Note to reviewers from: magiclover14:

I magiclover14 would very much like to thank my reviewers. For people who read my story but have not reviewed please review. I would like to know the good and bad things in my stories so I can make it something that most people would enjoy reading. This is my first story ever on this site. Outside this site I write children's books that have not yet been published (and I doubt they will ever be published). I enjoy writing poetry as well as stories and have been thinking of adding some to the story for a twist, but it will not be for another few chapters when Charlie and Marie's wedding comes.

Don't worry about giving me criticism. I actually want it so I can know what I am doing wrong. Thank you.

Magiclover14