Only FOUR MORE REVIEWS UNTIL I REACH 100! WHOO HOOO! Thanks so so so so so so so so MUCH!
Chiara Sholuk: Hey! That's not such a bad idea! That'd be cool! I just hope it's allowed... I don't know. I don't want to risk this story getting deleted over such a small error.
RavenRulzRF: Will put that in, as always! Thanks!
korrd: Hey, you're back! Almost thought you'd forgotten about this story for a sec... anyways, you said no Obi-Wanno Getting off Tattoine for Luke? Well, I think I can come up with a solution which you maybe forgot about: Captain Han Solo Luke gets off Tatooine. Hmm? Wait and see, Luke is in this chapter! And don't worry about it, Luke WILL get off Tatooine! And Obi's not gone yet, either!
ILUVZIM: (Sniffles) Thanks so much! That was really sweet of you to say! Great ideas for the dialouge, I'll try to put some of those in there! Thank you!
Angel Sanada: Why thank you! Hope you like this chapter!
Jinn Twins: Yayy! You're back! Great ideas, I love the paint ballon fight idea! HA HA HA! I'll put that in sometime, too!
phylitr: Changing the babie's diapers, he he he! Great idea! Mara and Luke will be meeting, I think, in a sequel to this story, and they will fall in love. Or do you think I should make this one long story? I don't know. Suggestions are helpful!
Celtic Cross: Yeah, so sorry about that! But Luke is in this one! Yay!
Typewritter 15: Yeah, if only she knew... don't worry, she will someday in the future of this story!
AHEM. (Clears throat) AND NOOOWWW... THE MOMENT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR... ANOTHER WONDERFUL EPISODE OF... REVIEWERS TORTURING SITH LORDS! TA DAA! (Another Random Gong Rings) Ahem. ANYWAYS! Onwards! All right, let's get down to business, people! Lots of things for the Sith to do today.. such as... let's see.. oh right, Chiara, you're first!
Chiara: Yay! OK, I want them to... umm... need some more suggestions!
Raven: Ooh, I got some! Chiara, if I may? (Chiara nods) OK! Maul, go bonk your head until you pass out.
Maul: I really don't like any of you.
Tela: Get over it! Palps, you have to fix the AC in the Jedi Temple. It doesn't work.
Palps: I hate you.
Angel: And I don't like you, so GET MOVING!
Palps: RATS!
Jar Jar: Whersa de ratsies? Mesa no liken da ratsies, deysa scareses mesa!
Shut up! (Slams door in Jar Jar's face, causing babies to wake up)
phylitr: Ooh, go change the babies' diapers!
Zim: And then you have to go be animal pooper scoopers at the Coruscant zoo! And Palps, I got biology tonight! (rubs hands together evilly)
Celt: Brilliant! After that, they can be targets for blaster practice, take my dogs for a ten mile run, and do my research paper, and then wash all the skyscraper windows on Corry! Mwa ha ha!
Yavie Jinn: (screams at Maul) MEEP! (Pokes him evilly, and all reviewers laugh)
Maul: Heeeelllp!
Sorry, buds, no can do!
Dooku: (stares at babies) AWW MAN! I had enough trouble with them the last darned time!
OK, friends, let's get back to Elena, why don't we? The Sith have A LOT of work to do...(laughs)
Disclaimer: See other chapter.
Chapter 24 (I think) Oh, and by the way, I know it didn't show up on the chapter, ARGH! but I WAS going to suggest that you try out WOOKIEEPEDIA! (Wookieepedia) It's great! Hope it shows up on the chapter...
Leia stared at her.
Elena blanched for a second. Uh-oh, what if she heard me?
"So, are you going to take this back or what?" Leia said, holding the lightsaber out to her.
Elena took it cautiously, eyeing Leia carefully. The other said nothing but went over to where the other girls were.
"All right, time for bed, everyone," Jenson called out.
The girls groaned but followed him reluctantly to Elena's bedroom, where they changed into their nightclothes and almost instantly fell asleep.
Elena closed her eyes, sighed, and immediately felt herself getting drowsier. Five minutes later, she unexpectedly found herself on a balcony, overlooking a beautiful lake, which was surrounded by tall mountains. She looked around, seeing if anybody was around, when she remembered that this was a dream. But a very vivid one.
