Ok, sorry for not reviewing for ages, but I've been busy Christmas shopping and dealing with my mum who is ill at the min so I gotta look after her. Updates might not be very often but I will try k? You have my word.
YAY! IT'S NEARLY CHRISTMAS!
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BOOOOOO: Because this was obviously meant to be a flame, it shouldn't really be in a REVIEW reply, but it made me laugh so much, thank you MyFictionalAnnihilation for pointing it out. I mean, Hello? There are plenty of others who have given Will a sister, go bug them and also, the person who did it first, I highly doubt actually used a character called Blaise and I bet they weren't exactly the same. Also, if you hate it soooo much, why did you carry on reading it? That's just stupid. And if you did read it, you would know what was going on unless you skipped lines so stop leaving messages that don't make sense. Finally, you spell 'too' with two o's. Not one.
MyFictionalAnnihilation: Hey! Thanks for the lovely review and the message, you were right, it was funny lol And I'm very, very sorry for not updating. Keep reviewing!
GoGotha13: Wow! Your review made me smile lol Yay! Thanks so much, it's always nice to be appreciated lol And I didn't notice any typos.
Seducing Reason: I actually thought of that line all by myself lol I'm very proud of it. Thank you! I love nice reviews! Although funny flames are quite good too lol. But I definitely prefer reviews by a mile.
Betrothed is a Bad Word
I arrived at school and fought to get off the bus. Pushing and shoving other kids and ignoring Zach's constant pestering to find out what was wrong, I leapt off the bus and bolted for the school. If I remembered correctly, I saw Lash on the morning of my first day, standing by the door to the hall. Skidding right past the door, I stumbled back and rested a hand on his shoulder while I tried to catch my breath. He looked at me and quirked an eyebrow.
"Couldn't wait to see me, huh?"
"Get - over - your-self," I gasped and smiled slightly. I made a mad circling gesture with my hands to imply that I was trying to breath. He just stood there waiting for me to catch my breath and when I did, I struggled to make sense of what I was saying. How stupid did "I had a dream that Speed is gonna kill us" sound? I stumbled over my words a bit but I managed to say it as best I could.
"I had this-erm feeling, that Speed is going to do something to you and I was worried." I pouted to add effect. If he promised to avoid him all day I could stop worrying.
"Why would he do anything? Just because we've fallen out for a bit doesn't mean that he wants to kill me or anything," he argued and I wrapped my arms around him.
"But I have a really strong feeling."
"Don't worry about it, he won't do anything."
I sighed. I'll have to just be direct. Although believing dreams does sound slightly crazy but I do have this really bad feeling. The dream was so realistic.
"So, who's She?"
"Who?"
"You know, the girl that you and Speed know."
"What- Wait, are you accusing me of cheating on you? We've only been going out a few days! You can't say things like that till we're married or something-"
"No Lash, the one you work with."
"Oh, erm, what girl?"
"Tell me."
"She's just someone I agreed to help with something but when she told me what it meant doing, I refused because of you. Wait, how did you know about her?"
"Lash, I had a dream. It was so realistic and Speed came and killed you and then just before he killed me, he said, 'Shouldn't have betrayed us should he? I mean I know he's betrothed and all, but bringing all our plans to a halt because he got a crush? That's lame. So, I got sent to just, deliver a message to the rest of the gang. Don't mess with Her plans'. Then he killed me too. Which is why I had to find you quick. You may think that it's just a dream, but how did I know about Her if it was 'just a dream'?"
"Oh God, I didn't think she actually meant she'd get me back for refusing," he muttered.
"Good, you believe me, so you have to avoid Speed ok?"
"That may be easier said than done," someone whispered behind me. I jumped and turned around to be face to face with Speed.
"Woah! Back off Speed." Lash warned him and hurriedly pushed me behind him.
"Maybe I don't want to," Speed said simply and punched Lash with all his might. Lash flew back and landed on top of me. I gently pushed him off and he turned to face me.
"Love ya," he whispered and gave me a quick kiss before standing up to boldly fight Speed. It was so similar to my dream that I was terrified. What if he actually died? I watched in shock as Lash and Speed punched the life out of each other with Speed at a definite advantage because he was bigger and quicker. I heard a crunch as Speed punched Lash right on his nose and I yelped slightly. He was now pinned up against the locker and Speed was saying almost exactly what he said in my dream.
"Shouldn't have betrayed us should you? I mean I know you're betrothed and all, but bringing all our plans to a halt because you got a crush? That's lame." I started panicking. He was going to kill him! People were watching but no one was helping. No one wanted to deal with Speed. Especially since Lash couldn't. Speed whipped a small dagger out of his pocket and smirked devilishly. The knife shone in the light and he looked up at Lash.
"So, I got sent to just, deliver a message to the rest of the gang." He moved it closer to Lash and the worry on his face was showing. I had to do something! Before I knew it, I was sprinting towards Lash faster than ever before.
"Don't mess with Her plans." He lunged the knife forward at Lash and with a bit of interception on my behalf, it sliced through the wrong person. We were all laid on the floor but only one of us was bleeding out of their shoulder. At least it wasn't Lash, I thought as I fainted from the whole experience.
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