A/N Need more reviews. Maybe some ideas for more problems for the good guys to over come.

Short update, but longer updates if people help with ideas and pointers.

Chapter 4

The battle was not going well with the limits on energy squid the city could not kill the hive ships fast enough they just kept firing not that it did much but Major Shepherd was getting tired, but with 2 hive ships down the major was doing ok.

"Well Dr Weir do you think I should decloak and start firing or should I let you guys have all the fun," asked the Guardian. "I don't know Guardian the Wraith are not stupid they must know something is off to the one side of the city as their ships just blow up in the middle of empty space, but I think the major could use some help." Stated Dr. Weir.

We see the city hanging in space over the planet of the Ancients. The flashing of the weapons as the Wraith darts are blown out of the sky or in this case space, and bigger flashes as the cruisers (in this story the hive ships carry more than 3 cruisers think I will go with the number 10 so with 12 hive ships I am thinking 120 cruisers in this battle.) die under concentrated fire of several guns. As before there was an area were there are no Wraith ships, sometimes there was a flash of light and a soft ripple of waves like on a pond a flash of black, blacker than space itself.

"I think you are right doctor I think I will join the battle but remember I have the same firing limits that the major has, but less of the tiring problem I could fire for decades with no problem and at that rate I may have too. I think I should put it this way the city could fire the whole energy squid chamber with a fully trained control chair operator and kill all these ships. If I were to fire off my energy squid chamber I could kill 10 times the number here, and that is just one of my weapon systems." Said the Guardian.

The wraith were attacking Atlantis so much that it took them all most a full second to see and just look in awe of the black sphere that appeared before them, than the darts started to attack it and they just simply vanished from space for there trouble.

A/N so were should I go from here.