Hello all of my readers!
I want to thanks all of you for reading this story. It is my first, and it is actually helping me out with my major (Since my Major is Writing)
I just wanted to give a heads-up to all of you and give, yet another, brush-up, from Chapters 6 to 10. Some mistakes will be included.:
Elise, as you know, chooses T-Bag over Michael. Some people believe this is a move for T-Bag to redeem himself, and some people still thinks he's going to be the same. Wel, I'm not telling. You'll have to wait until the end.
Olivia and LJ are together, but only one of the parent's knows. How will Lincoln react to knowing that his son is dating his brother's best friend's daughter? Yet again, you'll have to wait.
We find out that Elise has a heart condition that is permanent, and yet it is remission. At any time, this condition can come up and screw everyone up. Will it come up or not? Again, send me reviews and give me ideas. I need help. Lol.
I know that when Lorena, Olivia, LJ, and the two mobsters arrived in DC, they met Veronica and Nick, and in the next chapter, Nick and Veronica are no where to be found. I didn't write it in, bu Veronica and Nick were continuing on looking for evidence. Just wanted to clear that up.
When Elise talked to the Swat guy, he was referred to as "Johnson." His full name is David Johnson, and he was with Elise during the Special O.P.S.
No one knows who Olivia's father is…except for Elise. I didn't write about this, but it will be brought up in the next chapter. Send me reviews to give me ideas on who you think is her father…I already know who it is, but I want to know if my dedicated readers know.
That's it for the brush-up…but here is a question?
What actress do you think would fit the role as Elise, if Elise was indeed, a real character?
Send me reviews on who you think would be a good "Elise" and I give you Kudos!
Thank you for reading, and let's head on to the next chapter!