She turned around and headed down some steps onto a rather large patio, which also overlooked the lake. A sound startled her, and she unconsciously reached for her lightsabers, and was surprised to find that they were there. She was shocked when a boy, who looked to be about her age, standing behind her.
He was a bit taller than she, with sandy blonde hair, a handsome, well looking face, and bright blue eyes. He looked startlingly like her father had. He stared at her for a second, unsure of what to say.
"Uh..." Elena stammered, "Hi, I'm Elena."
"Luke," he finally managed to say. "I'm Luke Skywalker."
Elena's jaw dropped. "Luke Skywalker?" she echoed in shock.
He nodded. "Yeah. Are you a Jedi?" he glanced at her lightsabers.
"Um, sort of," she replied, "I'm training."
"Is this some kind of dream or vision?" he asked uncomfortably. "I don't know who you are at all, or what I'm doing here."
Elena finally gathered up the courage to say, "My full name is Elena Skywalker. I'm your twin sister."
He stared at her. "But... I have no sister!" he insisted.
She sighed and sat down. "OK, Luke, take a seat. I have a lot of things to tell you." She then went into full detail about how she had been a slave, and how they had been separated from each other at birth. She also told him that he could also have the potential to become a Jedi, and finally, she told him who his father really was.
"I still can't believe my father is Darth Vader," he said shakily, trying to register it all in.
"But you know what I've said is true," Elena said pleadingly. "I wouldn't lie to you, Luke, and I don't know how it is that we can talk to each other, being so far away. But you have the same powers as I do."
"I wish there was some way you could teach me what you know," Luke mused.
Elena glanced down at her lightsabers. "Hey, why don't I show you right now!" she said, standing up. "I don't know if we'll get a chance to speak again, but I've got my lightsabers right here!"
Luke stood up as well. "Good idea," he replied, "Now I'll get to..." he suddenly noticed a lightsaber on a nearby table. It hadn't been there before, but it was there now. "Where did that come from?" he asked.
Elena shrugged. "The Force works in mysterious ways," she grinned. "Now come on, flyboy, let's get this show on the road!"
After she showed him a few moves, they continued to talk about their pasts. Suddenly, Elena felt herself waking up, and she opened her eyes to find herself back in her old room.
Ah, blast, she thought, irritated. I have a brother and I can't even talk with him in the real world. Annoyed, she climbed out of bed and got dressed, everyone else still asleep.
She found her way down to the combat room and took her lightsabers, loving the feel of them. She then ignited them, clicked them together so that they became a double bladed lightsaber, and swung them around for a bit. After that, she mediated until she sensed that her friends were waking up.
Elena went back into the room, where the girls had started a pillow fight. She laughed and Force grabbed a pillow, joining in the game. When they had finished, they went downstairs and had some breakfast.
Well that was that chapter.. Ok... how we doin, Zim?Zim: Great!
Angel: (sees Sabe and Jar Jar alive) Wha... Auntie Sabe! Jar Jar! (Smiles happily) You're alive! But Palps still has to pay for what he did to my family...(giggles softly) Too bad Vader doesn't know it.
Yavie Jinn: MEEEP!
Maul: NOT AGAIN! NOOOO!
Everyone: (laughs heartily)
Chiara: That's the way to tell 'em!
Celt: (sees Palps finishing washing the skyscrapers, moaning about his back) Yeah, work it Palps!
(Everyone walks in to find an unconscious Darth Maul on the floor and Jedi Qui-Gon Jinn standing over him)
Yavie: WHOO! Qui-Gon!
Qui-Gon: Why hello, Yavie! Good to see you! (glances at Maul) He was like this when I got here, I swear!
(Tela walks over and kicks Maul, so Maul wakes up and Force pushes Tela and Yavie into the wall)
Tela and Yavie: You shouldn't have done that. (They get out their lightsabers and charge at Maul, and Qui-Gon does the same)
Maul: (whimpers) Mommy!
Raven: Let's leave them to it, shall we?
phylitr: Fantastic idea, Raven!
Let's
zip, people! (Everyone walks out, whistling merrily) Oh, and people,
this tale is by no means over! Review and find out what happens next!
