Me : Hey! Wazup y'all! Reviewers
GoingGhost : Excellent story.Need to read more.
Me : thank u, thank u!
wishing for rain : stupid dumb cliffie, well saying that would be hipicrtical -probly not spelled right- because i myself do this every chapter so i'm sitting on the edge of my seat so hurry up and update plez
Me : hehehehehe
LaBOBuren : HERE'S A TOAST, TO ONE REVIEW CLOSER TO AN UPDATE! YAY! Yeah... ignore me, I had sugar... BWAHAHAHAHA:chainsaw noises:Hey, guess what I've got behind my back!Well, those 100s obviously weren't in english class, because, J.K. Rowling is one of the most well known authors in the english-speaking world. :P
Me : LOL ur right they weren't! but i got a 98 in ELA!LOL o well i hate english anyways!hehehehehehhehehhe
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet: ROTFL!GO JACK!Danny needs to show up in ghost mode.:DLOL!
Me : o yes he does!
purrbaby101 : Great job! It is so going to me Vlad. Duh! lol Keep going!
Me : (eyes begin to water) is it obvious! WAH! u guys r good guessers. a little too good.
KaliAnn : Interesting but could be better
Me : thanx, i think... Well srry for the wait, i DO have a life other than fanfiction, i think...maybe im not sure i had a writers block then came up w/ a GREAT IDEA!
Here's Chapter 8!
Jack's POV
I couldn't believe this! My dad was halfa too! Well that would explain how got my powers in the first place, but still! WOHOO! I looked around to see if anyone was watching. I went ghost and flew outside. I couldn't wait to tell Christy and T.J.! I looked around at the deserted city, I didn't see any ghosts, but still my ghost sense was going off crazy! Then a ball of ectoplasm blasted meout of no where. It took me in to a brickwall and I fell. I got up and rubbed my head, where did that come from? My question was answered when I heard someone laughing evilly above me. I looked up exspecting to see a ghost but instead, I saw nothing.
"Where are you!" I asked, looking around, but all I could hear was the echoing of the evil laughter. I got up and looked around me, then I was in a totally different area. There were broken down brick walls and buildings. It was like every thing was burnt down or broken. Then Vlad materialized in front of me.
"Boo."
"AHH!" I yelled and jumped as far as possible away from him. At first I thought I heard someone say my real name and looked in the direction where i thought t was coming from. But i just let it go. Besides we're not in Amity Park anymore.
"A little jumpy, aren't we?" he laughed and floated towards me. I crawled backwards into a brickwall.
"Do you like this new power?" he grabbed my throat,"I can send anyone I want to any place I want." He flung my body into a different brickwall on the other side of the burnt down city. My face stuck to the wall from impact and I pulled it out. I could here himflying towards me. I formed a ball of ectoplasm in my hand and waited for the right time.
"I told you I'd be back!" He was about to throw a punch at me, but I beat him to it. He fell to the ground. Then I let go of my blast and he fell further.
With Danny!
As soon as Jack left his ghost sense went off. He went ghost and flew out of his home and he looked around. Danny could see a ghost flying above Amity searching for something. He had a suit like his, but the colors were allrearranged, and his hair was both black and white. Not knowing that that boy was his son Danny blasted him and flew towards him intangible. Danny could see Vlad, invisible, flying towards the boy, and he followed. Vlad turned his head slightly and smirked. He snapped his fingers and then all three halfas were in a different area. (if u've seen Spiderman 1 in theend of the movie when Peter find out that Norman Osborn is the Green Goblin and then he dies...well i suck at decribing places so just imangine this!)
Vlad showed up in front of the boy and he yelled.
"Jack..." I trailed off. Then the boy turned to my direction and dove out of the way to keep hidden. It did sort of look like him, but...I would need real proof. For all I know this guy could be millions of years old.
They started launching blasts at eachother, that Phantom kid was pretty good but he was getting beat up pretty badly.I could see him charging up a blast while Vlad was flying towards him. Then he punched Vlad and hit him with the blast.'Owch! That's gotta hurt!'
The area we were in then faded and we were back in Amity Park. Ghosts were every where! People's shouts and screams could be heard from half way around the world. Vladrubbed his head and flew off. 'What is he doind?' But that was the least of my worries.There were buildings burning from ectoplasmic flames. Sirens got louder as the firetrucks approched trying to put out the fire. A piercing scream was heard over all the rest. The Phantom boy and Ilooked up to the sky. Vlad smirked at us while holding up a blonde teen by the throat.
"Give up Phantom or the one you love shall perish!"
Does anyone know who that blonde teen is? Whoever does will get a DP action figure!
