him help!"
In her rush to the kitchen, she bumped into Shouyga the hair expert and several other helpers who were just waking up.
She sighed, the people waking up just signified just how behind the clock she was. She had only perhaps, forty minutes to finish breakfast. She briskly reached the kitchen.
Sango was surprised to find Mirouku, apron clad standing over the stove. He was still covered in the pancake batter.
Her brows shot to the top of her head, and she stood dumbfounded while watching as the man carefully open the lip to a pan and look at the cooking contents.
He turned to her and rubbed the back of his head, "I thought I could at least start on these, since I ruined your first batter."
Sango lifted a thin incredulous brow and took a cautious peek in the pan to see the non-exploding or mutated pancakes, "I couldn't have done a better job. Thanks Mr.—"
The young cook never felt comfortable calling someone she barely knew by their first name, without permission. It just made her feel discourteous. The same applied here, though his last name was lost on her.
"Please, call me Mirouku," he smiled once again. There was something about his smile. It was just too...friendly.
She pulled on an apron, and grabbed box of sausage from the fridge. It may not have gone with the baked theme, but meat was a necessity where she worked. "Well then, thanks, Mirouku."
Mirouku nodded, "I do not believe we were properly introduced."
She brought out another skillet and dropped in the contents of the box in with cooking oils. "I'm sorry, I'm Sango."
For some reason the joy she normally felt from cooking was not there, only an anxious feel for something more.
Mirouku shook her hand, for once, doing nothing perverted, Nice to meet you Sango." Sango blushed and smiled, returning to what she was doing.
Mirouku suddenly plopped down on the chair, arms casually crossed behind his head as a yawning Kagome entered the room, "Good morning, you two."
She groaned, "I can't seriously believe I'm awake at," she looked at the kitchen clock and groaned, "Seven a.m.—such an ungodly hour!"
She sat down at her head dropped to the granite veneering. "Shouyga woke me up, saying something about birds."
Sango laughed, "The early bird catches the worm?" Kagome nodded against the granite counter top, "Can I get you some coffee?"
Kagome nodded against the table and slurred drowsily, "Yes please. Half milk, half coffee, and half maple syrup, please."
With that she dozed off.
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Sesshoumaru walked into the kitchen clad in a pair of pants and a wife beater, a towel draped over his neck despite the fact that he did not look the least bit flushed. He had a button up shirt in his hands.
Sango blushed a bit at the sight of the well toned youkai and averted her gaze to Kagome who had moved to a sleeping position on the floor near the fridge.
Mirouku unfortunately had long gone out half an hour ago with Inuyasha and Kikyou for some event they had promised to be present at and so she had been left with Kagome as she nibbled on her breakfast.
It made for great conversation, she sighed.
Some thing had bothered her though. If Kikyou had not been dating Inuyasha, Sango felt as if she would have been terribly ...jealous of the beautiful designer as she talked softly though amiably to Mirouku, him laughing at something she had said.
Jealous of what and why, she was not quite sure. She and the perverted man had nothing on common grounds...
'...Right?'
She sighed and rubbed her temples to ward off an offending headache.
Sesshoumaru went into the fridge and pulled out a bottle of water. He stepped over Kagome who was in the path of the fridge. Kagome rolled over and grabbed Sesshoumaru's legs, "Come back...stupid muffin."
Sango laughed for what seemed like the millionth time that day. Kagome had said at least a dozen random things—all nonsense and all relating to food in some way.
Sesshoumaru looked less amused and more surprised—well only if you call a small lift of the brow surprise, "...Muffin?"
Sango now completely erupted in laughter, "She has been calling out like that since she nodded off." The youkai author still looked even more uninterested in anything but getting his legs freed.
Kagome squeezed his legs tighter as if knowing what Sesshoumaru was thinking.
Sango decided to help out her employer since she felt that she had had enough fun; she bent down to Kagome and poked her side. This seemed like a person who had to be tickle-ish.
She just had to.
Sango's assumption was proved right, when little peals of laughter came from the unconscious teen as she poked her sides. She released her hold somewhat on the captive legs belonging to a not so happy Sesshoumaru.
Kagome eyes slowly opened and she sat up groggily, "Souta? What?"
Sango smiled, and helped the girl up, "It's Sango. You fell asleep," Kagome knit her brows recognition filling her chocolate eyes. "I remember talking to you and Mirouku—was that his name? But how did I ...get on the floor?"
