Me- What up y'all? JC7 is BACK with part 2 of chapter 5 of TUDP! YEA-AH!
Izzy- Same commentators, same humor, all new action.
Tai- Same humorous violence, same random stupidity, all new scripts.
Me- Nice delivery, boys!
Izzy and Tai- Thanks!
Me- Now, to answer the reviews I got from JyouraKoumi, Lord Pata, and Kingdom219.
JyouraKoumi- I'm with ya there! Koumi 4EVA! Glad ya like it. Betcha can't wait for chapter 6. Or maybe it'll be 7. We'll both hafta wait and see.
Lord Pata- Egg color changing, TK missing a shot. Judgment Day is coming! Well, maybe not. Actually, only God knows. What was I sayin'? Oh yeah, why is the egg color changing? What is with TK? Why did he miss a shot that I coulda and woulda made? And why am I askin' YOU all these questions especially when I know the answers! Read on to find out...
Kingdom219- I love keepin' people waiting. That's the fun of bein' a writer! So, exactly what IS this cloud? Actually, I don't know myself. But I will, sooner or later. Bet that's encouraging for you to keep reading, huh? I DO have an idea as to how the whole thing is incorperated. Read and see...
Mimi- Hey, you're forgetting something, JC!
Me- What?
Mimi- You haven't apologized for this chapter being two days late!
Me- Oh, right. Sorry guys but somethin' came up last weekend and I couldn't get this story in by my deadline. I promise, the next chapters will be on time. Promise!
Mimi- Yeah right. Your last chapter was late too!
Me- Come on, Mimi! I get busy this time of year.
Mimi- You said that you'd update every weekend and you went back on your word. TWICE! You can't be doing this to people, JC! It's no wonder BL hasn't reviewed yet!
Me- A, you forgot the 13. And 2, she's probably busy. I honestly don't mind if she reviews on time or not.
Mimi- This coming from the girl who doesn't put her chapters on time.
Me- Yyyyeeeeaaaahhhh. Okay then, well, um, Sora, take it away.
Sora- With what?
Me- Honestly, sometimes you're as dense as Tai.
Tai- Hey, I take offense to that remark!
Me- (sighs) Sora, any day now.
Sora- With what? Give a girl a clue here!
Me- Here's your clue. What is the 'supposed' point of the beginning commentary?
Sora- The disclaimer.
Me- That's right, Sora! Now, can you count past ten without using your toes?
Sora- Hey, that was mean! You're so full of it! I can't believe how mean you are to us, JC7! I can't believe none of us have mentioned it before!
Me- Haven't you read the fine print in your contract?
Sora- No.
Izzy- (whispers in Sora's ear)
Sora- Oh, right, um, JC7 doesn't own anything. Not Digimon, not us, and not the world.
Tai- Little do any of you know that reading this story shall take over your minds and you shall all do meaningless tasks for he- (gags)
Me- Y'all weren't supposed to hear that. Please, ignore what this MORON has just said. Continue, Izzy.
Izzy- Oh, um, well, um, I forgot my script.
Me- WHAT! You forgot your script! What's wrong with you, man! Are you INSANE!
Izzy- Is that a rhetorical question?
Me- (sigh) A'ight. Since this is part of the last chapter, just insert last chapter's disclaimer here, a'ight? Except for the part about me not ruling the world. I will do it, EVENTUALLY! Till then, let's continue with TUDP chapter 5 part 2!
JC7
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Last time, in TUDP...
Kari falls, TK cries(almost). TK misses, Izzy scores. Izzy's happy, Mimi's too. Mimi grins, Kaili's confused. Kaili touches, Egg changes. Egg does nothing else of importance, Ken sees something. Kari and Kaili see it too- If you want to know what happened last time, read the last half of the chapter, ya morons!
Mimi- Um, JC? It's not a good idea to call your readers morons.
Me- Whatever. Just read the dang story already.
The Untitled- You know the title by now! Unless you're a pshyco or you suffer from short-term memory loss...
Chapter 5 part 2- Read last half of chapter for sufficient info
Kari, Kaili, and Ken all watched the cloud dissapear. Tai, Izzy, and Mimi all watched nothing as, well, nothing dissapeared.
"Kari, what is going on? Nothing is there!" Tai shouted loudly, earning yet more disturbed glances.
