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Chapter 10: Here Comes Hercules!

Saturday came quickly. Today is the day Lincoln Loud made his debut as Royal Woods' new hero and possibly the new member of the Avenger, Hercules. As soon as Lincoln wake up, he breaks the fourth wall, "This is it. I'm going out there as Royal Woods' new hero. My family are right behind me. I'm a little nervous. It's everything I dream up since I read Ace Savy and me and Clyde would spread into action whenever there's a mission. Like Peter says, I have to confidence and not froze up. This city needs someone who can look up to, and that someone is me."

He took out the case from under his bed. When he opened it, he smiles at the costume he will be wearing. With Leni's design, the family contribute in helping making the armor. Using bronze as the only material, the family locate every bronze they can find and melt it down by Lisa's orders. Each sister design a part of the armor while the cloak is made by Leni. Lincoln is proud by what his family accomplish.

A knock on the door made Lincoln look away the outfit and answer "Come in," before seeing it was Luna.

"Hey bro," Luna said with a grin. "You set?"

"You bet. I'm stoked to go out there," Lincoln smile brightly. Luna ruffle his hair.

"Don't stay in your room. The family is waiting for you."

"I won't, Luna."

As soon as Luna left, Lincoln return seeing his armor. He grabbed the breastplate and slide his hand across the bronze texture. Just like how the Greeks worn. Lincoln said back to the fourth wall, "Let's do this. Wish me luck."


The Loud family, plus Peter, walked to the center of the town. Peter is excited to show Lincoln the ropes of being a hero. Peter asked "So what's the status of the town's crime rate?"

"Not a lot," Lincoln answer. "Royal Woods is pretty calm."

"Really?" Peter is doubting his statement. "I don't buy it. Come on, is there anything this town have hit? A big disaster? A massacre? Scandal?"

Lori answer "The only scandal we have ever had is one politician is accused of being grabby grabby with a underage girl. But there's nothing serious."

"And you can't forget the big storm we had two years ago," Lisa pointed out. "Nearly wreak out house."

"You won't find anything here, dude," Lynn Jr added. "This town is clean and safe, but boring at the same time," They stopped at the sidewalk as cars pass by. Rita press the meter for the green light to turn red.

Peter answer with a smirk "We'll find something. Nothing beats the crime rate like we had in New York."

Luan said, "You have robbers in mask, we have bad drivers," The light turn red and all of them move ahead. Then all of them jump back by incoming taxi.

"HEY, WATCH WERE YOU GOING, IDIOTS!" The driver shouted with his fist in the air.

Lana shouted back "WHY DON'T YOU WATCH WERE YOU GOING, NITWIT?!"

"Very bad drivers," Lynn Sr. added.

The family then got a hotdog from a local vendor. Lincoln asked while eating his meal, "What's the plan here, Peter?"

"We gotta locate anything unusual; that's the easy part. But with a town like this," Peter reply, chewing his chill hotdog. "It's not gonna be easy."

Lucy said, "And it's gonna be tuff. Who knows when the next crime happen?"

"This is dumb! I wanna see some action!" Lana shouted, spilling out her food between talk.

"Chill, Lana, let's just hope a crime is presented and Lincoln and Peter are on it," Luna said. As the family passes an alley, a man wearing a trend coat appear right in front of them

"Hey, you ladies are interested in some jewelry?" The man opened his coat to reveal jewelers and diamonds. "I bet this man," He pointed at Lynn Sr, "Has his eye on this nice watch," He held up his right arm where it has three watches.

"Get outta here, ya bum!" Lynn Jr shouted and kick him in the bum, making the man disappear back in the alley.

Leni turn to Peter, "You gotta watch out these creepy guys in ugly coats. They'll sell you anything, but they're all cheap. Like this one time, I spent seventy-five dollars on this totes bracelet and my arm turn green!"

"We have that back in Queens. Just they're not selling any jewelers," Peter admitted, his face pale of expressing that kind of trauma.

"What was it?"

"You don't want to know."

"Like Leni said, Royal Woods have 10 to 15% of crazy people in here," Lola said. Then a preacher came shouting through the crowd, and the people walk passed them

"The Lord is testing us! He is testing you! To see if you have Satan in your hearts! I ask you to repent!" The man spot the Loud family and Peter. His eyes wide as he moves to the man from Queens, "You must have something that is not human! And this boy as well!" He points his finger at Lincoln. "Why do you two fear me?!" His voice sounds desperate.

"Let's move away, gang," Lynn Sr advise them. The gang walked passed the preacher, who shouted "You must stay from the soldiers of Satan! They will destroy you!"

"Thank you for that! We'll keep that in mind!" Lori waved her hand mockingly at the man. She whisper at the web slinger, "Don't look back."

"You don't have to tell me twice," Peter said, finishing eating his hotdog and throwing the wrapper in a trash bin. "This city is filled with a few crazies."

"It's true, but not all of us are crazy," Rita said, smiling a bit. "This city have nice people here. Like us, the people we know, the people we befriended, and the people we worked together," The family continue walking for a bit until they cut through the park. Lily spot something and wiggle her arms to get their attention.