Kagome yawned behind a hand as she just seemed to notice Sesshoumaru. Kagome smiled, "Oh! I meant to ask you. Could I take Rin swimming? I was talking to her last night and she seemed to really want to go."
Sesshoumaru frowned, "If she will be under just your supervision, then no."
Kagome frowned, "And just what pray tell is wrong with being under my supervision! Sango, is there anything wrong with—"
Sango interrupted the girl, not wanting to get in the middle, and she scurried out of the room, while making up a story, "You know, I think I hear Mr. Totoki calling me."
Kagome pouted while whining, "Sango!" She blew out a breath, as Rin skipped in from the dining room where most of the employees were eating, smiling happily, in a pair of short her hair in a lopsided ponytail.
"G' morning Sesshoumaru-sama, g' morning Kagome! Shouyga-sama helped Rin get dressed."
Kagome smiled, she was too cute. She would randomly revert from first to third person in speech, and it was... 'Adorable!'
Sesshoumaru patted her on the head and gave her a small smile. Kagome stared at him and blushed, she seemed to be doing that a lot while in his company, but he was basically ...perfect, not to mention well toned. And when he looked anything but pissed off or annoyed, he looked...well there was not even a word that would not take from his masculinity.
'If you see him the first word that pops to mind is, beautiful...not something a male wants to be called.'
She blushed crimson at those thoughts. By the end of her stay she would have perfected her impression of a tomato.
Sesshoumaru's voice broke through her thoughts, "You know... it is very rude to stare."
Kagome blinked and brought her gaze back to his face, with an "eep!"
Rin grabbed Kagome's hand, and swung it eagerly, "Is Kagome taking me out to the water?" Kagome smirked at Sesshoumaru looking smug. "Yes, Sesshoumaru, is Kagome taking Rin out to the water?"
'If I knew him—and I don't—he would definitely not want to put down Rin. Or at least I hope he won't.' She bit her bottom lip.
Sesshoumaru put a hand to his temple, "Yes. But I am going with you. I do not need to hear that you let Rin drown."
Kagome once again grinned smugly then frowned, "Hey! I would not. I have a brother the same age and he's still alive and kicking!"
Rin look awed, "You have a brother?"
Kagome smiled, "Yup, same age as you. His name is Souta, he can be a pain, but I love him dearly."
Rin grinned showing her missing front teen, "Can I meet you brother?"
Sesshoumaru watched the exchange between the two. Kagome nodded, "I'll introduce you two!" Then she bent down for Rin to climb on her back, "Get on Rin-chan, I'll carry you. Come on, Sesshoumaru!"
Kagome was out the door and carefully descending the stone steps to the sandy beach below the villa with the eight year old securely positioned on her back.
Kagome looked down at her flip flops which were being engulfed by the warm sand, and spaghetti strap sundress. She rarely did visit the beach and she was loving the feeling of ...well everything.
Rin hugged Kagome closer, in anticipation.
She threw a big smiled, "Okay, Rin, are you ready to go in?"
Rin nodded enthusiastically, "Shouyga-sama helped Rin put on her bay-thing-suit." She said pronouncing the word carefully smiling as she got it right.
Kagome laughed, "I have mine on also."
She couldn't help giving a glance at Sesshoumaru a strange feeling stirred as he stared back as she watched him. She helped Rin out of her clothes and was out of her dress in seconds.
She had a two piece ice blue bathing suit that had a thin black lining; Rin wore an orange one piece.
Sesshoumaru just sat on the sandy beach and just prepared himself for a long wait.
Kagome grimaced, at the prospect of getting in the salt water. Her arms and hands were still recovering from their cuts, but she did not want to dishearten the young girl. She had seemed so eager for Kagome to take her out to the sea.
Rin ran across the water's edge, "Come on Kagome!"
Laughing the aforementioned person followed, after throwing off her sandals. She grabbed the giggling girl from behind and picked her up, "Got you!"
Rin waved at Sesshoumaru and Kagome waved him over, "Come on in party pooper! The water is—"
A fairly large waved pushed the two down. After it passed, Kagome scrunched her nose and wrung out her hair. She spat out a mouthful of water, "...Fine."
Rin giggled still wrapped in Kagome's arms and the two sat for a bit in the water, trying to get Sesshoumaru to join them. Sesshoumaru lifted a brow, as they started a '100 reason for getting in the water' List.
They took turns, Kagome grinned, "Reason number one: because I said to."