"It only exists to those who have seen the darkness," Kaili whispered calmly.
"Kaili? You can talk perfectly!" Izzy stepped to his sister.
"I'm not technically Kaili. The light in Kari has allowed me, the Spirit of Light, to enter Kaili for a brief moment."
"Is this like what happened to Kari that time in the Digital World?" Mimi asked.
"Yes, that was when I had first entered her. That was to deliver you a message, if I remember correctly. Now, I have another message for you. You have battled far better than the Spirits could have imagined. Now, however, you are short one."
"What do you mean-"
"Let me finish, Izzy. One of you, one of the Chosen DigiDestineds, has been infected by a greater evil than what you have faced. This particular Chosen has lots of Darkness bottled inside, making this Destined vulnurable enough to accept the evil."
"Wh-"
"The Crest of Knowledge was given correctly. The knowledge you crave, Izzy, will be given to you. Just let me finish. Only two can defeat the one infected. Only those two have the strength to defeat the infection. Now you can ask your questions, Izzy."
"Who was infected and who can stop the one?"
"I'm afraid that I cannot answer those questions. I only know of this because the Spirit of Hope saw this and was able to pass the information along to me."
"Only Hope saw this? Then, could the one be TK that is in trouble?"
"Mimi, for the moment, any of you could be the one. We Spirits travel amongst you, able to know when a danger lurks. Unfortunately, we cannot always warn you. Otherwise, we would have given Wizardmon the knowledge to warn you of Malomyotismon."
"How did he know of the 'golden radience' in the beginning?"
"Patience, Izzy. I was getting to that. He knew of it because of one of the Spirits who had not been given a name or Crest yet. This particular Spirit was able to get to Wizardmon and give him the information. Unfortunately, that Spirit, my sister Spirit, did not know of Malomyotismon yet. Yes, Izzy?"
"I have a few questions to ask. One, what is the name of the other Spirit? Two, will there be a 13th DigiDestined with the Crest of this Spirit? Three, how was this particular Spirit able to get to Wizardmon? Four, what do you mean 'Sister Spirit'? And five, if there is a 13th DigiDestined, do we need to start looking for him or her and, if you know, who is it?"
"You ask so much that even I, nor any other Spirits, know the answers to. You have a wise mind, Izzy that far surpasses my own. Now, to answer your questions. One, I cannot give out that information. I will explain why in a moment. Two, I am not authorized to answer this and I will explain that as well. Three, no one really knows that. Four, because, just as Knowledge and Reliability are linked within Cody, as Love and Sincerity are linked within Yolei, Friendship and Courage are linked within Davis, and Hope and Light are linked in the hearts of Kari and TK, this Spirit and Light are linked. Just so you know, all of the Spirits are linked to one another, but these are fully establishes links that have produced results in Cody, Yolei, and Davis. And five, I am not authorized to give these answers, and even if I was, I would not be able to."
"Why can't you and how are all of the Spirits linked to eachother?"
"If Patience was a Crest and Spirit, they would not beong to you, Izzy. I cannot answer any of the remaining questions, for it is the duty of the Chosen Destineds to learn it for yourselfs. I am sorry, but my time here in your world is limited and I only have a few moments before Digital Idol comes on. Oh snap, I've already missed the first 5 minutes! The Spirit of Sincerity bet me 5 digibucks that Gotsumon'll lose! I've gotta make sure that he doesn't! Well, better not miss any more of it. Goodbye and Good Luck!"
With that, the Spirit of Light left Kaili and went to wherever He/She/It lived and watched Digital Idol, as Simonmon eliminated a Gotsumon, a Honeybeemon, and a Floramon, and Paulamon praised them all blindly. The Spirit of Light handed over 5 digidollars angrily when Gotsumon left.
Kari looked at Kaili, who laid, sleeping, on the ground. She somehow knew that Kaili's knowledge and her ability to see that, uh, cloud thingy-majig, was linked to what the Spirit of Light had said.
"Kari? I think that we'd better go hom-" Tai started, before neing interrupted by Kari.
"I think that now would be a good time to have a DigiDestined meeting. We can meet at the park once I've called the others. " Everyone agreed with her. Kari nodded and pulled her cell phone and D-Terminal out simultaneously and started e-mailing and calling everyone else. She e-mailed TK, not ready to talk to him, afraid that he was angry with her. Which wasn't totally off, after that weird voice thing in his head and all.