Peter noticed this and said "What's wrong, Lily?"

"Twouble! Twouble!" Lily cried. The baby babbles then points her finger at the park. There, two large boys were picking on a girl.

Luan gasp, "Uh-oh, trouble," The family and Peter enter the park and stop to see who the bullies are.

Upon seeing them, Lincoln lay out a growl, "Great, it's these guys again," Peter saw the boys are sixteen year old and muscular. From his experience with bullies, he knows they are one. The first bully is dark skinned with black hair and a mole on his cheek. The other bully is light-skinned with brown hair and a missing front tooth.

"You know them?" Peter asked.

"These two bozos are from Hazeltucky. They're names are Hank and Hawk," Lynn said with annoyance. "They're trouble."

Lana glared "They even ruined Halloween and took our candy!"

"And my haunted house," Lucy added, her voice spelled with despair at the two bullies.

"Who is the poor victim from these ruffians?" Lisa tries to look at who is being picked on. Her glasses pick on a girl around Lucy age and wearing black as well. "Lucy, it's your friend!" Her voice raise at the resident goth, shocking her.

Hank and Hawk both laugh crudely. Haiku was on the ground and glaring at the two bullies. She was enjoying the day to write more poems in this unusual day instead of being in her room. To her bad luck, she was encountered by these morons from Hazeltucky.

"Hey pasty, why don't you turn into a bat and fly away?" Hank said.

Hawk got hold of her poem books and flip through the pages and snorted, "What's with these crap?"

"They're called haiku, you swine," The goth girl reply without any hint of anger. "Ever read one?"

"Yeah, and I suck at them!" The dark skinned boy spat. "Shouldn't you be back in your room like what your kind should do?"

"My parents say so. I don't like my poems being here. My place is my room. Just so you two don't understand, that was a haiku."

This ticked off the boys. "Yo Hank, did that bat just get smart at us?" Hawk asked.

"I think she did! Let's see if this bat like the water!" Hank shouted, and he and his friend grabbed the girl and lure her away.

Leni shouted "We gotta do something!"

Peter turned to his apprentice, "Lincoln, it's time," The white haired boy nodded his head. Luna handed him the bag that contain his suit. Peter took Lincoln to another direction while the rest of the family follow where the boys took Haiku.

The boys stop at the water fountain. Hawk was holding the book while Hank grabs Haiku by her wrist. The girl's bottom legs press against the fountain. "Let's see if you can float!" Hank declare, his hands press on the girl.

Haiku said, "Go ahead and try. If I float, I am a witch. Be this your warning. Another haiku," Hawk's forehead twitch and lift the girl above the fountain.

Before that can happen, a loud cry spoke "HEY!"

The three turn their heads. Haiku's expose eye wide while the two bullies were dumbfounded. There stood a boy who was two inches above the normal height. His attire is strange, and yet intrigued. A handmade traditional Greek armor. Bronze, like the ones they made. It's the whole set. A breastplate. Gauntlets on both arms. Greaves on both legs. And a large cloak the shield his face.

"If I were you guys, I let her go," The boy in cloak spoke in a gruff voice.

Hank and Hawk looked at each other before the light skinned boy spoke back "Yeah, and who are you?"

The boy lay out a laugh and spoke, "I'm Hercules, and you're looking at a hero," He put on a pose like any hero would do. The two boys laugh their heads off.

Behind them were the Loud family and Peter in his Spider-Man's outfit. "This is never going to work," Lori said.

"Lincy knows what he's doing," Leni put her faith in her little brother.

"If things go wrong, I'm stepping in," Lynn declared, rubbing both hands in anticipation.

"A hero?! What kind of suit is that?!" Hank crudely said and patting his knees.

"Halloween isn't another for four months. Unless it's Summerween," Hawk said, releasing a few chuckles. Hank stopped laughing and slap him at the back of his head.

"You idiot! That holiday only exist in Gravity Falls!"

"Why can't that exist here so we can pound on more kids and robbed their candy while enjoying it in our summer?"

"You gotta stop watching that show, bro; it's messing with you head. And when it's messing your head, it messes with mine!"

Peter is deadpanned by what he was hearing. He lean at the family, "They're really stupid, right?"

"Precisely," Lisa said.

Lana shouted "Somebody hit somebody!"

While distracted, Hercules swoop in and grab the book from Hawk's hand. Hawk shouted "Give that bad! We stole it first!"

"Get your phone ready, girls. Your brother is gonna kick some major butt," Lynn Sr said. Lori, Lana, and Luan all got their phones up to record the fight. Spider-Man is recording this as well from his suit.

"Come and get it," Hercules taunted. Hank dropped Haiku and charges at the hooded boy. Hercules step-sided and deliver a kick in the gut, making the bully grunt. The back of his shirt was grabbed and his entire body is thrown on the ground. Hawk pull a fist at the boy, but Hercules dodge as easily.

"Hold still, Robin Hood!" The bully shouted. Hercules stand still to let Hawk collaide his fist at his breastplate.