Rin squealed as she was splashed by the water. "Because Rin thinks it's fun!"
Sesshoumaru snorted.
Five minutes later, after screaming about nonsense about maybe getting a tan, and how the ocean was wet they turned to bribery.
Kagome tapped her chin, "Hmm. Reason number thirty-four: I'll give you a dollar," She singsong-ed
"Rin will... smile!"
Sesshoumaru shook his head softly at the attempts.
Kagome suddenly got an idea, and whispered softly to Rin her plan. The small girl nodded profusely and the two stood smiling secretly to each other the list forgotten.
They walked up to Sesshoumaru and he looked at the two warily. They each grabbed one of his clawed hands and pulled him to the water.
Sesshoumaru allowed himself to be pulled. He rarely saw Rin that happy and for some reason did not want to crush the small request of her...and Kagome.
Kagome and Rin laughed as Sesshoumaru was brought up to his waist in the water. Rin once more on Kagome's back.
Kagome smiled and splashed the youkai, "See! I knew you couldn't resist!"
Sesshoumaru snorted, "Then I believe you owe me a dollar."
Kagome quickly changed the subject, "Wow! This water is so...erm...blue!"
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Mirouku, Kikyou, and Inuyasha walked in through the front door, a sigh of exhaustion erupting from each.
Kikyou smiled at Inuyasha, "You have to admit, that wasn't too bad."
Inuyasha crossed his arms, "Yeah, it was worse."
Sango rolled her eyes from her spot on the couch, hearing the group from where she sat. She had been amusing herself by reading. "I just don't see the work in showing up at a place and smiling."
Inuyasha scoffed, "You left out the part where you're plundered by those...insane fans. I may be hot, but hey, I need my space!"
Kikyou slapped him lightly and teased, "I wouldn't say hot...Okay looking maybe."
Mirouku chuckled, and the two women shared a laugh, while Inuyasha pouted. "Please, you know you wish you had a body like me!"
Kikyou and Sango laughed a bit harder.
A laughing Rin was carried in by Kagome. The two had changed their clothes and were intending to go to play a card game.
"Oh! Hello everyone how was that ...thing...you did?"
Inuyasha groaned, "Exhausting."
Kagome put Rin down and stretched, "Glad it went well."
Sango ruffled Rin's hair, who gave a shy smile, "How was your day outside?" Her answer was a gap toothed smile.
Mirouku yawned, "So, what's for lunch? I'm starved."
Sango blinked, "Lunch? Funny thing about that..."
Inuyasha's eyes widened in disbelief, "We were gone for like 3 hours and you didn't even start on anything!"
His stomach growled in accent to his point. Sango shrugged helplessly, "I had to step out for a bit with Kagura, and then I sat down to read when I got in. I'm sure we can order something..."
Kagome frowned, "Kagura... Why?"
Sango rolled her eyes, "She insisted upon me going with her pick up a few items for her clothing. She had supposedly injured her arm and was having trouble lifting even the slightest objects."
Inuyasha narrowed his eyes, "You gave up making lunch for helping her?" Another feeble shrug was his answer.
"I couldn't just say, 'F-off' to her, Inuyasha. I unlike you have manners."
Mirouku, ever the mediator put up his hands in an attempt to stopped the heated comments, "Calm down, Inuyasha. There's no point in dwelling on it when we can order something."
Kagome stood up and started for the villa gym. She needed to call her mother and she wanted to get away from the arguments.
She had a feeling that something positive was bound to happen. Whether that feeling had base or she did not know. It didn't hurt to try though. Plus she was feeling extremely home sick.
Kagome knew after a shower Sesshoumaru had gone to the gym to finish that morning's work out or something of the sorts. Mr. Totoki had shown her the gym the other night when he had given her a tour.
She walked carefully down the hall until she came to a wide double door entrance. She opened the doors and entered. Half the room was matted and exactly like a fitness center. All the equipment neatly set up for use.
The other half was devoted to traditional Japanese swords and weaponry. It had a wooden floor. Kagome looked with admiration at the bows and arrows. She was an archer, taught by her grandfather.
She was pretty good, in the sense that three out of four shot actually hit the mark. Sesshoumaru looked up from his place at the small desk there. An old fashioned ink pen was in his hand.
He lifted a brow, causing Kagome to roll her eyes, 'Talking never killed anyone you know...'