-My first break in this particular part of this particular chapter. Yay! Oh yeah, um, what goes here again? Oh yeah. Ahem, at the park exactly 23.31 minutes later-
Everyone was there except Davis and Demiveemon. Tai, Agumon, Sora, Yokomon, Matt, and Tsunomon sat on one bench, Izzy, Mimi, Kaili, Tentomon, and Tanemon shared another bench, Yolei, Kari, Cody, Gatomon, Poromon, and Upamon were each on a swing, Joe, Ken, Wormmon, and Gomamon stood towards the side, and TK leaned against a tree, Patamon on his head. Why am I describing where everyone was standing and sitting? I don't know.
Mimi sighed and twirled a finger through her hair. She was bored. Kaili finally got so fed up that she got up and started playing on the monkey bars nearby. Tentomon followed her, making sure she wouldn't fall. Not that he needed to; she had always been good on the monkey bars; but he did anyway, mostly out of boredom.
"Kari, can we start already? I'm bored waiting here for Davis. You know he won't show up until after we start," Gatomon said.
"I know, but we still have to wai-" Kari started.
"Hey guys! Sorry we're late. Wait, you haven't started yet. I'm on time! Finally!" Davis said.
"Nice try, gogglelamo, but we've been waiting here for you for almost 15 minutes," TK said.
"Aw man!"
"Moron," TK muttered, rolling his eyes.
Yes, he is a sort of a moron, isn't he? He'll be easiest to take down.
Shut up.
"Okay, I guess Izzy can say his thing first, since I don't know what to say," Kari said, shrugging.
"But you called this meeting," Sora pointed out.
"Yeah, but Izzy knows the most about what's goin' on," Kari shrugged again.
"Alright now. Let's just calm down-"
"Who died and made you leader, Tai?"
"Watch it, hair-boy."
"That's MR Hair-Boy to you, soccer head!
"Self-obsessed, big band WANNABE!"
"That's it. You're goin' down!" Matt got ready to tackle Tai before Izzy and Mimi held him back. Joe and Sora held Tai back while Kari sighed. Davis, Yolei, Cody, and Ken backed away while everyone's partner sweatdropped. Overall, it was pandemonium at the park.
TK shook his head.
And these are the people who are supposed to be protectors of the Digital World? Ha! Someone get me some water, I'm dyin' of laughter h-
Would you just shut up already!
Make me!
Why the heck are you in my head anyway?
"TK, I know you're mad at me, but will you please get these guys off of me so I can beat the crap outta Tai? C'mon, help your brother out!"
TK glanced at him, who looked at TK innocently. He supressed a laugh as he looked over at Kari. She looked back at him and shook her head. He nodded and went back to his tree, not stopping to help Matt. Matt glared at his brother, who rolled his eyes in response. Tai grinned, knowing that he had an advantage. He pulled himself out of Sora and Joe's grasp and just about tackled Matt, that is, until Gomamon tripped him. Tai landed on the ground hard while everyone laughed.
"The things our partners do," Gatomon sighed, shaking her head. Tanemon and Biyomon nodded in agreement. Well, sorta, Tanemon sorta jumped and shook her body up and down as best as she could, as she was pretty much just a head.
"Alright. Now that everyone's done tripping, can we please get this meeting started?" Izzy asked.
-I don't need to describe the meeting in detail, they pretty much told everyone else what was goin' on with the Spirit of Light and everyone got confuzzled. Overall, it was pretty boring and isn't worth mentioning. So, now that the meeting's over-
TK unlocked his door and walked in. His mom was working late as usual. He took off his shoes and walked to the fridge. He looked in and sighed.
"There's nothin' worth eating in here. I almost wish I'd said yes to eatin' at MAtt's tonight. Almost," he said.
"Hey, TK? What's wrong? You seem sad about something," Patamon said, conceren about his partner.
"Nothin's really wrong, Patamon. I just forgot to apologize to Kari for walkin' out on her earlier today. Not to mention we have nothing to eat."
"Oh. I can solve one problem!" Patamon said happily. He picked up the phone and gave it to TK, who looked at it, confused.
"You expect me to eat a phone!"