"Ahh!" He pull back in pain. His hand hurt how it had punch a wall. Hercules pull him at his face as he grins.

"It's not Robin Hood; it's Hercules!" The boy slammed his own head against Hank's nose and slam his body to clash into his friend.

The Loud family silently cheer while Peter clap his hands. "Get off!" Hawk pull Hank's body off from him. Upon seeing his nose dripping blood, he recoiled in disgust, "Aw, sick! Your nose is bleeding!"

Hank touch his nose and pull pack to see the blood from his finger. "Aw, you're right!" He exclaimed. "I'm gonna be sick!"

"If you get sick, I get sick!"

"And if you two don't wanna stick around for more," Spider-Man appear next to Hercules. "I suggest you leave before my friend does."

"Oh no, bro, it's Spider-Man!" Hank cried, getting up quickly and grabbing his friend. "Let's get outta here!" The bullies quickly ran away from the two heroes.

Spider-Man slap on Hercules back and said, "Not bad."

"I'm simply the best," Hercules bragged.

"Excuse me," Spider-Man and Hercules jumped in fright before turning to see Haiku holding her book. "I would like to thank you for saving me."

"All in a day's work, ma'am," Hercules spoke with courage. "You should leave before they come back." Haiku bows her head and walk away. Once she was gone, the Loud family walk to them. The boy resume speaking normally, "Got everything?"

"Yup," Lori said, popping the P from her mouth.

"You did great, bro!" Luna flashed a thumbs up at Lincoln. "Now time for the world to see Hercules!"

"Not just yet," Peter stopped those who were about to post the video on social media. "People aren't gonna believe their savior is a hero just by saving a girl from bullies. To show people you really are one, you gotta step up and be prepared for the next deal."

Suddenly, as Peter's prayers were heard, a woman scream, "Help!"

The Loud family ran out of the park to the source of the noise. A mother shout from the sidewalk, "My kid is in my car and it's rolling away!" Her car was driving to the street without anyone on the wheel. What's worse is her kid was inside. Peter turn to Lincoln, "Get in there!"

Lincoln, as Hercules, started running through the streets. Lynn Jr, the fastest in her family, ran with her phone to record the scene. Hercules focus on the car as he passes other vehicles. People stop to see the runaway car and the mysterious boy running to save the kid. Hercules jump on the hood of a car and going to the one that was close to the runaway car. He spook the driver from the door glass.

"Just drive to that car!" He ordered. The driver, still scared, drove to the car with the kid in it. Hercules jump to the roof of it and wave at the driver as a simple thank you. Hercules gasp upon touching the roof. A vision of said car driving to a four-way intersection and causing a horrible accident, not much horrid than the accident on Jackman 127. The boy slide on the roof and from the windshield saw the boy strapped on his seatbelt and crying. A few knocks on the door seize his cry temporary and saw the boy in the hood.

"Stay calm!" The hero spoke calmly; the boy was three years old and he nodded his head. Hercules turned around and saw the four-way intersection. With a quick plan, he carefully slide his entire body to stick his foot at the base on the road. His hands grip on the car's sides. The accelerated car is starting to slow down, but it was moving on the intersection. Hercules grit his teeth and press his hands that it bend the headlights. His foot drags on the road payment, not to worry about injuring it.

Lynn Jr's phone is recording the car slowing down but also seeing the cars in the intersection not. She gasped, "Oh no!"

Spider-Man swing into the roof and saw the scene at glance. While he was scared about him and others, a part of him pray Lincoln will saved the day like before. "Come on, Lincoln!" He said from his mask.

Hercules turns around and use his back to put more weight on the car to stop from going inside. The car finally stop at the edge of entering into the clash scene. Cars stopped to see the boy in the hood stopping the car. Hercules then ripped the passenger car door with his incredible strength, shocking the crowd. "You ok?" He asked the kid who was awed by what the boy in the hood did.

The crowd move around the mysterious savior with phones in the air. Hercules carries the kid, just as the mother arrive in taxi.

"My baby!" The mother ran to her child. Hercules gave her back the boy. The boy said with glee "Mommy, this man save me!"

"Who are you?" A man said.

Hercules only gave the words he wanted to say since he saved Haiku at the park. "I'm Hercules," He then ran and into the alley. People who saw him enter follow him to answer their questions, but he was gone.

From the rooftop, Spider-Man turned around to see Hercules who have uncover his hood and spoke with a grin "Well?"

Spider-Man was grinning as well. "People are knowing your name," With his hood back on, Lincoln bend down to see Lynn Jr and gave her a thumbs up. The sport tomboy gave one back with a large grin. The Loud family arrive by running and were out of breath. Lynn spoke the family while pointing at her phone. The family cheer in silent and gave their approval to Lincoln. With the crowd leaving, tweets will unleash in social media a few minutes later at what appears to be the new hero in Royal Woods.


Royal Woods got his new hero. Now Lincoln is going to face his first ever villain. One review say Rhino. I'll put him in the next chapter. Got any villains you want Lincoln to fight? Put it on your review and message board. Be sure to read my Total Drama-one shot stories! NiteOwl18 out!