Angela: ... Wow. Three Reviews already. I'm touched, really. People actually liked the poem. Cool. I have others... But no one seemed to realize who it was speaking, or who he was speaking too. That's ok. I should mention though that some of my later on poems are about a YGO OC, just not the first few.

Review Repsonses:

RoseGoddes872: I'd be glad to check them out sometime. Just not at the moment, I'm in the Writing Center in school, and class is about to end. But thanks. My English teacher loved all of these that I wrote.

pharoh atemu: Once again, thank you! And as I said to Rose, I will tonight at the library, ok?
-smiles-

Sami Ryou's Hikari: I've read them before, actually. I just never got a chance to review. I liked the lullaby though. I write little lullabies alot, actually. They usually end up full of sorrow and pain anyway. It's seems I'm a natural angstish person. My life is an angst book. -sigh- Anyway. Not everything I write is pain filled and angst. I have a few funny poems, and funny little one-shot humor fics I haven't posted yet. -smiles-

Ok. Here is the next one, I think it's clear who is talking about who?

(poem start)

Someone Once Told Him.

Someone once held him close to them
Someone once wiped his tears away
Someone once said it's okay,
And they chased the Dark away
Someone once told him never to cry,
They told him never to lie
And when she went away,
He remembered everyday
He locked his heart deep inside,
Too deep to find again
He had everything soon after
Through lying and cheating,
But it wasn't enough to heal his soul,
Wasn't enough to truly feel whole
Now he's lying there all alone,
Feeling empty and sad
Inside he's dead,
Or so he's said
But I know the
Truth of why
Because
Someone once told him never to cry
And never to lie,
But someone once lied to him
And that someone once died for him
But no one ever told him
Why...

(end)

Angela: ... Ok. How was this one? Good, bad? What? Reviews welcome, and so is critiscism, if it's not cruel and you tell me what you think is wrong. And those who can guess who is saying this about who, will get a plushie of Bakura and Seto.