"No, I meant call Kari! She's probably not mad, remember the Digital World incident yesturday? You were mad over nothing!"
"This one's not nothing, Patamon. You don't understand all the details," TK sighed, finding a coke in the back of the fridge. It hasn't gone past the expiration date, so it oughta still be good, he thought, opening it and taking a drink. I guess it's okay. Not the world's best coke, but hey, it's better that Mrs. Kamiya's beef jerky shakes.
"I'd understand if you'd tell me, TK."
"Huh? Tell you what?"
"Don't play the stupid card, TK."
"Who's playin'? Wait, that didn't come out right-"
"C'mon, TK! Seriously, what happened?"
"Honestly, I don't really remember. Happy?"
"No, cuz I know that you're lying."
"Oh yeah? How do you figure that?"
"Only cuz you always double blink when you lie. Always."
"Darnit, I've been caught."
"What'd you say?"
"Huh? Oh, uh nothing."
"There it is! You did it again!"
"Did what again?"
"The double blink!"
"Uh, can we start at the beginning?"
"Nevermind, TK. But will you make up with Kari soon? Gatomon promised that she'd give me her next dance lesson!"
"Yeah, I'll talk to her tomorrow. That okay with you?"
"Yep! Boy, Gatomon'll be suprised when she finds out I can dance as good as her now!"(A/N- You'll be happy about that remark, eh Lord Pata? )
TK rolled his eyes as his partner started practicing his dancing. Honestly Patamon, her lessons haven't done much.
Yeah. He does stink, huh?
Hey, I never said that-
No, but you thought it.
Sure, right. And my partner's a flying pig.
There's the proof right there!
He's not a pig. He's more of a flying hamster or something. Not a pig, per se.
Sure, right. And you're talking to a weird voice in your head.
There's the proof right there!
That's my line and you don't really think that it's weird that your only friend is a voice in your head?
Hey, my best friend-
Is mad at you. But she shouldn't be. Think about it, she's the one who made you cry like a baby. She never apologized. She hasn't called to apologize yet. She-
I get the point and you're wrong. I shouldn't have walked out on her, especially when her life is probably in danger.
She deserved it. You're just letting your feelings for her get in the way. Build up a resistence and you'll see what I'm talking about...
What are you talking about? Wait, I'm talking to a voice in my head. If people found out about this, that'd grant me a straitjacket for life.
And that, my dear TK, is my point.
Oh, now you're nice to me.
Hey, I'm just telling the truth! It's not my fault that you can't take a little critisism.
I can take criticism, it's rudeness and evil that I can't take.
Alright, fine, I'll give you that point. But you're the one who thinks the world is against you. On that point though, you'd be right.
The world's against me? What do ya mean by that!
Only that the world is only there to anger you. You'd be better off ruling it, not having it try and crush you.
Which world?
The Digital World, of course! What, you think I'm talkin' about your world? Heck no!
No, I didn't think that-
Remember, I'm in your head. I know what you're thinking in the back of your mind. You thought that I meant your world, didn't you?
No, I didn't and I'd appreciate it if-
"TK, your mom's home! And she's got groceries!
I'll let you get back to your life. Just remember what I said, about you being better off ruling it instead of it ruling you...
"Hey, TK? Would you give me a hand and open the door?" TK's mom asked.
"I'll be in your room, TK," Patamon whispered, sneaking off.
-Kari's house, after dinner. Wow, that's the first time I didn't get off topic in a break in the story! BLAST! I did it again! Oh well, Kari's house, after torture time which they used to call dinner-
Kari finished washing the dishes. She left Tai to put them up, which he never did. She said that she'd never do his chores and she kept her word on that. Still, it was hard to see Tai getting yelled at for not doing his chores. She put them on the dishrack and watched some water trickle down the plate. It's just like that ear that fell down TK's because of me, Kari thought. She sighed as she went back to her bedroom.
Maybe I oughta call him. But then he'll hang up on me. No, better apologize in person tomorrow, she finally decided as she changed into her pjs. Gatomon was already curled up at the foot of Kari's bed.
"Hey Kari? You are making up with TK tomorrow, right?" Gatomon asked.
"Yeah, why?"
"Well, tomorrow, I promised Patamon that I'd teach him to dance some more."
"Don't worry, Gatomon. I won't ruin your lesson plans."