She smiled though in spite of her thoughts, but decided to get to the point, "Can I use your phone? I'd like to call my mom."
Sesshoumaru dug into his pockets and pulled out the slim phone. She would used the house phone, but she would have hated to pass up a chance to irritate Sesshoumaru and her mother got freaked out when ever she saw a phone number she did not recognize and more stress was not needed at this point.
So Sesshoumaru's cell phone it was!
Kagome took the portable phone and planted her rear on the tatami mat on the floor. She punched in a few buttons and put the phone to her ear.
After a couple of rings, someone picked up. "Hello?"
Kagome smiled, "Souta! How are you?"
She could tell her brother was smiling also, "I'm doing fine Kagome, but I...kinda miss you. It's no fun over here without you."
Kagome wanted to hug her younger brother. Souta was young and looked up to her, she knew. He was shy by nature around everyone else, except her and the basic family; the young boy felt that he could be more open around his sister.
"I miss you too, Souta. All of you, very much so. I'll see you soon though, so don't worry." She paused, "Could you put momma on?"
"Okay, hold on, sis."
Kagome nodded despite the fact that it went unseen from her brother in the part of Japan. That was Kyoto. In less than a minute, her mother's soft voice reached her ears. "Kagome dear! How are you?"
Kagome licked her lips which were somewhat dry., "I'm fine momma, but what about you and jii-chan?" She heard a small noise of shock.
"Oh dear, I'm so sorry! I meant to call you. I am doing well and ojii-chan's condition has improved; he should be out of special care soon and he should be able to be moved to a hospital in Tokyo—I am at least praying for that. We miss you, dear."
Kagome let out a joyous sigh, her eyes dampened, "I'm so happy to hear that, I miss you all so much, also."
Mrs. Higurashi was smiling on the other end of the phone, "I'll try and remember to phone you. I just got so caught up—"
Kagome shook her head, "Don't apologize. I understand. Well I have to go; I'll talk to you later."
"Okay dear. I hope to see you soon. Bye, honey."
"Good- bye, mom."
Kagome clicked off the phone and hugged her knees to her chest. Kagome stood and noted that Sesshoumaru was staring at her.
She handed him the phone, "She said jii-chan was getting better and maybe by the end of the week I can go home."
Sesshoumaru nodded he had swiveled his chair to face her, for some reason his full attention had been on her.
Kagome for the second time threw her arms around the demon and cried—only this time not from distress.
Sesshoumaru arms once more slowly found themselves wrapped around her thin waist and Kagome wiped her eyes still in her awkward position in Sesshoumaru's hold. She felt so comfortable there.
She was still confused as to why though. Still perplexed at why she wanted so much to just be in his company. Sesshoumaru was so...indifferent to the point of being uncaring.
At times though, he was different. Like that afternoon, and now.
Sesshoumaru inwardly sighed. Why was he letting this girl...this woman child affect him in such way. He was growing too soft. But there was something about her that just made him lose all he had learned in young age.
All the training he had gone through to keep total indifference. She had the power to shatter it all. She, like Rin was weaseling into his frozen heart cracking the ice around it.
She smiled at him, "Thank you, Sesshoumaru."
Kagome stood, and smoothed her sundress that she had re-changed into after her shower. She had borrowed Sango's blow dryer and so her hair for once was not moist in the least.
He gave a ghost of a smile that Kagome almost did not catch sight of, and turned from her. Kagome blushed and went to leave, but stopped.
Sesshoumaru looked up at her when she paused and Kagome just smiled once again and left.
She walked back to the living room and found everyone gone; for once no one was in front of the television.
Kagome giggled "Wow—sign of the apocalypse maybe?" She went into the kitchen. She frowned as she opened the door.
The one person she did not want to see was sitting on the granite counter top of the kitchen counters.
A.N. How many people thought that I was serious? What kind of author would I be if I left out the most important ingredient of a romance: Fluff! Lol not a very good one, damn it! So you got your fluff and a bit of a cliffy so tell me how it was. Don't expect any regular updates also. I graduate next week and will be gone for the majority of it for trips and retreats and dances and graduation practice! Whew, it's going to be fun and tiring. Sunday is my graduation, so please, please, please wish me luck. I am seriously fearing that I will trip and go flying into the pews of the church. I wonder what that mystery person wants. Thank you for the reviews! The best graduation present I could have ever asked for was getting 100 reviews for this story that I thought would only get maybe...five two of them being flames for my lack of sense lol.
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