"Good. Patamon neds all the practice he can get. It was easy teaching you, cuz you already have natual grace, like me. Patamon doesn't have that natural grace, however. Not many digimon do, it was pretty much just me and Wizardmon." A few tears formed in Gatomon's eyes as she remembered a certain time. She blinked them away and grinned.
"I remember the time that I taught Wizardmon to dance. He was really bad at first, but he got better. It was fun teaching him though, much more fun than trying to destroy your brother."
"What happened, Gatomon? Tell me about it!" Kari's eyes lit up, hoping to hear another story about Wizardmon. Gatomon enjoyed telling them and Kari enjoyed hearing them.
"Okay! Well, we were really bored, cuz Myotismon had already sent out Gotsumon and Pumpkinmon on a scouting mission. They were goof-offs and good at lifting the spirits of everyone, except Myotismon. And Demidevimon, but he was too far gone. So anyway, I started dancing around for the fun of it. Wizardmon tried to join in, but he tripped over my tail. He wasn't hurt. After tripping, he just said, 'Apparently, I need lessons. Want to teach me, Gatomon?' I said that I would and then I tried teaching him. It wasn't easy; he tripped about 5 times before actually starting to get the hang of it. Even then, he still had trouble. Once he got it though, I tried teaching him a really hard step. He did it right the first time, but fell the second time. The third time, he slipped on a pebble, did a front flip, and landed on his back. Instead f getting mad about not getting it right away, he just said, 'Guess I need some more practice.' Then he laughed as I helped him back up and tried teaching him again. After a while, he got the hang of it. He had real grace, except for all thr tripping he did."
Gatomon and Kari laughed. They both had loved Wizardmon, although Kari only knew him as the 'mon who saved he life. Still, it was stories like this that kept her from forgetting him. Not that she could, but at least she'd never remember Wizardmon as just the serious soul she had thought at their first meeting. She now knew him as a good-natured, kind, gentle digimon with a good sense of humor and a good heart. Kari knew why Gatomon had been so close to him; who wouldn't be, after all, he had all the qualities of a good friend and a loyal hero.
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Me- Man, this ending was sweet and sad, the story about Wizardmon.
Mimi- But you made it up!
Me- It still coulda happened! If it did, then it would be yet another Wizardmon-related thing that makes me cry.
Izzy- Like you're doing now?
Me- No, I, uh, just, uh, got something in my eye, t-that's all! (bursts into tears)
Sora- Aww, that's okay, JC7. We all love Wizardmon.
Me- I just wish he could have been reformatted! He wouldn't have been a hero if he hadn't have died, but if maybe, instead of the 25 years later thing, they showed Wizardmon being reformatted along with the Digital World when Oikawa died, that would've been the greatest thing. I know I'm not the only one that thinks so (coughBlackLily13cough)
Tai- He was a great digimon. I just wish I had known him and trusted him earlier.
Me- I wish I'd known him at all. Wizardmon is a hero to the Digital World. He died so that Myotismon could have been killed. It kinda reminds me of Christ on the cross and how He died for me and the world. Of course, Jesus' sacrifice was so much better, but in the Digital World, Wizardmon's sacrifice is great.
Izzy- Yeah, I know what you mean.
Tai- Yeah, Wizardmon is a great hero to all DigiKind.
Mimi- And Jesus is a revolutionary, Savior, and Blessing to all who receive Him.
Sora- That's a lot of truth in this particular commentary. For once, no one gets beat up. We just speak lots of truth.
Me- Amen to that, sistah! Amen to that.
Tai- Well, as we remember the great hero and the great Savior,
Izzy- We wish you a happy life,
Mimi- Love, friendship, courage, hope, knowledge, light, reliability, kindness, and sincerity through Christ and His love,
Sora- God bless all of you.
Me- Yeah, what they said. God bless you in all that you doin your lives.
JC7
PS- I know that not everyone is Christian. Don't take this commentary as me forcing my beliefs down your throught(how do you spell that?), just think of it as a refreshing interlude between chapters. That was the point of it, to encourage you through all you do in your life, that, even if you don't believe in Him, that Someone is alway watching out for you. If I offend anyone, I'm sorry. Any offense is unintentional. If I did offend anyone, let me know in your review so that I don't make anyone feel bad again. God bless y'all!
JC7(again)